From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon May 26 17:10:56 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 0727A38F; Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:56 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E7420283B; Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s4QHAtjg059877; Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:55 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s4QHAtNJ059875; Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:55 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201405261710.s4QHAtNJ059875@svn.freebsd.org> From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:55 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44960 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/remote-install X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 26 May 2014 17:10:56 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Mon May 26 17:10:55 2014 New Revision: 44960 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44960 Log: Remove contractions, improve capitalization, clean up redundant markup and words. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/remote-install/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/remote-install/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/remote-install/article.xml Mon May 26 16:34:04 2014 (r44959) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/remote-install/article.xml Mon May 26 17:10:55 2014 (r44960) @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
- Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System without a + <info><title>Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System Without a Remote Console @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ In some cases, these companies will install your preferred &linux; distribution if you request it. Using this option, we will attempt to install &os;. In other cases, they may offer a rescue - system which would be used in an emergency. It's possible to use + system which would be used in an emergency. It is possible to use this for our purposes as well. This article covers the basic installation and configuration @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ Another important thing to set is the root password. This can be done by editing - the conf/rootpw.conf file. Please keep in + conf/rootpw.conf. Please keep in mind that the file will contain your password in the plain text, thus we do not recommend to use real password here. Nevertheless, this is just a temporary one-time password which @@ -189,17 +189,16 @@ initconf_ip_ext1="192.168.0.2" initconf_netmask_ext1="255.255.255.0" Do not forget to add the defaultrouter - information to the conf/rc.conf - file: + information to conf/rc.conf: defaultrouter="192.168.0.1" - The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> method + The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> Method When the network interface driver is known, it is more - convenient to use the conf/rc.conf file + convenient to use conf/rc.conf for networking options. The syntax of this file is the same as the one used in the standard &man.rc.conf.5; file of &os;. @@ -214,7 +213,7 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 - Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> image + Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> Image The process of building an mfsBSD image is pretty straightforward. @@ -236,9 +235,9 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 &prompt.root; make BASE=/cdrom/7.0-RELEASE - The above make command has to be run + The above make has to be run from the top level of the mfsBSD - directory tree, i.e. ~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/. + directory tree, for example ~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/. @@ -271,7 +270,7 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 - Installation of The &os; Operating System + Installation of the &os; Operating System The mfsBSD has been successfully booted and it should be possible to log in through &man.ssh.1;. @@ -307,7 +306,7 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 introduction, this article will present how to set up a system with RAID-1 and ZFS capabilities. Our set up will consist of a small &man.gmirror.8; mirrored - / (root), /usr and /var file systems, and the rest of + / (root), /usr and /var dataset, and the rest of the disk space will be allocated for a &man.zpool.8; mirrored ZFS file system. Please note, that the ZFS file system will be @@ -369,7 +368,7 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 - Note the option used for swap + Note that is used for the swap partition. This instructs &man.gmirror.8; to assume that the device is in the consistent state after the power/system failure. @@ -414,13 +413,13 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 Go to the Distributions menu, - move the cursor with the arrow keys on the - option, and check it by pressing + move the cursor with the arrow keys to + , and check it by pressing Space. This article uses the Minimal distribution in order to save network traffic, because the system itself will be installed over ftp. Exit this menu by choosing - option. + . The Partition and @@ -470,9 +469,9 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 /etc/resolv.conf and /etc/fstab files. Do not forget to properly set the network information and to enable - sshd in the - /etc/rc.conf file. The contents of the - /etc/fstab file will be similar to the + sshd in + /etc/rc.conf. The contents of + /etc/fstab will be similar to the following: # Device Mountpoint FStype Options Dump Pass# @@ -484,7 +483,7 @@ ifconfig_re0="inet 192.168.0.2 netmask 2 - Create the /boot/loader.conf file, + Create /boot/loader.conf with the following contents: geom_mirror_load="YES" @@ -539,7 +538,7 @@ zfs_load="YES" &prompt.root; zfs set mountpoint=/usr/ports tank/ports &prompt.root; zfs set mountpoint=/usr/src tank/src - That's all. If you are interested in more details about + That is all. If you are interested in more details about ZFS on &os;, please refer to the ZFS section of the &os; Wiki.