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From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:53 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml
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chern       2003/09/30 18:18:53 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  - Revise some comma usage
  - Revise wording of some sentences
  - Use <acronym> and <filename> tags
  - Follow FDP on continuous repetition of &man.command.#;
  - Write out numbers under 10
  - Show an example of complete output of "ls -l" command
  - Mention after successfully logging in, you will see the MOTD, and
    the command prompt
  - Remove misleading comment about how chmod ### can only "set and
    assign" permissions, but not remove them.
  - "CPU time evenly to each user" -> "CPU time fairly to each user"
  - "permissions stored as two octets" -> "permissions stored as three
    octets"
  
  Sponsored by:   FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.113     +46 -29    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml