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From: Len Zettel <zettel@acm.org>
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On Monday 06 September 2004 09:05 pm, Bruce A. Mah wrote:
> On Mon, 2004-09-06 at 11:27, Len Zettel wrote:
> > OK, you asked :-). Attached are suggested cosmetic changes
> > to the English.  If this is premature, my apologies to all for wasting
> > the bandwidth.
>
> Not a waste at all...thanks for tightening up the writing.  I tend to be
> a little verbose sometimes.  I might take a little time to work through
> this patch...there were one or two problems that I might solve a little
> bit differently, but I want most of your changes.
>
Given something as subjective as writing style, I am only making 
suggestions...

> Thanks!
>
Y' walcome - glad to help!
  -LenZ-
> Bruce.