From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 00:00:13 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4F14116A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EC6D813C4C5 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l6100CrI092188 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:12 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l6100Chf092187; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:12 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:12 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707010000.l6100Chf092187@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Benjamin Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 14CDD16A400 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:51:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D477313C455 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:51:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l5UNpFi7001908 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:51:15 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l5UNpFXL001907; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:51:15 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200706302351.l5UNpFXL001907@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:51:15 GMT From: Benjamin Kaduk To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114178: hyphenation nit in handbook (install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Benjamin Kaduk List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 00:00:13 -0000 >Number: 114178 >Category: docs >Synopsis: hyphenation nit in handbook (install chapter) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:00:11 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: stand-alone takes a hyphen (or is written standalone). >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-post.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @@ -3192,7 +3182,7 @@ NFS. An NFS server makes file systems available to other machines on the network via the NFS protocol. If this is - a stand alone machine, this option can remain unselected. + a stand-alone machine, this option can remain unselected. The system may require more configuration later; see for more information about client and server configuration. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 00:00:14 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1BE7316A46B for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D4DBE13C4CB for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l6100DuJ092223 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:13 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l6100D7f092218; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:13 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:00:13 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707010000.l6100D7f092218@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, minimarmot@gmail.com Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5C4AF16A421 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:57:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1A39113C4AD for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:57:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l5UNv0Cj002002 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:57:00 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l5UNuxp6002001; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:56:59 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200706302356.l5UNuxp6002001@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:56:59 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114179: outdated phrase (prefers MS-DOS to Windows) in handbook (install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: minimarmot@gmail.com List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 00:00:14 -0000 >Number: 114179 >Category: docs >Synopsis: outdated phrase (prefers MS-DOS to Windows) in handbook (install chapter) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:00:12 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: The handbook mentions people wishing to dual-boot with MS-DOS. Most people who dual boot these days are dual-booting with some form of Windows. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-trouble.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @@ -3884,7 +3874,7 @@ The following section covers basic installation troubleshooting, such as common problems people have reported. There are also a few questions and answers for people wishing to dual-boot FreeBSD with - &ms-dos;. + &ms-dos; or &windows;. What to Do If Something Goes Wrong >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 00:09:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC3CD16A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:09:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from py-out-1112.google.com (py-out-1112.google.com [64.233.166.180]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 782CB13C44C for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:09:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by py-out-1112.google.com with SMTP id u77so2177279pyb for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 17:09:03 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=U15dyzjdvHlBNS2BgmHRXEvvyYzcQMZ9J7/qXzTND2AtPTEiTaaqRFPErukj46Jb2H72y0Noi5lFc27eyuigvyq+VpreHTR1ZhJRdAYuIStOlBd4ab45cOcnvX5uFSfJPPmbrGcY568IpqE3GBzXC2aBbGFrCeM+VIgAMRRiKS4= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=Z/WlTptP19sEIJD7o4wJZoyNWio4YQZkl1w51gkMcAP/IGgkWq6D2FjiCnhUbGfAmcZPcD0ygxf8njGKyjDZfYyH8+NqdRGQffAD6KM0Kodr5BlUFhCRSiMr2PTg7YgcUpRmeYwNZf7J0XpsyvsWurV7oskGSKEo96bzgw6AgkY= Received: by 10.143.162.8 with SMTP id p8mr270141wfo.1183248542236; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 17:09:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.1.8 with HTTP; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 17:08:57 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0706301708u597f8608o233c8d717f74a3b5@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:08:57 +0000 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: <200706302337.l5UNb8rx001727@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <200706302337.l5UNb8rx001727@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Subject: Re: docs/114176: readability improvement to handbook install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 00:09:04 -0000 Sorry, I was in a hurry writing up the PR and forgot to change my email address Also forgot on 114177 and 114178 -Ben Kaduk On 6/30/07, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > > >Number: 114176 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: readability improvement to handbook install chapter > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Sat Jun 30 23:40:02 GMT 2007 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 > >Organization: > >Environment: > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > > > >Description: > When viewing the handbook online, in the section on allocating disk space, > there is a table describing a partitioning scheme for installing FreeBSD. > However, in this table, the ``b'' partition is the only one which has a > multi-paragraph description. This can cause confusion, as the vertical > separation between rows of the table is approximatly the same as the > separation between pararaphs, and the first paragraph describing the swap > partition begins ``this partition''. I propose to make explicit which > partition is being referred to, instead of relying on the user to > correctly parse our table (which perhaps does not render as well as > it could). > >How-To-Repeat: > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-steps.html > >Fix: > > --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 > +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 > @@ -1725,7 +1714,8 @@ > > 2-3 x RAM > > - The system's swap space is kept on this partition. > + The system's swap space is kept on the > + bpartition. > Choosing the right amount of swap space can be a bit of an > art. A good rule of thumb is that your swap > space should be two or three times as much as the > > > >Release-Note: > >Audit-Trail: > >Unformatted: > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 00:30:10 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3F6D116A421 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:30:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 07E3913C48C for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:30:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l610U9xQ095027 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:30:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l610U9x8095026; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:30:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:30:09 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707010030.l610U9x8095026@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, minimarmot@gmail.com Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ACD8616A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:24:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F86813C48A for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:24:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l610NfTT002167 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:23:41 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l610NeiM002166; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:23:40 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200707010023.l610NeiM002166@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:23:40 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114180: readability note in handbook/install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: minimarmot@gmail.com List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 00:30:10 -0000 >Number: 114180 >Category: docs >Synopsis: readability note in handbook/install chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:30:04 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: The handbook refers to MS-DOS based file systems. Some of us know these filesystems as FAT16 and FAT32 -- we should be able to afford a few more words. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-trouble.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @@ -3972,7 +3995,8 @@ located in the Start> Programs< /guimenuitem> > System Tools menu. - &os; can support &ms-dos; based file systems. This requires you use + &os; can support &ms-dos;-based file systems (FAT16 and FAT32). + This requires you use the &man.mount.msdosfs.8; command with the required parameters. The utility most common usage is: >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 00:50:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 563FA16A469 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:50:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3462713C483 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:50:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l610o4wZ097911 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:50:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l610o4ea097910; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:50:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:50:04 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707010050.l610o4ea097910@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, minimarmot@gmail.com Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2D87916A421 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:43:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E040113C46A for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:43:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l610gK9d002278 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:42:20 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l610gKmB002277; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:42:20 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200707010042.l610gKmB002277@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:42:20 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114181: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: minimarmot@gmail.com List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 00:50:04 -0000 >Number: 114181 >Category: docs >Synopsis: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:50:03 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: The handbook unequivocially decrees that the project makes available two CDROM images as part of each release. This isn't really true, though -- for one thing, there are N images per architecture. Additionally, we have a miniinst.iso as well as disc1 and disc2. Ken Smith recently noted that the amd64 monthly snapshots have been overflowing disc1 (without packages), so I don't know if that will push out a disc 3 as well. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @@ -4212,8 +4236,9 @@ Creating an Installation CDROM - As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available two - CDROM images (ISO images). These images can be written + As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available + at least two CDROM images (ISO images) per + supported architecture. These images can be written (burned) to CDs if you have a CD writer, and then used to install FreeBSD. If you have a CD writer, and bandwidth is cheap, then this is the easiest way to install FreeBSD. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:00:14 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9735316A476 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:00:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 18B4B13C4BC for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:00:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l6110BcX098743 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:00:11 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l6110BX5098741; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:00:11 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:00:11 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707010100.l6110BX5098741@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, minimarmot@gmail.com Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C376516A421 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:54:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5B1C313C46C for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:54:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l610ro40002380 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:53:50 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l610roYc002379; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:53:50 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200707010053.l610roYc002379@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 00:53:50 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114182: SLIP is super-ultra-modern (handbook/install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: minimarmot@gmail.com List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:00:14 -0000 >Number: 114182 >Category: docs >Synopsis: SLIP is super-ultra-modern (handbook/install chapter) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 01:00:11 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: There is a subsection of ``Advanced Installation'' on installing over a network. This subsection describes methods for SLIP, PPP, and Ethernet networking. We sound rather archaic if we lead off the list with the (in the words of Murray Stokely) super cutting-edge SLIP protocol. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @@ -4569,9 +4594,34 @@ Ethernet There are three types of network installations available. - Serial port (SLIP or PPP), Parallel port (PLIP (laplink cable)), - or Ethernet (a standard Ethernet controller (includes some - PCMCIA)). + Ethernet (a standard Ethernet controller), Serial port + (SLIP or PPP), or Parallel port (PLIP (laplink cable)). + + For the fastest possible network installation, an + Ethernet adapter is always a good choice! FreeBSD supports most + common PC Ethernet cards; a table of supported cards (and their + required settings) is provided in the Hardware Notes for each + release of FreeBSD. If you are using one of the supported PCMCIA + Ethernet cards, also be sure that it is plugged in + before the laptop is powered on! FreeBSD does + not, unfortunately, currently support hot insertion of PCMCIA cards + during installation. + + You will also need to know your IP address on the network, + the netmask value for your address class, and the name of your + machine. If you are installing over a PPP connection and do not + have a static IP, fear not, the IP address can be dynamically + assigned by your ISP. Your system administrator can tell you + which values to use for your particular network setup. If you + will be referring to other hosts by name rather than IP address, + you will also need a name server and possibly the address of a + gateway (if you are using PPP, it is your provider's IP address) + to use in talking to it. If you want to install by FTP via a + HTTP proxy, you will also need the proxy's address. + If you do not know the answers to all or most of these questions, + then you should really probably talk to your system administrator + or ISP before trying this type of + installation. The SLIP support is rather primitive, and limited primarily to hard-wired links, such as a serial cable running between a @@ -4604,32 +4654,6 @@ over the parallel port is much higher than what is typically possible over a serial line (up to 50 kbytes/sec), thus resulting in a quicker installation. - - Finally, for the fastest possible network installation, an - Ethernet adapter is always a good choice! FreeBSD supports most - common PC Ethernet cards; a table of supported cards (and their - required settings) is provided in the Hardware Notes for each - release of FreeBSD. If you are using one of the supported PCMCIA - Ethernet cards, also be sure that it is plugged in - before the laptop is powered on! FreeBSD does - not, unfortunately, currently support hot insertion of PCMCIA cards - during installation. - - You will also need to know your IP address on the network, - the netmask value for your address class, and the name of your - machine. If you are installing over a PPP connection and do not - have a static IP, fear not, the IP address can be dynamically - assigned by your ISP. Your system administrator can tell you - which values to use for your particular network setup. If you - will be referring to other hosts by name rather than IP address, - you will also need a name server and possibly the address of a - gateway (if you are using PPP, it is your provider's IP address) - to use in talking to it. If you want to install by FTP via a - HTTP proxy, you will also need the proxy's address. - If you do not know the answers to all or most of these questions, - then you should really probably talk to your system administrator - or ISP before trying this type of - installation. Before Installing via NFS --------- Unless something got lost in PR-land, this is all I've got in terms of minor grammar and style corrections for the install chapter. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:30:09 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7D45B16A41F for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:30:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1B41213C447 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:30:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611U8wB001399 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:30:08 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611U8ck001397; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:30:08 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:30:08 GMT Message-Id: <200707010130.l611U8ck001397@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: "Murray Stokely" Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114181: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Murray Stokely List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:30:09 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114181; it has been noted by GNATS. From: "Murray Stokely" To: minimarmot@gmail.com Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/114181: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 18:05:28 -0700 Hey I'm take a look at these today. Can you batch them into larger submissions? At least all the nits in one chapter going into one bug, if not all the nits found in one day going together into one bug. - Murray On 6/30/07, minimarmot@gmail.com wrote: > > >Number: 114181 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:50:03 GMT 2007 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 > >Organization: > >Environment: > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > > > >Description: > The handbook unequivocially decrees that the project makes available > two CDROM images as part of each release. This isn't really true, though > -- for one thing, there are N images per architecture. > Additionally, we have a miniinst.iso as well as disc1 and disc2. > Ken Smith recently noted that the amd64 monthly snapshots have been overflowing > disc1 (without packages), so I don't know if that will push out a disc 3 as well. > > >How-To-Repeat: > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html > >Fix: > > --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 > +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 > @@ -4212,8 +4236,9 @@ > > Creating an Installation CDROM > > - As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available two > - CDROM images (ISO images). These images can be written > + As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available > + at least two CDROM images (ISO images) per > + supported architecture. These images can be written > (burned) to CDs if you have a CD writer, and then used > to install FreeBSD. If you have a CD writer, and bandwidth is cheap, > then this is the easiest way to install FreeBSD. > > > >Release-Note: > >Audit-Trail: > >Unformatted: > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:33:32 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F13CF16A421; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C87A713C484; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611XWmH003256; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:32 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611XWvI003252; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:32 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:32 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010133.l611XWvI003252@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114174: nit in handbook -- install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:33:33 -0000 Synopsis: nit in handbook -- install chapter State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:32:39 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114174 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:33:54 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF24A16A41F; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:54 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 975CF13C448; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:54 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611XsqR003307; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:54 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611Xseb003303; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:54 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:33:54 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010133.l611Xseb003303@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114175: minor nit in handbook -- install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:33:54 -0000 Synopsis: minor nit in handbook -- install chapter State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:33:38 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114175 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:34:28 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4804616A41F; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:34:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1DAB513C4BE; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:34:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611YRNP003363; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:34:27 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611YRsa003359; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:34:27 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:34:27 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010134.l611YRsa003359@freefall.freebsd.org> To: kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, murray@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114177: residual instance of /stand in handbook (install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:34:28 -0000 Synopsis: residual instance of /stand in handbook (install chapter) State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:34:05 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray Responsible-Changed-By: murray Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:34:05 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114177 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:35:24 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9325316A46B; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:35:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 817F313C469; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:35:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611ZObl003431; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:35:24 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611ZOV1003427; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:35:24 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:35:24 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010135.l611ZOV1003427@freefall.freebsd.org> To: kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, murray@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114176: readability improvement to handbook install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:35:24 -0000 Synopsis: readability improvement to handbook install chapter State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:34:33 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. I added a space between 'b' and 'partition' in your patch. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray Responsible-Changed-By: murray Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:34:33 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. I added a space between 'b' and 'partition' in your patch. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114176 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:36:13 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9CB0016A468; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 72C2B13C44B; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611aDqI003492; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:13 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611aDVP003488; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:13 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:13 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010136.l611aDVP003488@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, murray@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114180: readability note in handbook/install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:36:13 -0000 Synopsis: readability note in handbook/install chapter State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:35:29 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray Responsible-Changed-By: murray Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:35:29 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114180 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 01:36:47 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F33F516A46D; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C7E6B13C46E; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l611akno003555; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:46 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l611ak5X003551; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:46 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 01:36:46 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010136.l611ak5X003551@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, murray@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114181: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 01:36:47 -0000 Synopsis: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:36:20 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray Responsible-Changed-By: murray Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:36:20 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114181 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 02:16:10 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B363F16A477; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 02:16:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 86B3713C4C7; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 02:16:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l612GAOM006111; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 02:16:10 GMT (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l612GAau006105; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 02:16:10 GMT (envelope-from murray) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 02:16:10 GMT From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200707010216.l612GAau006105@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, murray@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114179: outdated phrase (prefers MS-DOS to Windows) in handbook (install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 02:16:10 -0000 Synopsis: outdated phrase (prefers MS-DOS to Windows) in handbook (install chapter) State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 02:15:45 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.354 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. Website will be updated later today. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray Responsible-Changed-By: murray Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 02:15:45 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Submitted in r1.354 of install/chapter.sgml. Thanks for the submission. 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Thanks and Regards kishwer seo.kishwer@gmail.com From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 03:09:13 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 63B6816A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 03:09:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from py-out-1112.google.com (py-out-1112.google.com [64.233.166.180]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 211A413C45A for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 03:09:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by py-out-1112.google.com with SMTP id u77so2252438pyb for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 20:09:12 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=ca/spo+/DsvhfPxZCJXub0hfjXrLHHFWaV6Hxwo1Juq86/AIzeGTtYpdQK6imFHiaz/0u0OIh7Hpo486YPuyyTJUhU77mDGpx8G7pw6XKSW73FW3A+u2/o1fWJwtNQ+yivJtrF0CSLRMhQ/O8xH0ktLW9Tk/cg9DkfTgQAys9ac= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=hvccDcfE515TBvcXSCMW2CondiexvT0GGTSP62vP68KQ/soVpxLeVqo8ktqRTeyR+6weqdaCgL8adLV4qwDQtQMr1kyxfkhtAEf39Gs34JnP8ENqNraQdcpoIvtCKExCo4NX6qrsVaI6V0UtY6QzQo2DT0lc2tOKuZQjwFUu8+U= Received: by 10.142.107.1 with SMTP id f1mr272094wfc.1183259352108; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 20:09:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.1.8 with HTTP; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 20:09:12 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0706302009x7a26e6d3n9da63a5b31189c3a@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 22:09:12 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Murray Stokely" In-Reply-To: <474078f80706301805n7221acc2v83c7f9993fef7885@mail.gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <200707010042.l610gKmB002277@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> <474078f80706301805n7221acc2v83c7f9993fef7885@mail.gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/114181: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 03:09:13 -0000 On 6/30/07, Murray Stokely wrote: > Hey I'm take a look at these today. Can you batch them into larger > submissions? At least all the nits in one chapter going into one bug, > if not all the nits found in one day going together into one bug. > > - Murray > > Will do. Actually, I decided midway through this chapter that doing individual PR's per each change was too much work. Originally, I had thought that submitting them separately would better allow for reasoning and comments behind each change, but I think that can be done well enough with a batch. Thanks for re-coallating the changes and seeing them into the tree. -Ben Kaduk > On 6/30/07, minimarmot@gmail.com wrote: > > > > >Number: 114181 > > >Category: docs > > >Synopsis: nit in handbook/install chapter (number of release ISO's) > > >Confidential: no > > >Severity: non-critical > > >Priority: low > > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > > >State: open > > >Quarter: > > >Keywords: > > >Date-Required: > > >Class: doc-bug > > >Submitter-Id: current-users > > >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 01 00:50:03 GMT 2007 > > >Closed-Date: > > >Last-Modified: > > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > > >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 > > >Organization: > > >Environment: > > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > > > > > > > >Description: > > The handbook unequivocially decrees that the project makes available > > two CDROM images as part of each release. This isn't really true, though > > -- for one thing, there are N images per architecture. > > Additionally, we have a miniinst.iso as well as disc1 and disc2. > > Ken Smith recently noted that the amd64 monthly snapshots have been overflowing > > disc1 (without packages), so I don't know if that will push out a disc 3 as well. > > > > >How-To-Repeat: > > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html > > >Fix: > > > > --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 > > +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 > > @@ -4212,8 +4236,9 @@ > > > > Creating an Installation CDROM > > > > - As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available two > > - CDROM images (ISO images). These images can be written > > + As part of each release, the FreeBSD project makes available > > + at least two CDROM images (ISO images) per > > + supported architecture. These images can be written > > (burned) to CDs if you have a CD writer, and then used > > to install FreeBSD. If you have a CD writer, and bandwidth is cheap, > > then this is the easiest way to install FreeBSD. > > > > > > >Release-Note: > > >Audit-Trail: > > >Unformatted: > > _______________________________________________ > > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > > > From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 13:28:27 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4407C16A46D for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 13:28:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from www@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3561F13C465 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 13:28:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from www@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l61DSR9h056434 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 13:28:27 GMT (envelope-from www@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l61DSQKc056423 for freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 13:28:27 GMT (envelope-from www) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 13:28:27 GMT From: World Wide Web Owner Message-Id: <200707011328.l61DSQKc056423@www.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: FreeBSD web build failed on www.freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 13:28:27 -0000 *** Error code 1 (ignored) /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' summerofcode-2005.sgml > summerofcode-2005.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects summerofcode-2005.sgml-tmp > summerofcode-2005.html || (/bin/rm -f summerofcode-2005.sgml-tmp summerofcode-2005.html && false) /bin/rm -f summerofcode-2005.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml summerofcode-2005.html *** Error code 1 (ignored) /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' summerofcode-2006.sgml > summerofcode-2006.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects summerofcode-2006.sgml-tmp > summerofcode-2006.html || (/bin/rm -f summerofcode-2006.sgml-tmp summerofcode-2006.html && false) /bin/rm -f summerofcode-2006.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml summerofcode-2006.html *** Error code 1 (ignored) /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' summerofcode-2007.sgml > summerofcode-2007.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects summerofcode-2007.sgml-tmp > summerofcode-2007.html || (/bin/rm -f summerofcode-2007.sgml-tmp summerofcode-2007.html && false) /bin/rm -f summerofcode-2007.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml summerofcode-2007.html ===> projects/acpi /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' index.sgml > index.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects/acpi index.sgml-tmp > index.html || (/bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp index.html && false) /bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml index.html *** Error code 1 (ignored) /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' completed.sgml > completed.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects/acpi completed.sgml-tmp > completed.html || (/bin/rm -f completed.sgml-tmp completed.html && false) /bin/rm -f completed.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml completed.html *** Error code 1 (ignored) ===> projects/busdma /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' index.sgml > index.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects/busdma index.sgml-tmp > index.html || (/bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp index.html && false) /bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp /usr/local/bin/tidy -wrap 90 -m -raw -preserve -f /dev/null -asxml index.html *** Error code 1 (ignored) ===> projects/c99 /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' index.sgml > index.sgml-tmp /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects/c99 index.sgml-tmp > index.html || (/bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp index.html && false) /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:97:E: general entity "ICS1" not defined and no default entity /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:105:E: general entity "ICS2" not defined and no default entity /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:113:E: general entity "ICS3" not defined and no default entity *** Error code 1 Stop in /w/www/build/www/en/projects/c99. *** Error code 1 (ignored) *** Error code 1 Stop in /w/www/build/www/en/projects. *** Error code 1 (ignored) *** Error code 1 Stop in /w/www/build/www/en. 84.69 real 57.57 user 15.28 sys From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 14:34:55 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9891E16A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 14:34:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from chinsan.tw@gmail.com) Received: from an-out-0708.google.com (an-out-0708.google.com [209.85.132.242]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5685C13C45B for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 14:34:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from chinsan.tw@gmail.com) Received: by an-out-0708.google.com with SMTP id c14so309659anc for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 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Message-ID: <1f27304c0707010734y71d9c792v3f9f460c04cc967f@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 22:34:54 +0800 From: chinsan To: "World Wide Web Owner" In-Reply-To: <200707011328.l61DSQKc056423@www.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <200707011328.l61DSQKc056423@www.freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: FreeBSD web build failed on www.freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 14:34:55 -0000 On 7/1/07, World Wide Web Owner wrote: > *** Error code 1 (ignored) > ===> projects/c99 > /usr/bin/sed -e 's///' index.sgml > index.sgml-tmp > /usr/bin/env SGML_CATALOG_FILES= /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm -d -ifreebsd.urls.absolute -c /usr/local/share/sgml/html/catalog -c /usr/local/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/en/share/sgml/catalog -c /w/www/build/www/share/sgml/catalog -D /w/www/build/www/en/projects/c99 index.sgml-tmp > index.html || (/bin/rm -f index.sgml-tmp index.html && false) > /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:97:E: general entity "ICS1" not defined and no default entity > /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:105:E: general entity "ICS2" not defined and no default entity > /usr/local/bin/sgmlnorm:index.sgml-tmp:85:113:E: general entity "ICS3" not defined and no default entity > *** Error code 1 Unbreak build by written as &. Sorry. - chinsan From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 15:02:00 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7B03616A421 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 15:02:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: from nf-out-0910.google.com (nf-out-0910.google.com [64.233.182.190]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 12C7F13C465 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 15:01:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: by nf-out-0910.google.com with SMTP id b2so48516nfb for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 08:01:59 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=pXqQbAJXmoqOXaqk0GnHvBfynGFkTdwnPPtn9PVsJ62fCF+pmvZI25TWaru3J7gBylJ3bjMm/VDEk9o8sKEZ5vT+99xhghOeZ9Q1Ru3hh3FmmbQwK/UtmfnOrPLkaYmo5QfyNKkhncdm979byOOx2cY9ePBiHLJGcuLAUuIqiIs= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=dQdMgPl8+H2pC2vA1OF5OeJrtcL/hH5qUFLXa4QOopo5UR1ERI2ck3RddnojNH7P0XO/tAAyr0LRrCIPGnaFf969V1reI/uLLCVftRs738rtLnvicg45gj1sbF7U/tAHYxVv4nzK39CD1892n9KONA8f+G3FBg1iXT/Y2tFQwmA= Received: by 10.82.116.15 with SMTP id o15mr10851422buc.1183302118889; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 08:01:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.82.187.6 with HTTP; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 08:01:58 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 10:01:58 -0500 From: "illoai@gmail.com" To: "Ben Kaduk" In-Reply-To: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 15:02:00 -0000 On 30/06/07, Ben Kaduk wrote: > Does anyone here know how much data a default FreeBSD install puts > onto the root partition? We've got a sentence in the installation > chapter of the handbook that claims that a regular FreeBSD install > will put about 40 MB of data on the root partition. > > I find it likely that this is no longer true on a modern system, since > my (debug) kernel is 88 MB, but I don't have a box handy on which I > can do a quick install. A quick decompression of the base/base.[ab]? , kernels/generic.a? , manpages/manpages.a? followed by rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ leaves 36M in the root directory. 6.2-RELEASE. -- -- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 16:38:08 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 358E616A468 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 16:38:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from nz-out-0506.google.com (nz-out-0506.google.com [64.233.162.224]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EA5F513C45B for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 16:38:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by nz-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id l8so597986nzf for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 09:38:07 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=j4HHAkFU7588jasreM/ejMV5VTUttbKDtTLydg8UNISItLruD2oHFe7U/jqRUEZSPl5r9cNsJ2KKx6XmXh+5urwKbYkaib3QiMx/JbIaOWmq1LkJx86W1SSUBOkdFgBwoNkgNjiM0zcFAf0R1+fkvhLgkTN4FxoiPn3J+Wy35so= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=nMNnXKOgC1Dhu+89MRzr5hBrOhijr7/RM1lxK+PvLtSJFHMQEYg0LqKIASLGLKVQXyxzPG8ErSgOSaQoMSMjesXwRSutAKOjbg3RWUZn0CIZ2oKKTtZvlJtElAOMuecCeePE8yL/HpqTespbMOx2AWLNbL6yNRqxSOl/xbMYU9w= Received: by 10.142.109.16 with SMTP id h16mr296427wfc.1183307887068; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 09:38:07 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.1.8 with HTTP; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 09:38:07 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 11:38:07 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "illoai@gmail.com" In-Reply-To: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:38:08 -0000 On 7/1/07, illoai@gmail.com wrote: > On 30/06/07, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > Does anyone here know how much data a default FreeBSD install puts > > onto the root partition? We've got a sentence in the installation > > chapter of the handbook that claims that a regular FreeBSD install > > will put about 40 MB of data on the root partition. > > > > I find it likely that this is no longer true on a modern system, since > > my (debug) kernel is 88 MB, but I don't have a box handy on which I > > can do a quick install. > > A quick decompression of the base/base.[ab]? , kernels/generic.a? , > manpages/manpages.a? followed by rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ leaves 36M > in the root directory. > 6.2-RELEASE. > > -- > -- > Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. -Ben Kaduk From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 16:52:58 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AE9F716A41F for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 16:52:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from woozle.rinet.ru (woozle.rinet.ru [195.54.192.68]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2A2D913C483 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 16:52:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by woozle.rinet.ru (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id l61GfKrr080424; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:41:20 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:41:19 +0400 (MSD) From: Dmitry Morozovsky To: Ben Kaduk In-Reply-To: <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> Message-ID: <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> X-NCC-RegID: ru.rinet X-OpenPGP-Key-ID: 6B691B03 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-3.0 (woozle.rinet.ru [0.0.0.0]); Sun, 01 Jul 2007 20:41:20 +0400 (MSD) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:52:58 -0000 On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, Ben Kaduk wrote: BK> On 7/1/07, illoai@gmail.com wrote: BK> > On 30/06/07, Ben Kaduk wrote: BK> > > Does anyone here know how much data a default FreeBSD install puts BK> > > onto the root partition? We've got a sentence in the installation BK> > > chapter of the handbook that claims that a regular FreeBSD install BK> > > will put about 40 MB of data on the root partition. BK> > > BK> > > I find it likely that this is no longer true on a modern system, since BK> > > my (debug) kernel is 88 MB, but I don't have a box handy on which I BK> > > can do a quick install. BK> > BK> > A quick decompression of the base/base.[ab]? , kernels/generic.a? , BK> > manpages/manpages.a? followed by rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ leaves 36M BK> > in the root directory. BK> > 6.2-RELEASE. BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. Look at install.sh scripts in the distribution directories Sincerely, D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** ------------------------------------------------------------------------ From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 17:43:27 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 36D2216A468 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 17:43:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from nz-out-0506.google.com (nz-out-0506.google.com [64.233.162.231]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E910F13C45E for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 17:43:26 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by nz-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id l8so603186nzf for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 10:43:26 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=jCJDjTR6kQWdDw33RWoMx/dKpoYH93AweEFXWmeibrTsdttekkGvCMfZDTtJDGZlNyeaYM67yCMLUj/jrIM3lVrc4vv1gMAVUBBO0EqLnMbm1xcd8o7Vu+oIqpSdfY8BCN1tYWkUV436GUlMmL/Fm9kkjY5aNrFtWSv9Fxy9ZU8= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=pTMi8NlQM4W2P/OsOvW9vJqW6wH/hpLZgipOau4jHVYkKMGdTjZQGqOSrPH+xW0i2yg7iX2EvsNxEum+hLOJetYnOts8+WE6B3Ss+XJ32lPvlK27MrMiICMRsF3aWd4AG/FkBgBciw2cCGJ5Bei/e1DHSp43xw9jf9QnzL/cfds= Received: by 10.142.213.9 with SMTP id l9mr304754wfg.1183311805969; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 10:43:25 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.1.8 with HTTP; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 10:43:25 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 17:43:25 +0000 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Dmitry Morozovsky" In-Reply-To: <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 17:43:27 -0000 On 7/1/07, Dmitry Morozovsky wrote: > On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > BK> On 7/1/07, illoai@gmail.com wrote: > BK> > On 30/06/07, Ben Kaduk wrote: > BK> > > Does anyone here know how much data a default FreeBSD install puts > BK> > > onto the root partition? We've got a sentence in the installation > BK> > > chapter of the handbook that claims that a regular FreeBSD install > BK> > > will put about 40 MB of data on the root partition. > BK> > > > BK> > > I find it likely that this is no longer true on a modern system, since > BK> > > my (debug) kernel is 88 MB, but I don't have a box handy on which I > BK> > > can do a quick install. > BK> > > BK> > A quick decompression of the base/base.[ab]? , kernels/generic.a? , > BK> > manpages/manpages.a? followed by rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ leaves 36M > BK> > in the root directory. > BK> > 6.2-RELEASE. > > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. > > Look at install.sh scripts in the distribution directories > I am still a bit confused. When you say ``distribution directories,'' I presume you mean the directory hierarchy of a distribution medium, such as an ISO image (or presumably the result of ``make distribution''). I certainly don't see any global install.sh in /usr/src . I made the original query because I wasn't equipped to do a make distribution, and I didn't have any install CD's handy. -Ben Kaduk > > Sincerely, > D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 19:45:00 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E70816A46E for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 19:45:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from woozle.rinet.ru (woozle.rinet.ru [195.54.192.68]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A43C113C487 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 19:44:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by woozle.rinet.ru (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id l61JiwMa082534; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 23:44:58 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 23:44:58 +0400 (MSD) From: Dmitry Morozovsky To: Ben Kaduk In-Reply-To: <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> Message-ID: <20070701234149.O81781@woozle.rinet.ru> References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> X-NCC-RegID: ru.rinet X-OpenPGP-Key-ID: 6B691B03 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-3.0 (woozle.rinet.ru [0.0.0.0]); Sun, 01 Jul 2007 23:44:58 +0400 (MSD) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 19:45:00 -0000 On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, Ben Kaduk wrote: BK> > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what BK> > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an BK> > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object BK> > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. BK> > BK> > Look at install.sh scripts in the distribution directories BK> > BK> BK> I am still a bit confused. When you say ``distribution directories,'' BK> I presume you mean the directory hierarchy of a distribution medium, BK> such as an ISO image (or presumably the result of ``make BK> distribution''). I certainly don't see any global install.sh in BK> /usr/src . I made the original query because I wasn't equipped to do BK> a make distribution, and I didn't have any install CD's handy. Well, you can look for template in reference from /usr/src/release/Makefile, namely release/scripts/*-install.sh ;-) As for base, this is: -- 8< -- #!/bin/sh # # $FreeBSD: src/release/scripts/base-install.sh,v 1.6 2002/04/30 09:57:21 ru Exp $ # if [ "`id -u`" != "0" ]; then echo "Sorry, this must be done as root." exit 1 fi echo "You are about to extract the base distribution into ${DESTDIR:-/} - are you SURE" echo -n "you want to do this over your installed system (y/n)? " read ans if [ "$ans" = "y" ]; then cat base.?? | tar --unlink -xpzf - -C ${DESTDIR:-/} fi -- 8< -- Look at the cat... line Sincerely, D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** ------------------------------------------------------------------------ From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 20:05:37 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 42F8916A41F for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:05:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from woozle.rinet.ru (woozle.rinet.ru [195.54.192.68]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C1A1013C458 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:05:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by woozle.rinet.ru (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id l61K5ZTY082830; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 00:05:35 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 00:05:35 +0400 (MSD) From: Dmitry Morozovsky To: Ben Kaduk In-Reply-To: <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> Message-ID: <20070702000236.S81781@woozle.rinet.ru> References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> X-NCC-RegID: ru.rinet X-OpenPGP-Key-ID: 6B691B03 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-3.0 (woozle.rinet.ru [0.0.0.0]); Mon, 02 Jul 2007 00:05:35 +0400 (MSD) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 20:05:37 -0000 On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, Ben Kaduk wrote: BK> > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what BK> > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an BK> > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object BK> > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. [snip all other] For quick estimation without instalation media, you can use jail install procedure: export DESTDIR=/path/to/jail (or setenv in [t]sch) mkdir -p ${DESTDIR} cd /usr/src make installworld distribution installkernel which gives you copy of freshly installed system ready for jail run... Sincerely, D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** ------------------------------------------------------------------------ From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 20:35:48 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 76EEA16A46B; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:35:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 50AC613C447; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:35:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l61KZmHE091087; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:35:48 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l61KZm1E091083; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:35:48 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 20:35:48 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707012035.l61KZm1E091083@freefall.freebsd.org> To: remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-i386@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114184: [patch] [ndis]: add info to man 4 ndis X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 20:35:48 -0000 Old Synopsis: add info to man 4 ndis New Synopsis: [patch] [ndis]: add info to man 4 ndis Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-i386->freebsd-doc Responsible-Changed-By: remko Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 20:35:30 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Reassign to doc team http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114184 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 21:49:00 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29EE316A421 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 21:49:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: from ug-out-1314.google.com (ug-out-1314.google.com [66.249.92.171]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B339613C447 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 21:48:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: by ug-out-1314.google.com with SMTP id o4so769563uge for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 14:48:58 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=aWiL3SkHLNXMUYhHLh4DyrGHT+Quh7tW+A5v6TzUKKxdHyDqKxUzCEMeW4DeJ+Esw4SAGusp7dKwy4Ut6hL/9XawgE0V9Yqt9U2JxOMauhi5nQ20Ukf1QeupIVeFzINEzMqWyRBasyXqiSxE2wAnLZXYPxn+Z6Bl1rL6xUjNfJA= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=QYMH6E+Ur9bORDYf0g8boKv8X2MhBTLk6HHWrUng5R+g0hFkkKqKmwAP/BRDn3ytSf6iLxNJk3lmyUfSnZw+No4URtR6wc98zdi2LVRyy3X9wzZiK07Bp6qrYm2ZhN61VfZl+iXBiZpeAXKGpz143d8n9fnccgD3HYv0nT19MOM= Received: by 10.82.175.17 with SMTP id x17mr11615464bue.1183326538309; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 14:48:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.82.187.6 with HTTP; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 14:48:57 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 16:48:57 -0500 From: "illoai@gmail.com" To: "Dmitry Morozovsky" In-Reply-To: <20070702000236.S81781@woozle.rinet.ru> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> <20070702000236.S81781@woozle.rinet.ru> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 21:49:00 -0000 On 01/07/07, Dmitry Morozovsky wrote: > On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > BK> > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what > BK> > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an > BK> > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object > BK> > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. > > [snip all other] > > For quick estimation without instalation media, you can use jail install > procedure: > > export DESTDIR=/path/to/jail (or setenv in [t]sch) > mkdir -p ${DESTDIR} > cd /usr/src > make installworld distribution installkernel > > which gives you copy of freshly installed system ready for jail run... > Is it faster than: # mdconfig -a -t vnode -f /path/to/6.2-RELEASE-i386-disc1.iso -u 0 # mount -t cd9660 /dev/md0 /vcdrom --(leave root so's not to worry about typos here!)-- % cd /some/scratch/directory % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/base/base.?? | tar zxvf - . . . (I like to watch) % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/kernels/generic.?? | tar zxvf - . . . (pages and pages of pathnames) % rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ % du -d0 -h ./ 36M % ? (this assumes that per sysinstall default /usr /var and /tmp are their own filesystems) -- -- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 1 23:07:12 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D5E1D16A400 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 23:07:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from woozle.rinet.ru (woozle.rinet.ru [195.54.192.68]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 461F513C448 for ; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 23:07:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by woozle.rinet.ru (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id l61N7BiV086339; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 03:07:11 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from marck@rinet.ru) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 03:07:11 +0400 (MSD) From: Dmitry Morozovsky To: "illoai@gmail.com" In-Reply-To: Message-ID: <20070702030514.D81781@woozle.rinet.ru> References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> <20070702000236.S81781@woozle.rinet.ru> X-NCC-RegID: ru.rinet X-OpenPGP-Key-ID: 6B691B03 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-3.0 (woozle.rinet.ru [0.0.0.0]); Mon, 02 Jul 2007 03:07:11 +0400 (MSD) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jul 2007 23:07:12 -0000 On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, illoai@gmail.com wrote: i> > BK> > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what i> > BK> > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an i> > BK> > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object i> > BK> > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. i> > i> > [snip all other] i> > i> > For quick estimation without instalation media, you can use jail install i> > procedure: i> > i> > export DESTDIR=/path/to/jail (or setenv in [t]sch) i> > mkdir -p ${DESTDIR} i> > cd /usr/src i> > make installworld distribution installkernel i> > i> > which gives you copy of freshly installed system ready for jail run... i> > i> i> Is it faster than: i> # mdconfig -a -t vnode -f /path/to/6.2-RELEASE-i386-disc1.iso -u 0 i> # mount -t cd9660 /dev/md0 /vcdrom i> --(leave root so's not to worry about typos here!)-- i> % cd /some/scratch/directory i> % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/base/base.?? | tar zxvf - i> . . . (I like to watch) i> % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/kernels/generic.?? | tar zxvf - i> . . . (pages and pages of pathnames) i> % rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ i> % du -d0 -h ./ i> 36M i> % i> ? i> i> (this assumes that per sysinstall default /usr /var i> and /tmp are their own filesystems) Original poster indicated that he has not quickly available installation media; however, it seems he's armed with buildworld results, hence my suggestions. Sincerely, D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** ------------------------------------------------------------------------ From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 00:31:51 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F1A8A16A400 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 00:31:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from nz-out-0506.google.com (nz-out-0506.google.com [64.233.162.226]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AC6BD13C455 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 00:31:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by nz-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id l8so630431nzf for ; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 17:31:50 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=fF04KcKRIPRtjLo3L9p181cp+4jTNw+xhTkA3XZBl37zM4czi72lJg2Fdh+xywWwmWMRkeK8Wx4JEyjfv41O9iz8sk9lGym7JDy7adepOEXJxIyofApqnmli3MG7hk78HUGfeP8zf7ULbwRNgAHx5Sq0PdAioTQxT7h86NuYmY4= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=FjHhQAosmr4yKCApB4SJ4ZFnj/rRKA+fivbWY/oyOkOZTq3mjB2aPnq/M/Tr5bE31pbUq9VKUvWaKNcUH0ZRktBYErAXCrMtsEsS9p9wFVNSBtQhK9iCcFZJmabxFWAsNqVt3eO78/b6C64uFiJND7FtZi1rjG6N4qFpCoxz3Cs= Received: by 10.142.76.4 with SMTP id y4mr316429wfa.1183336309602; Sun, 01 Jul 2007 17:31:49 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.14.5 with HTTP; Sun, 1 Jul 2007 17:31:49 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0707011731p13446d43p5495848bec1d90ec@mail.gmail.com> Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 00:31:49 +0000 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Dmitry Morozovsky" In-Reply-To: <20070702030514.D81781@woozle.rinet.ru> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0706301618l6821d2c3n4ac0510fde66f834@mail.gmail.com> <47d0403c0707010938i2af1c0a1gc26da2652e4648a8@mail.gmail.com> <20070701204053.H77247@woozle.rinet.ru> <47d0403c0707011043y6d3d8819yeb807f08eb136d69@mail.gmail.com> <20070702000236.S81781@woozle.rinet.ru> <20070702030514.D81781@woozle.rinet.ru> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: recommended size of root partition X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 00:31:51 -0000 On 7/1/07, Dmitry Morozovsky wrote: > On Sun, 1 Jul 2007, illoai@gmail.com wrote: > > i> > BK> > BK> Thanks! What command did you use to do the decompression (and what > i> > BK> > BK> was the source from which to decompress)? I figured that doing an > i> > BK> > BK> extraction would be the best way (since it directly tests the object > i> > BK> > BK> in question), but I couldn't come up with something quick. > i> > > i> > [snip all other] > i> > > i> > For quick estimation without instalation media, you can use jail install > i> > procedure: > i> > > i> > export DESTDIR=/path/to/jail (or setenv in [t]sch) > i> > mkdir -p ${DESTDIR} > i> > cd /usr/src > i> > make installworld distribution installkernel > i> > > i> > which gives you copy of freshly installed system ready for jail run... > i> > > i> > i> Is it faster than: > i> # mdconfig -a -t vnode -f /path/to/6.2-RELEASE-i386-disc1.iso -u 0 > i> # mount -t cd9660 /dev/md0 /vcdrom > i> --(leave root so's not to worry about typos here!)-- > i> % cd /some/scratch/directory > i> % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/base/base.?? | tar zxvf - > i> . . . (I like to watch) > i> % cat /vcdrom/6.2-RELEASE/kernels/generic.?? | tar zxvf - > i> . . . (pages and pages of pathnames) > i> % rm -rf usr/ var/ tmp/ > i> % du -d0 -h ./ > i> 36M > i> % > i> ? > i> > i> (this assumes that per sysinstall default /usr /var > i> and /tmp are their own filesystems) > > Original poster indicated that he has not quickly available installation media; > however, it seems he's armed with buildworld results, hence my suggestions. > I do have buildworld results, but since I run -current, I have debugging options enabled for the kernel, which seems to have a big impact on its size on disk. The original question (how big is / on a default install) did not seem important enough to spend the cpu time building a non-debug kernel. Luckily for me, several people know faster ways. -Ben Kaduk > Sincerely, > D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 11:06:22 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5808516A46C for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 11:06:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3D2BD13C480 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 11:06:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62B6MJG081654 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 11:06:22 GMT (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62B6K4l081650 for DOC; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 11:06:20 GMT (envelope-from owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 11:06:20 GMT Message-Id: <200707021106.l62B6K4l081650@freefall.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: freefall.freebsd.org: gnats set sender to owner-bugmaster@FreeBSD.org using -f From: FreeBSD bugmaster To: FreeBSD doc list Cc: Subject: Current unassigned doc problem reports X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 11:06:22 -0000 Current FreeBSD problem reports The following is a listing of current problems submitted by FreeBSD users. These represent problem reports covering all versions including experimental development code and obsolete releases. Bugs can be in one of several states: o - open A problem report has been submitted, no sanity checking performed. a - analyzed The problem is understood and a solution is being sought. f - feedback Further work requires additional information from the originator or the community - possibly confirmation of the effectiveness of a proposed solution. p - patched A patch has been committed, but some issues (MFC and / or confirmation from originator) are still open. r - repocopy The resolution of the problem report is dependent on a repocopy operation within the CVS repository which is awaiting completion. s - suspended The problem is not being worked on, due to lack of information or resources. This is a prime candidate for somebody who is looking for a project to do. If the problem cannot be solved at all, it will be closed, rather than suspended. c - closed A problem report is closed when any changes have been integrated, documented, and tested -- or when fixing the problem is abandoned. Critical problems Serious problems S Tracker Resp. Description -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- o docs/27605 doc [patch] Cross-document references () s docs/35678 doc docproj Makefiles for web are broken for paths with sp o docs/61605 doc [feature request] Improve documentation for i386 disk o docs/80843 doc [patch] psm(4): Suggested fix for psm0 / handle driver o docs/84932 doc new document: printing with an Epson ALC-3000N on Free o docs/95262 doc Correction to handbook section 26.5.20 Port Redirectio o docs/95263 doc Correction to handbook section 26.5.21.3 FTP NAT Proxy o docs/95265 doc Correction to handbook section 26.5.16 IPNAT Rules o docs/98115 doc Missing parts after rendering handbook to RTF format o docs/106135 doc articles/vinum needs to be updated o docs/110253 doc [patch] rtprio(1): remove processing starvation commen o docs/112935 doc [patch] newfs_msdos(8): document 4.3g limit on files w o docs/113228 doc Incorrect and misleading ntp.conf "restrict" example i o docs/113274 doc Handbook needs file execution troubleshooting section 14 problems total. Non-critical problems S Tracker Resp. Description -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- s docs/20028 doc ASCII docs should reflect tags in the sourc o docs/24786 doc missing FILES descriptions in sa(4) o docs/26286 doc *printf(3) etc should gain format string warnings a docs/30008 doc [patch] French softupdates document should be translat s docs/33589 doc [patch] to doc.docbook.mk to post process .tex files. o docs/35222 doc [patch] getmsg.cgi: mailing list archive URL regexp su o docs/35608 doc mt(1) page uses "setmark" without explanation. o docs/35609 doc mt(1) page needs explanation of "long erase". o docs/35953 doc hosts.equiv(5) manual is confusing or wrong about host o docs/36432 doc Proposal for doc/share/mk: make folded books using psu o docs/36449 doc symlink(7) manual doesn't mention trailing slash, etc. o docs/38982 doc [patch] developers-handbook/Jail fix o docs/39348 doc diskless(8): note that kenv fetch of hostname requires o docs/39530 doc access(2) man page has unnecessarily broad warning o docs/40423 doc Keyboard(4)'s definition of parameters to GETFKEY/SETF o docs/41089 doc pax(1) -B option does not mention interaction with -z o docs/41807 doc [patch] natd(8): document natd -punch_fw "bug" o docs/43823 doc [PATCH] update to environ(7) manpage o docs/43941 doc document the Rationale for Upgrade Sequence (e.g. why o docs/44074 doc [patch] ln(1) manual clarifications o docs/47594 doc [PATCH] passwd(5) incorrectly states allowed username o docs/47818 doc [patch] ln(1) manpage is confusing o docs/48101 doc [patch] add documentation on the fixit disk to the FAQ o docs/50211 doc [PATCH] doc.docbook.mk: fix textfile creation o docs/51891 doc DIAGNOSTICS in ed(4) driver manpage don't match realit o docs/53596 doc Updates to mt(1) manual page o docs/57388 doc [patch] INSTALL.TXT enhancement: mention ok prompt o docs/57926 doc [patch] amd.conf(5) poorly format as it has both man(7 o docs/59044 doc [patch] doc.docbook.mk does not properly handle a sour o docs/59477 doc Outdated Info Documents at http://docs.freebsd.org/inf o docs/59835 doc ipfw(8) man page does not warn about accepted but mean o docs/61301 doc [patch] Manpage patch for aue(4) to enable HomePNA fun o docs/62412 doc one of the diskless boot methods described in the Hand o docs/63215 doc Wrong prototypes in mi_switch(9) (ref docs/24311) o docs/69861 doc [patch] usr.bin/csplit/csplit.1 does not document POSI o docs/70217 doc [patch] Suggested rewrite of docproj/sgml.sgml for cla o docs/73679 doc FreeBSD 5.3 Release notes mention new natd(8) function o docs/75865 doc comments on "backup-basics" in handbook o docs/75995 doc hcreate(3) documentation(?) bug o docs/76333 doc [patch] ferror(3): EOF indicator can be cleared by not o docs/78138 doc [patch] Error in pre-installation section of installat o docs/78240 doc [patch] handbook: replace with aroun o docs/78480 doc Networked printer setup unnecessarily complex in handb o docs/82595 doc 25.5.3 Configuring a bridge section of the handbook ne o docs/83621 doc [patch]: Minor omissions in /usr/src/UPDATING o docs/84154 doc Handbook somewhat off in use of /boot/kernel.old o docs/84265 doc [patch] chmod(1) manpage omits implication of setting o docs/84267 doc [patch] chflags(1) manual doesn't say it's affected by o docs/84268 doc chmod(1) manpage's BUGS entry is either wrong or too c o docs/84317 doc fdp-primer doesn't show class=USERNAME distinctively o docs/84670 doc [patch] tput(1) manpage missing ENVIRONMENT section wi o docs/84806 doc mdoc(7) manpage has section ordering problems o docs/84956 doc [patch] intro(5) manpage doesn't mention API coverage o docs/85118 doc [PATCH] opiekey(1) references non-existing opiegen(1) o docs/85128 doc loader.conf(5) autoboot_delay incompletly described o docs/85187 doc [patch] find(1) manpage missing block info for -ls o docs/86342 doc bikeshed entry of Handbook is wrong o docs/87857 doc ifconfig(8) wireless options order matters o docs/87936 doc Handbook chapter on NIS/YP lacks good information on a o docs/88477 doc Possible addition to xl(4) manpage, Diagnostics sectio o docs/88512 doc [patch] mount_ext2fs(8) man page has no details on lar o docs/89325 doc [PATCH] Clarification of kbdmap(5), atkbd(4) and kbdco o docs/89492 doc vfs doc: some VOP_*(9) manual pages are outdated with o docs/91149 doc read(2) can return EINVAL for unaligned access to bloc o docs/91506 doc ndis(4) man page should be more specific about support o docs/92626 doc jail manpage should mention disabling some periodic sc o docs/93249 doc rewrite of handbook chapter 23 (PPP & SLIP) o docs/94625 doc [patch] growfs man page -- document "panic: not enough o docs/95139 doc FAQ to move filesystem to new disk fails: incorrect pe o docs/96207 doc Comments of a sockaddr_un structure could confuse one o docs/98974 doc Missing tunables in loader(8) manpage f docs/99007 doc [patch] misleading nat configuration info o docs/99506 doc FreeBSD Handbook addition: IPv6 Server Settings o docs/100196 doc man login.conf does explain not "unlimited" o docs/100242 doc sysctl(3) description of KERN_PROC is not correct anym o docs/101464 doc sync u_RU.KOI8-R/articles/portbuild/article.html with o docs/102148 doc The description of which Intel chips have EM64T is out o docs/102719 doc [patch] ng_bpf(4) example leads to unneeded promiscuos o docs/104403 doc man security should mention that the usage of the X Wi o docs/104493 doc [patch] Wrong description in ntp.conf(5) (CURRENT and o docs/104879 doc Howto: Listen to IMA ADPCM .wav files on FreeBSD box o docs/105608 doc fdc(4) debugging description staled o docs/105997 doc sys/kern/sys_pipe.c refer to tuning(7), but there is n o docs/106425 doc [PATCH] add a HARDWARE-section to ata(4) o docs/107432 doc Handbook's default partitioning schema is out-of-date o docs/107611 doc man syncookies should mention net.inet.tcp.syncookies_ o docs/108101 doc /boot/default/loader.conf contains an incorrect commen o docs/108142 doc [patch] extattr(2) man page incomplete for extattr_lis o docs/108980 doc list of missing man pages o docs/109115 doc add Ultra 450 to hardware list for sparc64 o docs/109201 doc [request]: manual for callbootd o docs/109226 doc [request]: No manual entry for sntp o docs/109612 doc viapm manual page missing from 6.2 release o docs/109972 doc No manual entry for zless/bzless o docs/109973 doc No manual entry for c++filt o docs/109975 doc No manual entry for elf2aout o docs/109977 doc No manual entry for ksu o docs/109981 doc No manual entry for post-grohtml o docs/109983 doc No manual entry for protoize o docs/110061 doc [PATCH] tuning(7) missing reference to vfs.read_max o docs/110062 doc [patch] mount_nfs(8) fails to mention a failure condit o docs/110376 doc [patch] add some more explanations for the iwi/ipw fir o docs/110692 doc wi(4) man page doesn't say WPA is not supported o docs/110999 doc carp(4) should document unsupported interface types o docs/111147 doc hostapd.conf is not documented o docs/111263 doc Information on $EDITOR variable in section 3.10, "Text o docs/111265 doc Clarify how to set common shell variables o docs/111425 doc Missing chunks of text in historical manpages o docs/111781 doc Developers' Handbook mentions wrong sysctl for debuggi o docs/112267 doc GEOM Mirror documentation doesn't tell you to remove / o docs/112481 doc bug in ppp.linkup example o docs/112579 doc No ipv6 related pf examples in /usr/share/examples/pf o docs/112650 doc [patch] add flopen(3) to flock(2)'s xrefs o docs/112682 doc Handbook GEOM_GPT explanation does not provide accurat o docs/112683 doc Handbook KBD_INSTALL_CDEV explanation is redundant o docs/112684 doc Handbook chapter 8.4 explanation of devices should inc o docs/112693 doc [patch] update en/multimedia data-file o docs/112804 doc groff(1) command should be called to explicitly use "p o docs/113127 doc No ndisapi(9) man page as referred from ndis_event o docs/113194 doc [patch] crontab.5: handling of day-in-month plus day-i o docs/113390 doc [PATCH] geli option for to onetime encryption algorith o docs/113464 doc Error regarding IPF and ALTQ in handbook o docs/113570 doc dumpon(8), sysctl(8) refer to defunct variable "dumpde o docs/113695 doc handbook suggests different lockfile than gbde(8) manp o docs/113975 doc periodic(8): weekly usually runs on Saturday not Sunda o docs/114139 doc mbuf(9) has misleading comments on M_DONTWAIT and M_TR o docs/114178 doc hyphenation nit in handbook (install chapter) o docs/114182 doc [patch] SLIP is super-ultra-modern (handbook/install c o docs/114184 doc [patch] [ndis]: add info to man 4 ndis 129 problems total. From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 18:34:44 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3D89816A41F; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:34:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 11C9213C46E; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:34:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62IYhPb034516; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:34:43 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62IYd78034509; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:34:39 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:34:39 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021834.l62IYd78034509@freefall.freebsd.org> To: keve@safe-mail.net, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/113228: Incorrect and misleading ntp.conf "restrict" example in the ntpd chapter of the handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 18:34:44 -0000 Synopsis: Incorrect and misleading ntp.conf "restrict" example in the ntpd chapter of the handbook State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 18:34:38 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: I added a note to the text that -might- confuse users. However if you read closely the text mentions that it will restrict access and if you need additional information you will need to read the manual (which is always a good idea if you configure something you dont understand). http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=113228 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 18:37:37 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 773B616A41F; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:37:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4CA4313C43E; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:37:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62IbbI3034744; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:37:37 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62Iba8d034740; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:37:37 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:37:37 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021837.l62Iba8d034740@freefall.freebsd.org> To: mls@piqqem.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/113274: Handbook needs file execution troubleshooting section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 18:37:37 -0000 Synopsis: Handbook needs file execution troubleshooting section State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 18:37:36 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Since there is no patch yet I will close the PR. IF someone has a patch for this, poke me and I will add it to the ticket and reopen it. Till that time I will not pretend that wewill be fixing this. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=113274 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 18:40:10 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 42D3E16A469 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:40:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7CEAF13C44B for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:40:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62Ie9VJ034882 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:40:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62Ie9GU034881; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:40:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:40:09 GMT Message-Id: <200707021840.l62Ie9GU034881@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/113228: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 18:40:10 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/113228; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/113228: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 18:32:49 +0000 (UTC) remko 2007-07-02 18:32:42 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers chapter.sgml Log: Add a note that the default instruction (restrict default ignore) will also prevent your server from updating from external sources. Refer to the ntp manual for more information. PR: docs/113228 (inspired by). Submitted by: Keve Nagy Revision Changes Path 1.97 +8 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:02:32 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A40E916A468; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:02:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6FFBD13C48A; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:02:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62J2W03036370; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:02:32 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62J2W3q036366; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:02:32 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:02:32 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021902.l62J2W3q036366@freefall.freebsd.org> To: remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, remko@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/109612: viapm manual page missing from 6.2 release X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:02:32 -0000 Synopsis: viapm manual page missing from 6.2 release Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->remko Responsible-Changed-By: remko Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:02:31 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: This is a real problem with all stuff under specific subdirectories (/man4/i386 for example) since they are not 'man*' probably. I will try to investigate this before I will go on holiday but perhaps it will take a little to resolve this. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=109612 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:13:56 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CB4316A46D; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:13:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CE9BD13C480; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:13:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JDte4037331; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:13:55 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JDtC5037327; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:13:55 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:13:55 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021913.l62JDtC5037327@freefall.freebsd.org> To: minimarmot@gmail.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114182: [patch] SLIP is super-ultra-modern (handbook/install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:13:56 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] SLIP is super-ultra-modern (handbook/install chapter) State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:13:55 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: I had committed the patch, thank you very much for your contribution! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114182 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:19:02 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7938316A4C0; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:19:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3C81D13C45E; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:19:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JJ1Rd037547; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:19:01 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JJ0lA037543; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:19:00 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:19:00 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021919.l62JJ0lA037543@freefall.freebsd.org> To: kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114178: hyphenation nit in handbook (install chapter) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:19:02 -0000 Synopsis: hyphenation nit in handbook (install chapter) State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:19:00 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: The patch was committed; thanks for the contribution! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114178 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:20:09 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EE1A616A41F for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DB9EE13C43E for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JK9VU037662 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JK9tS037659; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:09 GMT Message-Id: <200707021920.l62JK9tS037659@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114182: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:20:10 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114182; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114182: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:12:13 +0000 (UTC) remko 2007-07-02 19:12:08 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml Log: Move our cutting-edge SLIP documentation lower to the tree so that Ethernet is listed first (which is commonly used). PR: docs/114182 Submitted by: Ben Kaduk Revision Changes Path 1.356 +28 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:20:14 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6830116A400 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4EF7813C455 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JKETc037706 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:14 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JKE2J037705; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:14 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:20:14 GMT Message-Id: <200707021920.l62JKE2J037705@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114178: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:20:14 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114178; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114178: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:18:44 +0000 (UTC) remko 2007-07-02 19:18:38 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml Log: s/stand alone/stand-alone/ PR: docs/114178 Submitted by: Benjamin Kaduk Revision Changes Path 1.357 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:26:25 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DEC2616A476; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:26:25 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A857B13C4C6; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:26:25 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JQPTT038107; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:26:25 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JQPcf038103; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:26:25 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:26:25 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021926.l62JQPcf038103@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/95265: Correction to handbook section 26.5.16 IPNAT Rules X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:26:26 -0000 Synopsis: Correction to handbook section 26.5.16 IPNAT Rules State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:26:24 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: I am sorry but this does not seem to be needed. If you review the ipnat section, it should be clear for you that only the information there reflects ipnat and not ipf (Which was already discussed prior to the ipnat section). In addittion, the external address does not neccessarily have to be a public routable address, for instance you can use a ppp connection over a private ip which gets natted later. Thanks for the submission anyway. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=95265 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:46:52 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E0BFF16A468; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B7E0E13C44B; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JkqbZ040536; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:52 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JkqD5040532; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:52 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:52 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021946.l62JkqD5040532@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/95263: Correction to handbook section 26.5.21.3 FTP NAT Proxy Bug X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:46:53 -0000 Synopsis: Correction to handbook section 26.5.21.3 FTP NAT Proxy Bug State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:46:51 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Committed. Thanks! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=95263 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:49:52 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 37E7616A421; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:49:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0A6FA13C484; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:49:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JnpbG040688; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:49:51 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JnpIg040684; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:49:51 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:49:51 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021949.l62JnpIg040684@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/95262: Correction to handbook section 26.5.20 Port Redirection X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:49:52 -0000 Synopsis: Correction to handbook section 26.5.20 Port Redirection State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:49:51 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: This does like something that should not be committed like this. The submitters mail bounces, if he reads this: please submit unified diffs next time so that the changes are more clear. Since i dont want to pretend that I will resolve this ; close the PR. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=95262 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:50:10 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F070D16A41F for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:50:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D7C3E13C45A for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:50:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JoAUB040784 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:50:10 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JoArZ040781; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:50:10 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:50:10 GMT Message-Id: <200707021950.l62JoArZ040781@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/95263: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:50:11 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/95263; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/95263: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:46:34 +0000 (UTC) remko 2007-07-02 19:46:27 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml Log: Remove a section about ipfilter FTP Proxy Bugs, which were resolved in version 3.4.3 released in 2000, a little ago. PR: docs/95263 Submitted by: Joe Revision Changes Path 1.76 +0 -21 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 19:56:23 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AA87716A47E; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5AE6C13C48C; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62JuNjl041234; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:23 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62JuMwt041230; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:22 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:22 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707021956.l62JuMwt041230@freefall.freebsd.org> To: edwin@mavetju.org, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/112693: [patch] update en/multimedia data-file X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:56:23 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] update en/multimedia data-file State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 19:56:22 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Hi edwin, the change had been committed, thanks for the submission! :) http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=112693 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 20:00:15 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EEC3616A41F for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:00:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD32B13C469 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:00:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62K0F0d041440 for ; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:00:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62K0FVI041436; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:00:15 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:00:15 GMT Message-Id: <200707022000.l62K0FVI041436@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) Cc: Subject: Re: docs/112693: commit references a PR X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: dfilter service List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 20:00:16 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/112693; it has been noted by GNATS. From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/112693: commit references a PR Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 19:56:07 +0000 (UTC) remko 2007-07-02 19:56:01 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en/multimedia multimedia-input.xml Log: Update multimedia data file: o Add bsdtalk 111,110,109 o Add NYCBUG pkgsrcCon talk o Add OpenBSD Release Songs o Add "Linux and FreeBSD video tutorials. For everyone." and initial catchup. PR: docs/112693 Submitted by: edwin Revision Changes Path 1.2 +288 -0 www/en/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 20:10:47 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C59816A46B; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:10:47 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E54FA13C457; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:10:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62KAkQi042510; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:10:46 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62KAk3P042505; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:10:46 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:10:46 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707022010.l62KAk3P042505@freefall.freebsd.org> To: dennisolvany@gmail.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/99007: [patch] misleading nat configuration info X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 20:10:47 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] misleading nat configuration info State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 20:10:45 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: feedback timeout. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=99007 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 20:13:56 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5D52C16A46C; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:13:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 34D1913C45B; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:13:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62KDuSg042859; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:13:56 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62KDuuB042855; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:13:56 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:13:56 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707022013.l62KDuuB042855@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/93249: rewrite of handbook chapter 23 (PPP & SLIP) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 20:13:56 -0000 Synopsis: rewrite of handbook chapter 23 (PPP & SLIP) State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 20:13:55 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Can you please wrap this in a unified diff? thanks. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=93249 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 2 20:15:44 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9996716A46C; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:15:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7021D13C4AD; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:15:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (remko@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l62KFiEX043000; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:15:44 GMT (envelope-from remko@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l62KFiuX042996; Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:15:44 GMT (envelope-from remko) Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 20:15:44 GMT From: Remko Lodder Message-Id: <200707022015.l62KFiuX042996@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com, remko@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/93249: rewrite of handbook chapter 23 (PPP & SLIP) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 02 Jul 2007 20:15:44 -0000 Synopsis: rewrite of handbook chapter 23 (PPP & SLIP) State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed State-Changed-By: remko State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 2 20:15:43 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Crap I forgot that the email bounces; close the ticket. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=93249 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 14:47:03 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C124C16A421 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 14:47:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from max@love2party.net) Received: from moutng.kundenserver.de (moutng.kundenserver.de [212.227.126.174]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CEAF813C484 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 14:47:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from max@love2party.net) Received: from [88.64.181.58] (helo=amd64.laiers.local) by mrelayeu.kundenserver.de (node=mrelayeu0) with ESMTP (Nemesis), id 0MKwh2-1I5jSJ3ysu-0004Bz; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:34:28 +0200 From: Max Laier Organization: FreeBSD To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:35:50 +0200 User-Agent: KMail/1.9.6 X-Face: ,,8R(x[kmU]tKN@>gtH1yQE4aslGdu+2]; R]*pL,U>^H?)gW@49@wdJ`H<%}*_BD U_or=\mOZf764&nYj=JYbR1PW0ud>|!~, , CPC.1-D$FG@0h3#'5"k{V]a~. X-Provags-ID: V01U2FsdGVkX182y0KPWMQzTNZ6gRTcB35Uh7gSbrAwOVzxfGu I6zMGVa9PUuFMaSLgtuGilBY8aJkQ3iO85LBPX12127sMVQo/M l2sfX+Kh8FuxVI2ylCBKkxWYZby0cq+uuIaPzvaeRM= Subject: List of pf changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 14:47:03 -0000 --nextPart1773231.OGSZeGI1A9 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Disposition: inline Here is a list of significant changes to pf that came in with the import=20 from OpenBSD 4.1 (taken from the OpenBSD release notes): 3.8 3.9 * ftp-proxy has been rewritten, and a tftp version, tftp-proxy, has been=20 added. 4.0 * pf(4) now supports Unicast Reverse Path Forwarding (uRPF) checks for=20 simplified ingress filtering. 4.1 * The pflog(4) interface is now clonable. pf(4) can log to multiple pflog=20 interfaces now, each rule can specify which pflog interface to log to.=20 pflogd(8) can now be told which pflog interface to work with. * pfctl(8) can now expire table entries. * keep state is now the default for pf.conf(5) rules, as is the flags S/SA= =20 option on TCP connections. no state and flags any can be used to disable= =20 stateful filtering or TCP flags checking. * The pfctl(8) ruleset optimiser can be enabled in pf.conf(5). * pf(4) anchors can now be loaded inline in the main pf.conf(5) and can be= =20 printed recursively. * Allow pf(4) rules inside anchors to have their counters reset, and make=20 counter read & reset an atomic operation. I'm not sure if we have a good place to document this - thus I'm sending=20 it here. I'd be interested in better pf documentation. Maybe we can use=20 a wiki page? Any help greatly appreciated! =2D-=20 =46reeBSD Status reports due: 07/07/07 :-) /"\ Best regards, | mlaier@freebsd.org \ / Max Laier | ICQ #67774661 X http://pf4freebsd.love2party.net/ | mlaier@EFnet / \ ASCII Ribbon Campaign | Against HTML Mail and News --nextPart1773231.OGSZeGI1A9 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQBGil7MXyyEoT62BG0RAvGSAJ9U62R4UnEdEwffgNQcvfHOhafgSQCfTqkD TSRf7P7ONoUX3vmKjr/6+IU= =p1cX -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --nextPart1773231.OGSZeGI1A9-- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 15:30:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8D67A16A4A6 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 15:30:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from peter@bsdly.net) Received: from skapet.datadok.no (skapet.datadok.no [194.54.107.19]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CEF513C4C8 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 15:30:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from peter@bsdly.net) Received: from thingy.datadok.no ([194.54.103.97] helo=thingy.datadok.no.bsdly.net ident=peter) by skapet.datadok.no with esmtp (Exim 4.62) (envelope-from ) id 1I5jo0-00002Y-NL; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:56:40 +0200 To: Max Laier References: <200707031635.56471.max@love2party.net> From: peter@bsdly.net (Peter N. M. Hansteen) Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:56:38 +0200 In-Reply-To: <200707031635.56471.max@love2party.net> (Max Laier's message of "Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:35:50 +0200") Message-ID: <873b05sfh5.fsf@thingy.datadok.no> User-Agent: Gnus/5.1007 (Gnus v5.10.7) XEmacs/21.4.19 (berkeley-unix) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: List of pf changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 15:30:04 -0000 Max Laier writes: > I'm not sure if we have a good place to document this - thus I'm sending > it here. I'd be interested in better pf documentation. Maybe we can use > a wiki page? Any help greatly appreciated! AFAIK my basic patch to expand the PF info in the Handbook's firewalls chapter still applies, http://www.bsdly.net/~peter/freebsd/fw.diff, and might be a possible starting point. I'm far enough behind the deadlines for the book as it is, so I probably will not be able to do anything about this bit until after EuroBSDCon at the earliest (unless inspiration strikes along with some extra energy from a new found source). Cheers, -- Peter N. M. Hansteen, member of the first RFC 1149 implementation team http://www.blug.linux.no/rfc1149/ http://www.datadok.no/ http://www.nuug.no/ "Remember to set the evil bit on all malicious network traffic" delilah spamd[29949]: 85.152.224.147: disconnected after 42673 seconds. From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 16:20:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 888ED16A400 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:20:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 677E813C45A for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:20:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l63GK4DM052097 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:20:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l63GK4ii052096; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:20:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:20:04 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707031620.l63GK4ii052096@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Pete French Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E476B16A468 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:14:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from petefrench@ticketswitch.com) Received: from mail.ticketswitch.com (mail.ticketswitch.com [194.200.93.188]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A6E8513C447 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:14:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from petefrench@ticketswitch.com) Received: from dilbert.rattatosk ([10.50.50.6] helo=dilbert.ticketswitch.com) by mail.ticketswitch.com with esmtp (Exim 4.67 (FreeBSD)) (envelope-from ) id 1I5kjl-0000f3-To for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:56:21 +0100 Received: from petefrench by dilbert.ticketswitch.com with local (Exim 4.67 (FreeBSD)) (envelope-from ) id 1I5kjl-0003VI-Sa for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:56:21 +0100 Message-Id: Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:56:21 +0100 From: Pete French To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114259: constants the wrong way round in the ng_fec manpage X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Pete French List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:20:04 -0000 >Number: 114259 >Category: docs >Synopsis: constants the wrong way round in the ng_fec manpage >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 16:20:03 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Pete French >Release: FreeBSD 6.2-STABLE i386 >Organization: TicketSwitch Ltd >Environment: System: FreeBSD dilbert.rattatosk 6.2-STABLE FreeBSD 6.2-STABLE #4: Fri Jun 29 14:48:07 BST 2007 petefrench@dilbert.rattatosk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/DILBERT i386 6.2-STABLE >Description: in the man page for ng_fec the constants against set_mode_mac and set_mode_inet are the wrong way round. NGM_FEC_MODE_MAC should be against set_mode_mac and NGM_FEC_MODE_INET against set_mode_inet >How-To-Repeat: man ng_fec >Fix: swap them round :) >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 19:20:01 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6EB0B16A46B for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:20:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4CB1313C484 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:20:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l63JK1VS067689 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:20:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l63JK1a8067688; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:20:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:20:01 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707031920.l63JK1a8067688@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Ben Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 45C3816A46D for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:12:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 34C7813C4AE for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:12:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l63JCF58091398 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:12:15 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l63JCFjb091397; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:12:15 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200707031912.l63JCFjb091397@www.freebsd.org> Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 19:12:15 GMT From: Ben Kaduk To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.0 Cc: Subject: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 19:20:01 -0000 >Number: 114265 >Category: docs >Synopsis: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 19:20:00 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 7.0-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: I attach a diff with many small changes in it; I'll take them in order. o groups-->group: either add an apostrophe to make it possessive or take it out; as is, it's wrong o an administrator-->that administrators: recommend is transitive o every other file system-->other file systems: you can mount filesystems on non-root filesystems, as described later. This change makes the text more correct . o grafted on the root file system-->...parent file system: same as previous o should-->must: in context, the requirement of FreeBSD is that you give a fully-qualified slice name, which includes the disk name. Out of context, someone else might not require this, but the first half of the sentence implies that we are telling the user how to talk to FreeBSD o three partitions-->three data partitions: no, it has four partitions -- three for data and one for swap. Make the text less confusing o [no PID collisions]: just seems like it might save some confusion o daemons et al: change punctuation for style/readibility; remove sentence fragment o BIND: actually is domain, not daemon, as discussed fairly recently on cvs-doc@ o signals: the current text implies that signals are the only way to communicate with daemons; however, I seem to recall that some daemons listen on local sockets for commands, or read named pipes o kill: punctuation correction o occur-->appear: occur implies action (to me, at least); appear is more passive o help-->help with: verb transitivity again o variable key-->variable/key: it's a pair, so punctuate it as such (I didn't do a build and I don't remember if the slash is a special character for sgml -- do you?) o colon separated-->colon-separated (twice): style? o terminal-->type of terminal: so as to avoid confusion with (e.g.) ttyv0 >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics.html and the rest of the chapter >Fix: patch attached as chapter.sgml.diff.txt; I will skip inlining it since firefox/mac will probably trash the tabs. Patch attached with submission follows: --- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-06-29 15:19:47.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.sgml 2007-07-03 13:55:40.000000000 -0500 @@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ A comma separated list can be provided when more than one set of changes to a file must be made. For example the following command - will remove the groups and world write permission + will remove the group and world write permission on FILE, then it adds the execute permissions for everyone: @@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ Several flags may only added or removed to files by the root user. In other cases, the file owner - may set these flags. It is recommended an administrator read + may set these flags. It is recommended that administrators read over the &man.chflags.1; and &man.chflags.2; manual pages for more information. @@ -634,11 +634,12 @@ /. This directory is the first one mounted at boot time and it contains the base system necessary to prepare the operating system for multi-user operation. The root - directory also contains mount points for every other file system - that you may want to mount. + directory also contains mount points for other file systems + that are mounted during the transition to multi-user + operation. A mount point is a directory where additional file systems can - be grafted onto the root file system. + be grafted onto a parent file system (usually the root file system). This is further described in . Standard mount points include /usr, /var, /tmp, @@ -1250,7 +1251,8 @@ When referring to a partition FreeBSD requires that you also name the slice and disk that contains the partition, and when referring to - a slice you should also refer to the disk name. Do this by listing + a slice you must also refer to the disk name. + Thus, you refer to a partition by listing the disk name, s, the slice number, and then the partition letter. Examples are shown in . @@ -1357,7 +1359,7 @@ two 2 GB slices (&ms-dos; partitions). The first slice contains a &ms-dos; disk, C:, and the second slice contains a FreeBSD installation. This example FreeBSD installation has three - partitions, and a swap partition. + data partitions, and a swap partition. The three partitions will each hold a file system. Partition a will be used for the root file system, @@ -1738,7 +1740,8 @@ As you can see in this example, the output from &man.ps.1; is organized into a number of columns. PID is the process ID discussed earlier. PIDs are assigned starting from 1, go up - to 99999, and wrap around back to the beginning when you run out. + to 99999, and wrap around back to the beginning when you run out + (a PID is not reassigned if it is already in use). The TT column shows the tty the program is running on, and can safely be ignored for the moment. STAT shows the program's state, and again, can be safely ignored. @@ -1755,7 +1758,8 @@ about all the running processes, not just your own. displays the username of the process' owner, as well as memory usage. displays information about daemon processes, and - causes &man.ps.1; to display the full command line, + causes &man.ps.1; to display the full command line + for each process, rather than truncating it once it gets too long to fit on the screen. @@ -1815,32 +1819,32 @@ example of this class of application. We call these programs daemons. Daemons were - characters in Greek mythology; neither good or evil, they were little - attendant spirits that, by and large, did useful things for mankind. - Much like the web servers and mail servers of today do useful things. - This is why the BSD mascot has, for a long time, been the cheerful - looking daemon with sneakers and a pitchfork. + characters in Greek mythology: neither good or evil, they were little + attendant spirits that, by and large, did useful things for mankind, + much like the web servers and mail servers of today do useful things. + This is why the BSD mascot has, for a long time, been the + cheerful-looking daemon with sneakers and a pitchfork. There is a convention to name programs that normally run as daemons with a trailing d. BIND is the - Berkeley Internet Name Daemon (and the actual program that executes is called - named), the Apache web - server program is called httpd, the line printer + Berkeley Internet Name Domain, but the actual program that executes is called + named; the Apache web + server program is called httpd; the line printer spooling daemon is lpd and so on. This is a convention, not a hard and fast rule; for example, the main mail daemon for the Sendmail application is called sendmail, and not maild, as you might imagine. - Sometimes you will need to communicate with a daemon process. These - communications are called signals, and you can - communicate with a daemon (or with any other running process) by sending it a - signal. There are a number of different signals that you can + Sometimes you will need to communicate with a daemon process. + One way to do so is to send it (or any other running process), + what is known as a signal. + There are a number of different signals that you can send—some of them have a specific meaning, others are interpreted by the application, and the application's documentation will tell you how that application interprets signals. You can only send a signal to a process that you own. If you send a signal to someone else's - process with &man.kill.1; or &man.kill.2; permission will be denied. + process with &man.kill.1; or &man.kill.2;, permission will be denied. The exception to this is the root user, who can send signals to everyone's processes. @@ -1918,7 +1922,7 @@ 198 ?? IWs 0:00.00 inetd -wW So the &man.inetd.8; PID is 198. In some cases the - grep inetd command might also occur in this + grep inetd command might also appear in this output. This is because of the way &man.ps.1; has to find the list of running processes. @@ -1979,7 +1983,7 @@ In FreeBSD, a lot of everyday work is done in a command line interface called a shell. A shell's main job is to take commands from the input channel and execute them. A lot of shells also have - built in functions to help everyday tasks such as file management, + built in functions to help with everyday tasks such as file management, file globbing, command line editing, command macros, and environment variables. FreeBSD comes with a set of shells, such as sh, the Bourne Shell, and tcsh, @@ -2018,7 +2022,7 @@ environment variables Another feature of the shell is the use of environment variables. - Environment variables are a variable key pair stored in the shell's + Environment variables are a variable/key pair stored in the shell's environment space. This space can be read by any program invoked by the shell, and thus contains a lot of program configuration. Here is a list of common environment variables and what they mean: @@ -2041,7 +2045,7 @@ PATH - Colon separated list of directories to search for + Colon-separated list of directories to search for binaries. @@ -2058,7 +2062,7 @@ TERM - The name of the user's terminal. Used to determine the + The name of the user's type of terminal. Used to determine the capabilities of the terminal. @@ -2091,7 +2095,7 @@ MANPATH - Colon separated list of directories to search for + Colon-separated list of directories to search for manual pages. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 23:30:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AFC3E16A46D for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:30:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 901FE13C458 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:30:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l63NU49c091526 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:30:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l63NU4M1091525; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:30:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:30:04 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707032330.l63NU4M1091525@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Ben Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 11DB916A400 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:20:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E9BE613C44C for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:20:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l63NK64h045497 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:20:06 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l63NK6oI045496; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:20:06 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200707032320.l63NK6oI045496@www.freebsd.org> Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:20:06 GMT From: Ben Kaduk To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.0 Cc: Subject: docs/114272: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 23:30:04 -0000 >Number: 114272 >Category: docs >Synopsis: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 23:30:03 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 7.0-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: I attach a patch (chapter.sgml.diff.txt) with many minor corrections to the ``ports'' handbook chapter, which I will detail here (not necessarily in order). o s/third party/third-party/g o s/Pentium IV/Pentium 4/ (preferred in at least one place on Intel's website o s/compile time/compile/time/g (a priori not a global change, but I checked) o PACKAGESITE: was used before defined as an environment variable, then defined as an environment variable. Move clarification to first usage o add a note that pkg_delete requires name and version (I forget this a lot). Please review the markup; I'm not sure that is the best tag for that text o add reference to sha256 as well as md5, and change the wording a bit to make clear that the checksums are not built, but included in distinfo. I suppose that the md5 and sha256 man pages are the same, so perhaps they both don't need to be mentioned, but md5 is not the only hash used for this purpose >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports.html and the rest of the chapter >Fix: patch attached Patch attached with submission follows: --- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-07-03 18:10:53.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.sgml 2007-07-03 17:13:58.000000000 -0500 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ part of the base system. However, there is only so much one can do before needing to install an additional third-party application to get real work done. FreeBSD provides two - complementary technologies for installing third party software + complementary technologies for installing third-party software on your system: the FreeBSD Ports Collection (for installing from source), and packages (for installing from pre-built binaries). Either method may be used to install the @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Overview of Software Installation If you have used a &unix; system before you will know that - the typical procedure for installing third party software goes + the typical procedure for installing third-party software goes something like this: @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ traditional way with FreeBSD. However, FreeBSD provides two technologies which can save you a lot of effort: packages and ports. At the time of writing, over &os.numports; - third party applications have been made available in this + third-party applications have been made available in this way. For any given application, the FreeBSD package for that @@ -174,11 +174,11 @@ because they have to run on the maximum number of systems. By installing from the port, you can tweak the compilation options to (for example) generate code that is specific to a Pentium - IV or Athlon processor. + 4 or Athlon processor. - Some applications have compile time options relating to + Some applications have compile-time options relating to what they can and cannot do. For example, Apache can be configured with a wide variety of different built-in options. By building @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ whether or not you have installed an X11 server. This sort of rough tweaking is possible with packages, but rapidly becomes impossible if an application has more than one or - two different compile time options. + two different compile-time options. @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ The remainder of this chapter will explain how to use - packages and ports to install and manage third party software on + packages and ports to install and manage third-party software on FreeBSD. @@ -414,8 +414,8 @@ The example above would download the correct package and add it without any further user intervention. If you want to specify an alternative &os; Packages Mirror, - instead of the main distribution site, you have to set - PACKAGESITE accordingly, to + instead of the main distribution site, you have to set the + PACKAGESITE environment variable accordingly, to override the default settings. &man.pkg.add.1; uses &man.fetch.3; to download the files, which honors various environment variables, including @@ -436,8 +436,8 @@ &os.stable;. If you run a -RELEASE version, it will grab the version of the package that was built with your release. It is possible to change this behavior by - overriding the PACKAGESITE environment - variable. For example, if you run a &os; 5.4-RELEASE + overriding PACKAGESITE. + For example, if you run a &os; 5.4-RELEASE system, by default &man.pkg.add.1; will try to fetch packages from ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/i386/packages-5.4-release/Latest/. @@ -553,6 +553,13 @@ &prompt.root; pkg_delete xchat-1.7.1 + + Note that &man.pkg.delete.1; requires the full package name + and number; the above command would not work if + xchat was given instead of + xchat-1.7.1. It is, however, easy to use + &man.pkg.version.1; to find the version of the installed package. + @@ -817,9 +824,10 @@ A distinfo file. This file contains information about the files that must be - downloaded to build the port and their checksums, to + downloaded to build the port, and their checksums + (using &man.md5.1; and &man.sha256.1;), to verify that files have not been corrupted during the - download using &man.md5.1;. + download. @@ -985,7 +993,7 @@ documentation for your shell for more information. - Some third party DVD-ROM products such as the FreeBSD Toolkit + Some third-party DVD-ROM products such as the FreeBSD Toolkit from the FreeBSD Mall contain distfiles. They can be used with the Ports Collection. Mount the DVD-ROM on /cdrom. If >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 3 23:41:03 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4EDC316A421 for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:41:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from wa-out-1112.google.com (wa-out-1112.google.com [209.85.146.181]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2CE5913C45E for ; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 23:41:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by wa-out-1112.google.com with SMTP id j37so2994630waf for ; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:41:02 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition; b=ra+mA6m6k47a+psZQVJm8IuuJiSKHAsdDzavJMj4dQjY/LpWmLAA2rI6K6UuiDYSguXGCaVmMJrER6c0unrb+eYslvfLadviW0Ojej8wg/TeE4/qtrxgItNwenesvNaph66dwZCZGK0RA4bZbMTjyULR2JLMq0QQzL731093KVU= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition; b=bjA61AMjoqUml93xn/n81nRXTstRzs/5memk/Fz0smDytaBnUFvmLPbPDJ+beLJ5VFOL76Hk5s/QJ/bLdW41jQvN4UnHohcj46wZCkN0NjOSjSOoHSbqR4vM/JDSTbu57VFynByh0ZUMp9Clp5a2mfN0wsjO5+obghQes3GLhyY= Received: by 10.142.212.19 with SMTP id k19mr481378wfg.1183506062697; Tue, 03 Jul 2007 16:41:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.143.14.5 with HTTP; Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:41:02 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <47d0403c0707031641j68c686b9sa4aa01119170ae59@mail.gmail.com> Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 18:41:02 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline Subject: what is the definition of X11? X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2007 23:41:03 -0000 Hi all, The subject line may seem a bit off-topic, but as I'm making my way through the handbook on a grammar-checking spree, I came across this bit of text, and I'm not sure how to parse it: FreeBSD uses X11 to provide users with a powerful graphical user interface. X11 is an open-source implementation of the X Window System that includes both Xorg and XFree86. Wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X11) seems to imply that the X window system is a protocol (for the client/server communication?), so then X11 is a version of this protocol, and Xorg and XFree86 are implementations of this protocol (but I am loth to blindly trust wikipedia). If this is true, then the above quote isn't quite right, as the inclusion should somehow be the other way -- Xorg and XFree86 both implement X11 (``include'' it in them). Of course the text could be changed to say that the X11 protocol is used by many different softwares, including both Xorg and XFree86, but that still seems a bit awkward. Any comments from someone who knows more than I about what all these terms mean? -Ben Kaduk From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 05:43:12 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2830216A41F for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 05:43:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from asmodai@in-nomine.org) Received: from smtp-vbr6.xs4all.nl (smtp-vbr6.xs4all.nl [194.109.24.26]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B7D9813C469 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 05:43:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from asmodai@in-nomine.org) Received: from nexus.in-nomine.org (chronias.xs4all.nl [82.92.216.8]) by smtp-vbr6.xs4all.nl (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l645UmO5014145; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:30:49 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from asmodai@in-nomine.org) Received: from localhost (localhost.domini.in-nomine.org [127.0.0.1]) by nexus.in-nomine.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5B7B9C40D; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:29:34 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: by XS4ALL Virus Scanner Received: from nexus.in-nomine.org ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (nexus.domini.in-nomine.org [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 6Q9iq0-JGoym; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:29:31 +0200 (CEST) Received: by nexus.in-nomine.org (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 1CDCBC40B; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:29:31 +0200 (CEST) Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:29:30 +0200 From: Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven To: Ben Kaduk Message-ID: <20070704052930.GU30825@nexus.in-nomine.org> References: <47d0403c0707031641j68c686b9sa4aa01119170ae59@mail.gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit In-Reply-To: <47d0403c0707031641j68c686b9sa4aa01119170ae59@mail.gmail.com> Organisation: Ninth Circle Enterprises User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.15 (2007-04-06) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: what is the definition of X11? X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 05:43:12 -0000 -On [20070704 01:39], Ben Kaduk (minimarmot@gmail.com) wrote: > Wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X11) seems to imply that the X > window system is a protocol (for the client/server communication?), so > then X11 is a version of this protocol, and Xorg and XFree86 are > implementations of this protocol (but I am loth to blindly trust > wikipedia). > > If this is true, then the above quote isn't quite right, as the > inclusion should somehow be the other way -- Xorg and XFree86 both > implement X11 (``include'' it in them). Of course the text could be > changed to say that the X11 protocol is used by many different > softwares, including both Xorg and XFree86, but that still seems a bit > awkward. > > Any comments from someone who knows more than I about what all these terms > mean? It's difficult, since you are now in the shady zone of accepted word usage that's a bit beyond the original definition. People typically say: X, X11 (since that has been, over the past 10 years at least, the dominant/only version left), X Windows (how wrong it may be), or X Window System. So when people say X or X11 they refer to their desktop/window manager commonly. Yes, pedantically X11 is just a protocol. If you want to be less ambiguous you could opt for 'X Window System' instead of X11, but in the Unix community X11/X is readily understood. And then the question becomes: would it make a difference for any newcomers? I wonder what X.org says actually. -- Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven / asmodai イェルーン ラウフロック ヴァン デル ウェルヴェン http://www.in-nomine.org/ | http://www.rangaku.org/ When you blame others, you give up your power to change... From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 07:01:19 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 73FB016A46D for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:01:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: from ug-out-1314.google.com (ug-out-1314.google.com [66.249.92.172]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C96ED13C4D0 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 07:01:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from illoai@gmail.com) Received: by ug-out-1314.google.com with SMTP id o4so272885uge for ; Wed, 04 Jul 2007 00:01:17 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=dKMutIv8G44b9T3hqJtW1d+aD7C58lY3ym8uO1MQbB+h4xZshdn99wY1FIXKfOqupCtXHKGfqBNBvHSmRe2nbbQJn6w1npH+QyAG9MaxBBwPcGVaaevoCG1U3hAmCAv6ieYor6N8MGuLy51x/NvbTGUyBrqJm3Z8AxJKVRchy3g= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=Ed8+A6wkwec5vXY/wjA0skYfoieA8FvCrUKPo+g4FFTOrPdxMH1KTIYjCB6wjiofPGWoy2x7bpUFtDsOUJUs4gXt1PdNYmllO2aTTnX9llOcFwnh3GhSTfOKY9okCFOZvzQjw8WGT/ko/Q3+Pl1D/C7ig8cfOwuTAgiiJsPcX5k= Received: by 10.82.178.11 with SMTP id a11mr17149744buf.1183532477266; Wed, 04 Jul 2007 00:01:17 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.82.187.6 with HTTP; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 00:01:17 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 02:01:17 -0500 From: "illoai@gmail.com" To: "Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven" In-Reply-To: <20070704052930.GU30825@nexus.in-nomine.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <47d0403c0707031641j68c686b9sa4aa01119170ae59@mail.gmail.com> <20070704052930.GU30825@nexus.in-nomine.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: what is the definition of X11? X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 07:01:19 -0000 On 04/07/07, Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven wrote: > -On [20070704 01:39], Ben Kaduk (minimarmot@gmail.com) wrote: > > Wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X11) seems to imply that the X > > window system is a protocol (for the client/server communication?), so > > then X11 is a version of this protocol, and Xorg and XFree86 are > > implementations of this protocol (but I am loth to blindly trust > > wikipedia). > > > > If this is true, then the above quote isn't quite right, as the > > inclusion should somehow be the other way -- Xorg and XFree86 both > > implement X11 (``include'' it in them). Of course the text could be > > changed to say that the X11 protocol is used by many different > > softwares, including both Xorg and XFree86, but that still seems a bit > > awkward. > > > > Any comments from someone who knows more than I about what all these terms > > mean? > > It's difficult, since you are now in the shady zone of accepted word usage > that's a bit beyond the original definition. > > People typically say: X, X11 (since that has been, over the past 10 years at > least, the dominant/only version left), X Windows (how wrong it may be), or X > Window System. > > So when people say X or X11 they refer to their desktop/window manager > commonly. Yes, pedantically X11 is just a protocol. > If you want to be less ambiguous you could opt for 'X Window System' instead > of X11, but in the Unix community X11/X is readily understood. And then the > question becomes: would it make a difference for any newcomers? > > I wonder what X.org says actually. > Well, those who a horse hae in th' race . . . But the reality is, as you point out, that the reality of the term is that X11 is as fungible as any of the other "improper" terms. X is the successor to W, which was probably not the real first windowing system, but who was there? X11 is the "current" (I suppose since 1988 is current) version of the protocol (or whatever this monster is) and works as well as an identifying appelation as anything else, since it would seem we can't get by with just calling it "Windows" like a certain other narcissisitc hydra doth. -- -- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 08:13:28 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 24C7816A468 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:13:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from Steven.Milsom@jerseytelecom.com) Received: from mail.jerseytelecom.com (mail3.jerseytelecom.com [212.9.21.213]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ACA8413C44B for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:13:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from Steven.Milsom@jerseytelecom.com) Received: from cor-notes-01.jerseytelecom.com ([10.0.253.15]) by mail.jerseytelecom.com with Microsoft SMTPSVC(6.0.3790.1830); Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:54:13 +0100 To: doc@FreeBSD.org MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Lotus Notes Build V80_M5_05202007 May 20, 2007 Message-ID: From: Steven Milsom Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:56:17 +0100 X-MIMETrack: Serialize by Router on cor-notes-01/JerseyTelecoms/GB(Release 6.5.5FP2|October 23, 2006) at 04/07/2007 08:56:22, Serialize complete at 04/07/2007 08:56:22 X-OriginalArrivalTime: 04 Jul 2007 07:54:13.0348 (UTC) FILETIME=[83365A40:01C7BE10] Content-Type: text/plain; charset="US-ASCII" X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.5 Cc: Subject: Port path change in handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 08:13:28 -0000 Hi, One stale path to fix in the handbook... http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports-overview.html In the second to last sentence the port for "portaudit" is listed as being found at "ports-mgmt/portaudit" when it's now at "security/portaudit" Regards, Steve Milsom Broadband Networks Jersey Telecom Tel +44 (0)1534 882802 Mob +44 (0)7797 792802 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 08:33:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 58F9816A400 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:33:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from delphij@delphij.net) Received: from tarsier.geekcn.org (tarsier.geekcn.org [210.51.165.229]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0757E13C44C for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:33:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from delphij@delphij.net) Received: from localhost (tarsier.geekcn.org [210.51.165.229]) by tarsier.geekcn.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 435A1EB462B; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 16:16:59 +0800 (CST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at geekcn.org Received: from tarsier.geekcn.org ([210.51.165.229]) by localhost (mail.geekcn.org [210.51.165.229]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 4lZSZGhIcaTS; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 16:16:56 +0800 (CST) Received: from LI-Xins-MacBook.local (sina152-194.staff.sina.com.cn [61.135.152.194]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by tarsier.geekcn.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8D6CEEB4522; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 16:16:56 +0800 (CST) DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; s=default; d=delphij.net; c=nofws; q=dns; h=message-id:date:from:organization:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc: subject:references:in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type; b=vkiYCwn0ToeI+m4x+g3FWH7lnZFm8nF1kzIGvrqqipOU3bpvvlzFEmm4DaiS0Al8V m2SVBdVwRMGkxAnmqVcXw== Message-ID: <468B5775.5000600@delphij.net> Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 16:16:53 +0800 From: LI Xin Organization: The FreeBSD Project User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.4 (Macintosh/20070604) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Steven Milsom References: In-Reply-To: X-Enigmail-Version: 0.95.2 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="------------enig1464B0CCD58546E8EC0DB045" Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Port path change in handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 08:33:04 -0000 This is an OpenPGP/MIME signed message (RFC 2440 and 3156) --------------enig1464B0CCD58546E8EC0DB045 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Steven Milsom wrote: > Hi, >=20 > One stale path to fix in the handbook... >=20 > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports-overvie= w.html >=20 > In the second to last sentence the port for "portaudit" is listed as be= ing=20 > found at "ports-mgmt/portaudit" when it's now at "security/portaudit" Please update your local ports tree. portaudit has been moved to ports-mgmt/ long ago... Cheers, --=20 Xin LI http://www.delphij.net/ FreeBSD - The Power to Serve! --------------enig1464B0CCD58546E8EC0DB045 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" Content-Description: OpenPGP digital signature Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.7 (Darwin) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org iD8DBQFGi1d1OfuToMruuMARCogDAJ9ZNtMUpanYWfeyun6MwyxgY/raqwCeNTVw K39vPOYsxzrWHjNdWBZssQw= =nD5k -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------enig1464B0CCD58546E8EC0DB045-- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 08:34:29 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D944616A41F for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:34:29 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from erwin@mail.droso.net) Received: from mail.droso.net (koala.droso.net [193.88.12.38]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A15DB13C447 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 08:34:29 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from erwin@mail.droso.net) Received: by mail.droso.net (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 7BFAB1CC9E; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:18:56 +0200 (CEST) Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:18:56 +0200 From: Erwin Lansing To: Steven Milsom Message-ID: <20070704081856.GM37472@droso.net> Mail-Followup-To: Steven Milsom , doc@FreeBSD.org References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="xSXKkePCxtN78XFb" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: X-Operating-System: FreeBSD/i386 6.2-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.15 (2007-04-06) Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Port path change in handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 08:34:29 -0000 --xSXKkePCxtN78XFb Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Wed, Jul 04, 2007 at 08:56:17AM +0100, Steven Milsom wrote: > Hi, Hi Steven, >=20 > One stale path to fix in the handbook... >=20 > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports-overview.= html >=20 > In the second to last sentence the port for "portaudit" is listed as bein= g=20 > found at "ports-mgmt/portaudit" when it's now at "security/portaudit" >=20 Actually, it's the other way around. It was moved _from_ security/ _to_ ports-mgmt, so I guess you have an old ports tree at your hands. The handbook is right in this case. Cheers, -erwin --=20 Erwin Lansing http://droso.org Security is like an onion. (o_ _o) It's made up of several layers \\\_\ /_/// erwin@FreeBSD.org And it makes you cry. <____) (____> erwin@aauug.dk --xSXKkePCxtN78XFb Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.7 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFGi1fwqy9aWxUlaZARAvtwAJ9LoYLq/HazqTOcbXw4ndPnXgD/nACgiAzk gO0ayRD6MJLQWqMycn4oFJI= =tmy2 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --xSXKkePCxtN78XFb-- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 09:10:13 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3536B16A469 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EEE9713C468 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l649ACus037503 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:12 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l649AC2X037502; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:12 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:12 GMT Message-Id: <200707040910.l649AC2X037502@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Marc Fonvieille Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114272: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 09:10:13 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114272; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Marc Fonvieille To: Ben Kaduk Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/114272: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:56:58 +0200 On Tue, Jul 03, 2007 at 11:20:06PM +0000, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > >Number: 114272 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 23:30:03 GMT 2007 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > >Release: 7.0-CURRENT > >Organization: > >Environment: > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > >Description: > I attach a patch (chapter.sgml.diff.txt) with many minor corrections to the ``ports'' handbook chapter, which I will detail here (not necessarily in order). > > o s/third party/third-party/g > > o s/Pentium IV/Pentium 4/ (preferred in at least one place on Intel's website > > o s/compile time/compile/time/g (a priori not a global change, but I checked) > [...] For this one, what is the en_US usage "compile time" or "compile-time"? I cannot find a reliable reference. -- Marc From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 09:10:18 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13A0616A469 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BE2A013C483 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:17 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l649AHaZ037510 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:17 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l649AHSx037509; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:17 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:10:17 GMT Message-Id: <200707040910.l649AHSx037509@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Marc Fonvieille Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 09:10:18 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114265; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Marc Fonvieille To: Ben Kaduk Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:47:33 +0200 On Tue, Jul 03, 2007 at 07:12:15PM +0000, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > >Number: 114265 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 19:20:00 GMT 2007 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > >Release: 7.0-CURRENT > >Organization: > >Environment: > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > >Description: > I attach a diff with many small changes in it; I'll take them in order. > > o groups-->group: either add an apostrophe to make it possessive or take it out; as is, it's wrong > > o an administrator-->that administrators: recommend is transitive > > o every other file system-->other file systems: you can mount filesystems on non-root filesystems, as described later. This change makes the text more correct . > > o grafted on the root file system-->...parent file system: same as previous > > o should-->must: in context, the requirement of FreeBSD is that you give a fully-qualified slice name, which includes the disk name. Out of context, someone else might not require this, but the first half of the sentence implies that we are telling the user how to talk to FreeBSD > > o three partitions-->three data partitions: no, it has four partitions -- three for data and one for swap. Make the text less confusing > > o [no PID collisions]: just seems like it might save some confusion > > o daemons et al: change punctuation for style/readibility; remove sentence fragment > > o BIND: actually is domain, not daemon, as discussed fairly recently on cvs-doc@ > > o signals: the current text implies that signals are the only way to communicate with daemons; however, I seem to recall that some daemons listen on local sockets for commands, or read named pipes > > o kill: punctuation correction > > o occur-->appear: occur implies action (to me, at least); appear is more passive > > o help-->help with: verb transitivity again > > o variable key-->variable/key: it's a pair, so punctuate it as such (I didn't do a build and I don't remember if the slash is a special character for sgml -- do you?) > > o colon separated-->colon-separated (twice): style? > [...] Hello, I cannot find any reference for this one, do you have some links about this usage? -- Marc From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 09:34:39 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7109F16A41F for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:34:39 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from Steven.Milsom@jerseytelecom.com) Received: from mail.jerseytelecom.com (mail2.jerseytelecom.com [212.9.21.212]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D2A3C13C45D for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 09:34:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from Steven.Milsom@jerseytelecom.com) Received: from cor-notes-01.jerseytelecom.com ([10.0.253.15]) by mail.jerseytelecom.com with Microsoft SMTPSVC(6.0.3790.3959); Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:32:27 +0100 In-Reply-To: <468B5775.5000600@delphij.net> References: <468B5775.5000600@delphij.net> To: doc@FreeBSD.org MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Lotus Notes Build V80_M5_05202007 May 20, 2007 Message-ID: From: Steven Milsom Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 10:34:05 +0100 X-MIMETrack: Serialize by Router on cor-notes-01/JerseyTelecoms/GB(Release 6.5.5FP2|October 23, 2006) at 04/07/2007 10:34:37 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="=_mixed 00348F598025730E_=" X-OriginalArrivalTime: 04 Jul 2007 09:32:27.0906 (UTC) FILETIME=[3CA48620:01C7BE1E] X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.5 Cc: Subject: Re: Port path change in handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 09:34:39 -0000 --=_mixed 00348F598025730E_= Content-Type: text/plain; charset="US-ASCII" Hi, Apologies... I did a portsnap fetch - but never did an extract! :( Regards, Steve Milsom Broadband Networks Jersey Telecom Tel +44 (0)1534 882802 Mob +44 (0)7797 792802 LI Xin 04/07/2007 09:16 To Steven Milsom cc doc@FreeBSD.org Subject Re: Port path change in handbook Steven Milsom wrote: > Hi, > > One stale path to fix in the handbook... > > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports-overview.html > > In the second to last sentence the port for "portaudit" is listed as being > found at "ports-mgmt/portaudit" when it's now at "security/portaudit" Please update your local ports tree. portaudit has been moved to ports-mgmt/ long ago... 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From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Marc Fonvieille" Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/114272: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 14:37:46 +0000 On 7/4/07, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > On Tue, Jul 03, 2007 at 11:20:06PM +0000, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > > > >Number: 114272 > > >Category: docs > > >Synopsis: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter > > >Confidential: no > > >Severity: non-critical > > >Priority: low > > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > > >State: open > > >Quarter: > > >Keywords: > > >Date-Required: > > >Class: doc-bug > > >Submitter-Id: current-users > > >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 23:30:03 GMT 2007 > > >Closed-Date: > > >Last-Modified: > > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > > >Release: 7.0-CURRENT > > >Organization: > > >Environment: > > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > >Description: > > I attach a patch (chapter.sgml.diff.txt) with many minor corrections to the ``ports'' handbook chapter, which I will detail here (not necessarily in order). > > > > o s/third party/third-party/g > > > > o s/Pentium IV/Pentium 4/ (preferred in at least one place on Intel's website > > > > o s/compile time/compile/time/g (a priori not a global change, but I checked) > > > [...] > > For this one, what is the en_US usage "compile time" or "compile-time"? > I cannot find a reliable reference. > > -- > Marc > Hmmm. . .my degrees are not in English, but a bit of thought seems to indicate that when used as a compound adjective (compile-time behaviour), it should be hyphenated. There seem to be at least two other ways in which this string can appear, such as: "X verbs Y at compile time" and "my compile time is very long". The latter definitely is not hyphenated, but I'm not sure yet about the other. All the appearances in the submitted patch seem to be pretty clearly (to me, at least. . .) instances of compound adjectives -- compile-time options are the options which are set at the time of compilation, so compile-time is a compound adjective. -Ben Kaduk From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 4 15:50:07 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F27816A477 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:50:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 455B513C4CA for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:50:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l64Fo6IN072378 for ; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:50:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l64Fo6rK072377; Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:50:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:50:06 GMT Message-Id: <200707041550.l64Fo6rK072377@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: "Ben Kaduk" Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Ben Kaduk List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2007 15:50:07 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/114265; it has been noted by GNATS. From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Marc Fonvieille" Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2007 15:42:11 +0000 On 7/4/07, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > On Tue, Jul 03, 2007 at 07:12:15PM +0000, Ben Kaduk wrote: > > > > >Number: 114265 > > >Category: docs > > >Synopsis: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section > > >Confidential: no > > >Severity: non-critical > > >Priority: low > > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > > >State: open > > >Quarter: > > >Keywords: > > >Date-Required: > > >Class: doc-bug > > >Submitter-Id: current-users > > >Arrival-Date: Tue Jul 03 19:20:00 GMT 2007 > > >Closed-Date: > > >Last-Modified: > > >Originator: Ben Kaduk > > >Release: 7.0-CURRENT > > >Organization: > > >Environment: > > System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > >Description: > > I attach a diff with many small changes in it; I'll take them in order. > > [snip] > > > > o colon separated-->colon-separated (twice): style? > > > [...] > > Hello, > > I cannot find any reference for this one, do you have some links about > this usage? > > -- > Marc > Hi Marc, Well, the most convenient reference for me is the MLA handbook (6th ed.) (about three feet away), which sayeth: 3.2.6 Hyphens Compound words of all types -- nouns, verbs, adjectives, and so on -- are written as separate words, with hypens, and as single words. The dictionary shows how to write many compounds; if a compound is not in the dictionary, it should usually be written as separate words unless a hyphen is needed to prevent readers from misunderstanding the relation between the words. Following are some rules that may help you decide...: (a) use a hyphen in a compound adjective beginning with an adverb such as better, best, ill, lower, little, or well when the adjective precedes a noun. But do not use a hyphen when the compound adjective comes after the noun it modifies (b) Do not use a hyphen when the compound adjective comes after the noun it modifies. (c) Use a hyphen in a compound adjective ending with the present participle (e.g. loving) or the past participle (e.g. inspired) of a verb when the adjective precedes a noun. (d) [numerical prefixes] (e) Use hyphens in other compound adjectives before nouns to prevent misreading. (f) Do not use hyphens in familiar unhyphenated compound terms such as social security, high school, liberal arts, and show business, when they appear before nouns as modifiers. (g) [join coequal nouns] [but not unequal nouns] (h) [not after prefixes, usually] In this case, colon-separated list, I am not sure if separated is acting as past participle (lousy english teachers in my past) (c), but I think that this ``suggestion'' of the MLA is why I instinctively want to hyphenate colon-separated here. In terms of links, I (having read the above) found this NYU site: http://www.nyu.edu/classes/copyXediting/Hyphens.html which seems to have the same rules as MLA (see Adjective Forms section, numbers 4 (and 9?)) University of Minnesota seems somewhat anti-hyphen compared to others, but still have the past- or present-participle rule: http://www1.umn.edu/urelate/style/hyphens.html (see ``Unit Modifiers'', numbers 1 and 6) It seems that if ``separated'' is a participle here (please tell me if it is, I'm not sure), the hyphen is in order, but otherwise, the authorities are a bit contested. Thanks for looking into this. -Ben Kaduk From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jul 5 05:54:57 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2812F16A504; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:54:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ED00813C44B; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:54:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (blackend@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l655sufh038869; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:54:56 GMT (envelope-from blackend@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from blackend@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l655su8J038865; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:54:56 GMT (envelope-from blackend) Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:54:56 GMT From: Marc Fonvieille Message-Id: <200707050554.l655su8J038865@freefall.freebsd.org> To: blackend@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, blackend@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114265: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2007 05:54:57 -0000 Synopsis: grammar and other nits in handbook/basics section Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend Responsible-Changed-By: blackend Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jul 5 05:54:21 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll take care of this one. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114265 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jul 5 05:55:49 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A391D16A46C; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:55:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7B7AE13C4AE; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:55:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (blackend@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l655tnhi038949; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:55:49 GMT (envelope-from blackend@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from blackend@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l655tn5X038945; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:55:49 GMT (envelope-from blackend) Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2007 05:55:49 GMT From: Marc Fonvieille Message-Id: <200707050555.l655tn5X038945@freefall.freebsd.org> To: blackend@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, blackend@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114272: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2007 05:55:49 -0000 Synopsis: minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend Responsible-Changed-By: blackend Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jul 5 05:55:21 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll take care of this one. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114272 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jul 5 18:50:02 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A270C16A46C for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:50:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 82BAA13C46E for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:50:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l65Io23U008318 for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l65Io2m0008317; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:50:02 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707051850.l65Io2m0008317@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Ben Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1BE2216A400 for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:45:43 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0BC4F13C459 for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:45:43 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l65IjgTs073048 for ; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:45:42 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l65IjgTk073047; Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:45:42 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200707051845.l65IjgTk073047@www.freebsd.org> Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2007 18:45:42 GMT From: Ben Kaduk To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.0 Cc: Subject: docs/114337: minor grammar nits to handbook/x11 chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2007 18:50:02 -0000 >Number: 114337 >Category: docs >Synopsis: minor grammar nits to handbook/x11 chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Jul 05 18:50:01 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 7-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: I attach a patch with a number of small changes, which I detail here o the first change is an attempt to make the sentence relating X11, XOrg and XFree86 more parse-able. This is difficult for me, because I'm not entirely sure what the relationships are, myself. X.org claims (http://www.x.org/wiki/) that ``The X.Org Foundation provides an open source implementation of the X Window System''; presumably XFree86 does as well. This change reverses the inclusion so that the two softwares include the X11 protocol, not the other way around (which doesn't make much sense) o XDM controlled-->XDM-controlled: more hyphenation issues that I'm not 100% certain about; Marc Fonvieille is (hopefully) looking into this some more (controlled is a past participle here, right?) o the login-->login: either ``the chooser screen'' and ``the login screen'', or ``the chooser and login screens''. o edit-->you must edit: the text is telling the user what to do o [Xaccess]: a bit of style change (show the relation between two sentences), and close off the sentence with why users may wish to consult more documentation. o [add commas to list] o represents-->is: Konqueror is a browser, not a picture of one o FreeBSD-KDE-->FreeBSD KDE: style (?) I'm not sure what a hyphen adds here, and I couldn't find this term on the referenced webpage o etc. is an abbreviation o other things-->more: ``other things'' just feels like the wrong tone for this piece, to me >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11.html and the rest of the chapter >Fix: patch attached Patch attached with submission follows: --- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-07-03 18:27:06.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.sgml 2007-07-05 12:59:42.000000000 -0500 @@ -26,9 +26,10 @@ FreeBSD uses X11 to provide users with a powerful graphical user interface. X11 - is an open-source implementation of the X Window System that - includes both &xorg; and - &xfree86;. &os; versions up to and + is a freely available version of the X Window System that + is implemented in both &xorg; and + &xfree86; (and other software + packages not discussed here). &os; versions up to and including &os; 5.2.1-RELEASE will find the default installation to be &xfree86;, the X11 server released by @@ -1144,7 +1145,7 @@ Xaccess The protocol for connecting to - XDM controlled displays is called + XDM-controlled displays is called the X Display Manager Connection Protocol (XDMCP). This file is a ruleset for controlling XDMCP connections from remote machines. It is ignored unless the xdm-config @@ -1155,7 +1156,7 @@ Xresources This is an application-defaults file for the display - chooser and the login screens. This is where the appearance + chooser and login screens. In it, the appearance of the login program can be modified. The format is identical to the app-defaults file described in the X11 documentation. @@ -1210,7 +1211,7 @@ Running a Network Display Server In order for other clients to connect to the display - server, edit the access control rules, and enable the connection + server, you must edit the access control rules and enable the connection listener. By default these are set to conservative values. To make XDM listen for connections, first comment out a line in the xdm-config @@ -1223,9 +1224,9 @@ and then restart XDM. Remember that comments in app-defaults files begin with a ! character, not the usual #. More strict - access controls may be desired. Look at the example + access controls may be desired — look at the example entries in Xaccess, and refer to the - &man.xdm.1; manual page. + &man.xdm.1; manual page for further information. @@ -1428,7 +1429,7 @@ - Centralized consisted dialog driven desktop + Centralized, consistent, dialog-driven desktop configuration @@ -1439,13 +1440,13 @@ KDE comes with a web browser called - Konqueror, which represents + Konqueror, which is a solid competitor to other existing web browsers on &unix; systems. More information on KDE can be found on the KDE website. For FreeBSD specific information and resources on KDE, consult - the FreeBSD-KDE + the FreeBSD KDE team's website. @@ -1554,7 +1555,7 @@ Fully configurable via mouse, with drag and - drop, etc + drop, etc. @@ -1564,8 +1565,7 @@ Integrated window manager, file manager, sound manager, - GNOME compliance module, and other - things + GNOME compliance module, and more >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 6 08:02:01 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5C2B816A479; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 08:02:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3426D13C4C6; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 08:02:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (blackend@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l668211X071222; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 08:02:01 GMT (envelope-from blackend@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from blackend@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l66821sI071218; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 08:02:01 GMT (envelope-from blackend) Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 08:02:01 GMT From: Marc Fonvieille Message-Id: <200707060802.l66821sI071218@freefall.freebsd.org> To: blackend@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, blackend@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114337: minor grammar nits to handbook/x11 chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 08:02:01 -0000 Synopsis: minor grammar nits to handbook/x11 chapter Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend Responsible-Changed-By: blackend Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Jul 6 08:01:41 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll take care of this one. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114337 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 6 06:22:10 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 950B816A469; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 06:22:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from grog@lemis.com) Received: from ozlabs.org (ozlabs.org [203.10.76.45]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2B38E13C465; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 06:22:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from grog@lemis.com) Received: from wantadilla.lemis.com (wantadilla.lemis.com [192.109.197.135]) by ozlabs.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ACB8BDDE2A; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 16:11:55 +1000 (EST) Received: by wantadilla.lemis.com (Postfix, from userid 1004) id A78D71A9890; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 15:41:54 +0930 (CST) Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 15:41:54 +0930 From: Greg 'groggy' Lehey To: undisclosed-recipients: ; Message-ID: <20070706061154.GE38477@wantadilla.lemis.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="n+lFg1Zro7sl44OB" Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.1i Phone: +61-8-8388-8286 Fax: +61-8-8388-8725 Mobile: +61-418-838-708 VoIP: sip:0871270137@sip.internode.on.net WWW-Home-Page: http://www.auug.org.au/ X-PGP-Fingerprint: 9A1B 8202 BCCE B846 F92F 09AC 22E6 F290 507A 4223 X-Mailman-Approved-At: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:44:26 +0000 Subject: Moving house X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 06:22:10 -0000 --n+lFg1Zro7sl44OB Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Starting tomorrow, I'm moving house. See my home page (http://www.lemis.com/grog/) for details of the new address. One of the problems of the move is that I'll again be out of ADSL range, so it's back to two-way satellite. If that weren't enough, it looks like I'll be in for a wait before they can install the sat system. In the meantime I'll be connecting sporadically, and my mail will be delivered to a different system. That shouldn't be a problem, modulo a few hours more before I get a message, but if you are trying to contact me and suspect that mail to me at Greg.Lehey@FreeBSD.org or Greg.Lehey@FreeBSD.org isn't getting through, you could try Greg.Lehey@ozlabs.org, which is the system where my mail will ultimately be heading. Hopefully this will all be over by the end of the month. Greg -- See complete headers for address and phone numbers. --n+lFg1Zro7sl44OB Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFGjd0qIubykFB6QiMRAjQgAJ41qk/P+lpg122Z659L67T8Eesc5ACfbGsT qxUtb/nu/IDolPqYtr3tuFY= =BAsA -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --n+lFg1Zro7sl44OB-- From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 6 12:54:44 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6235116A41F; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 12:54:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from danger@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3950013C455; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 12:54:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from danger@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (danger@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l66Csiwi096681; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 12:54:44 GMT (envelope-from danger@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from danger@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l66CsigJ096677; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 12:54:44 GMT (envelope-from danger) Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 12:54:44 GMT From: Daniel Gerzo Message-Id: <200707061254.l66CsigJ096677@freefall.freebsd.org> To: danger@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, danger@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/114259: constants the wrong way round in the ng_fec manpage X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:54:44 -0000 Synopsis: constants the wrong way round in the ng_fec manpage Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger Responsible-Changed-By: danger Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Jul 6 12:54:17 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: I will try to take care of this one. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114259 From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 6 18:40:04 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0E07416A46E for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:40:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD39113C4AD for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:40:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l66Ie37x021758 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:40:03 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l66Ie3s4021757; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:40:03 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:40:03 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707061840.l66Ie3s4021757@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Ben Kaduk Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 70E0716A468 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6082213C489 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l66IUNLP026666 for ; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:23 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l66IUNe0026665; Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:23 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200707061830.l66IUNe0026665@www.freebsd.org> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:23 GMT From: Ben Kaduk To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.0 Cc: Subject: docs/114363: minor grammar nits in handbook/desktop chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 18:40:04 -0000 >Number: 114363 >Category: docs >Synopsis: minor grammar nits in handbook/desktop chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jul 06 18:40:03 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 7-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: I'm getting on more shaky ground with some of the proposed changes in this chapter. Please exercise editorial judgement. There's a list of changes in the patch; I'll try to take them in order: o [style in describing Mozilla's features]: I got tired of the big list of declarative sentences ``It features ...'', so I changed it up a bit. I'm pretty sure that it's okay to use a colon in this context o Communicator Suite-->the Communicator Suite: I think that a definite article is appropriate here o resource-consuming-->resource-demanding: I think the latter is more commonly used o for any reason-->for whatever reason: the former implies (in my reading) that the reader is partisan agains compiling Mozilla; the latter is more considering (nicer to the reader?) o you already installed-->you have already installed: perhaps not necessary, but probably enhances readibility o [plugins]: they are listed, and ``not the case'' feels awkward (to me) o [FTP/packages]: ``the same result can be obtained'' is awkward in this context o appear to be-->should be: the latter makes it sound more like we know what we're doing o [Konqueror plugins]: they aren't installed by default, so Konqueror doesn't come with them (but they are, nonetheless, available) o [Konqueror Howto]: I think my version makes it more clear what the howto does for the user o default application-->default productivity package [and more]: specify what there is no default of, and do not imply that all options are available without user effort to get them o [MS .doc]: I think that the possessive on .doc is valid, and we might as well use the entity while we're here o [internationalization]: make more clear how the different languages have been incorporated o packages-->packages,: avoid run-on o [new document formats]: pdf's have been quite popular for many years now. Are there document viewers in base other than *roff? I don't know anyone that composes in roff for anything other than man pages. o [gv]: readility and style (?) o [finances]: more hyphenation (I'm starting to think I might be going overboard on this. . .), prefer ``such as'' to ``like'' (optional), and do not imply that an application can support at most one external file format o applications-->programs: remove ambiguity (action vs. software) o yet powerful-->,yet powerful,: while it's tempting to say ``user-friendly-but-powerful'', that's just silly. Adding these commas may make this sentence more readable. o or your stocks-->and your stocks: do not imply that only one thing can be done at once o many-->and many: ``many keyboard accelerators and auto-completion methods'' seems to be one element in the list (if not, some modifier should be added to ``auto-completion methods'', such as ``several'', to make this clear) o spreadsheet-->spreadsheet program: I am very uncertain about this one, but I always thought that the spreadsheet was the document that the spreadsheet program modifies. Excel's webpage claims it is a spreadsheet program, wikipedia claims gnumeric is a spreadsheet program, but gnumeric's webpage lists it as just a ``spreadsheet'' (in at least one place). What gives? o and-->with: it seems that the autofill system is a subclass of the ``guessing'' and should be included as such o type in-->do: ``do'' seems to be the preferred way to indicate a command to be typed in, in this handbook (so far) o spreadsheet-->spreadsheet program: see above; I didn't check websites about Abacus, but the two instances should probably be consistent on the same page o from its-->as a: the latter seems more consistent with our use of package. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop.html and the rest of the chapter >Fix: patch attached. Patch attached with submission follows: --- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-07-05 13:56:31.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.sgml 2007-07-06 12:54:55.000000000 -0500 @@ -178,22 +178,22 @@ Mozilla is a modern, - stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD. It features a very - standards-compliant HTML display engine. It provides a mail + stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD: it features a very + standards-compliant HTML display engine; it provides a mail and news reader. It even has a HTML composer if you plan to write some web pages yourself. Users of &netscape; will recognize the - similarities with Communicator - suite, as both browsers shared the same basis. + similarities with the Communicator + suite, as both browsers share some development history. On slow machines, with a CPU speed less than 233MHz or with less than 64MB of RAM, Mozilla - can be too resource-consuming to be fully usable. You may + can be too resource-demanding to be fully usable. You may want to look at the Opera browser instead, described a little later in this chapter. If you cannot or do not want to compile - Mozilla for any reason, the FreeBSD + Mozilla, for whatever reason, the FreeBSD GNOME team has already done this for you. Just install the package from the network by: @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ Firefox, Mozilla and &java; plugin - In this section and in the next one, we assume you + In this section and in the next one, we assume you have already installed Firefox or Mozilla. @@ -270,8 +270,8 @@ To add &java; support to Firefox or - Mozilla, you have to install, at - first, the Mozilla, you first have to install + the java/javavmwrapper port. Then, download the Diablo &jre; package from Start your browser, enter about:plugins in the location bar and press - Enter. A page regarding installed plugins - will be displayed, the &java; - plugin should be listed there now. If it is not the case, as + Enter. A page listing the installed plugins + will be displayed; the &java; + plugin should be listed there now. If it is not, as root, run the following command: &prompt.root; ln -s /usr/local/diablo-jre1.5.0/plugin/i386/ns7/libjavaplugin_oji.so \ @@ -356,9 +356,9 @@ &prompt.root; pkg_add -r opera - Some FTP sites do not have all the packages, but the same - result can be obtained with the Ports Collection by - typing: + Some FTP sites do not have all the packages, but + Opera can still be obtained + through the Ports Collection by typing: &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/www/opera &prompt.root; make install clean @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ version is useful in situations requiring the use of plug-ins that are only available for Linux, such as Adobe &acrobat.reader;. In all other respects, the - FreeBSD and Linux versions appear to be functionally + FreeBSD and Linux versions should be functionally identical. @@ -388,10 +388,14 @@ Konqueror is much more than a browser, it is also a file manager and a multimedia viewer. - Konqueror also comes with a set of plugins, + There is also a set of plugins available for + Konqueror, available in misc/konq-plugins. - Konqueror also supports &flash; and a How To + Konqueror also supports + &flash;; a How To guide + for getting &flash; support on + Konqueror is available at . @@ -403,7 +407,8 @@ good office suite or a friendly word processor. While some desktop environments like KDE already provide an office suite, - there is no default application. FreeBSD provides all that is + there is no default productivity package. + FreeBSD can provide all that is needed, regardless of your desktop environment. This section covers these applications: @@ -503,7 +508,7 @@ AbiWord can import or export many file formats, including some proprietary ones like - Microsoft .doc. + µsoft;'s .doc. AbiWord is available as a package. You can install it by: @@ -578,7 +583,8 @@ and a drawing program. Its user interface is very similar to other office suites, and it can import and export in various popular file formats. It is available in a number of - different languages including interfaces, spell checkers, and + different languages &emdash; internationalization has been + extended to interfaces, spell checkers, and dictionaries. The word processor of @@ -593,7 +599,7 @@ can be found on the OpenOffice.org web site. For FreeBSD specific information, and to directly - download packages use the FreeBSD OpenOffice.org Porting Team's web site. @@ -656,9 +662,10 @@ Document Viewers - Some new document formats have recently gained popularity. - The standard viewers they require may not be available in the - base system. We will see how to install them in this + Some new document formats have gained popularity since + the advent of &unix;; + the standard viewers they require may not be available in the + base system. We will see how to install such viewers in this section. This section covers these applications: @@ -751,9 +758,9 @@ viewer. It is originally based on ghostview but it has a nicer look thanks to the Xaw3d library. It is fast and its interface is - clean. gv has many features like - orientation, paper size, scale, or antialias. Almost any - operation can be done either from the keyboard or the + clean. gv has many features, such as + orientation, paper size, scale, and anti-aliasing. Almost any + operation can be done with either the keyboard or the mouse. To install gv as a package, @@ -832,11 +839,11 @@ If, for any reason, you would like to manage your personal finances on your FreeBSD Desktop, there are some powerful and - easy to use applications ready to be installed. Some of them - are compatible with widespread file formats like those of - Quicken or Excel documents. + easy-to-use applications ready to be installed. Some of them + are compatible with widespread file formats, such as the formats used by + Quicken and Excel to store documents. - This section covers these applications: + This section covers these programs: @@ -882,14 +889,14 @@ GnuCash is part of the GNOME effort to provide - user-friendly yet powerful applications to end-users. With + user-friendly, yet powerful, applications to end-users. With GnuCash, you can keep track of your - income and expenses, your bank accounts, or your stocks. It + income and expenses, your bank accounts, and your stocks. It features an intuitive interface while remaining very professional. GnuCash provides a smart - register, a hierarchical system of accounts, many keyboard + register, a hierarchical system of accounts, and many keyboard accelerators and auto-completion methods. It can split a single transaction into several more detailed pieces. GnuCash can import and merge @@ -918,10 +925,10 @@ Gnumeric - Gnumeric is a spreadsheet, part + Gnumeric is a spreadsheet program, part of the GNOME desktop environment. It features convenient automatic guessing of user - input according to the cell format and an autofill system for + input according to the cell format with an autofill system for many sequences. It can import files in a number of popular formats like those of Excel, Lotus 1-2-3, or Quattro Pro. Gnumeric supports graphs through @@ -931,7 +938,7 @@ date, time, and much more. To install Gnumeric as a - package, type in: + package, do: &prompt.root; pkg_add -r gnumeric @@ -953,13 +960,13 @@ Abacus is a small and easy to - use spreadsheet. It includes many built-in functions useful + use spreadsheet program. It includes many built-in functions useful in several domains such as statistics, finances, and mathematics. It can import and export the Excel file format. Abacus can produce &postscript; output. - To install Abacus from its + To install Abacus as a package, do: &prompt.root; pkg_add -r abacus >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jul 7 05:50:03 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 330D416A469 for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:50:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F127313C44C for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:50:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l675o2eP077183 for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l675o2hS077182; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:50:02 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200707070550.l675o2hS077182@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Kena Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1750D16A400 for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:47:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [69.147.83.33]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0834013C458 for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:47:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id l675lCQj057192 for ; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:47:12 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id l675lCTM057190; Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:47:12 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200707070547.l675lCTM057190@www.freebsd.org> Date: Sat, 7 Jul 2007 05:47:12 GMT From: Kena To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.0 Cc: Subject: docs/114371: [patch][ipv6] rtadvd.con(5) should show how to advertise a default route X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:50:03 -0000 >Number: 114371 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch][ipv6] rtadvd.con(5) should show how to advertise a default route >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jul 07 05:50:02 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Kena >Release: 7.0-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: FreeBSD fungus.kahlua 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 13:34:52 CEST 2007 root@fungus.kahlua:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: At the time of this writing very few documents are available to explain how to advertise a default route to the global IPv6 Internet on a local network. The man page rtadvd.conf(5) should do just that. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Patch attached with submission follows: --- rtadvd.conf.5.orig 2007-07-07 07:23:07.000000000 +0200 +++ rtadvd.conf.5 2007-07-07 07:31:11.000000000 +0200 @@ -391,6 +391,16 @@ :addr="3ffe:501:ffff:1000::":prefixlen#64: .Ed .Pp +The following example advertises the network prefix and sets the host as +a low priority router for default (default route). The route has a lifetime +of one hour. The configuration is suitable for a tunnel endpoint that acts +as a default router to the ipv6 network for the local subnet. +.Bd -literal -offset +ef0:\\ + :addr="3ffe:501:ffff:1000::":prefixlen#64:\\ + :routes#1:rtprefix="::0":rtplen#0:rtflags#24:rtltime#3600: +.Ed +.Pp The following example presents the default values in an explicit manner. The configuration is provided just for reference purposes; YOU DO NOT NEED TO HAVE IT AT ALL. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: