From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Mar 23 10:17:10 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2D0EE106564A for ; Mon, 23 Mar 2009 10:17:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from fender0107401@gmail.com) Received: from ti-out-0910.google.com (ti-out-0910.google.com [209.85.142.184]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BCB448FC12 for ; Mon, 23 Mar 2009 10:17:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from fender0107401@gmail.com) Received: by ti-out-0910.google.com with SMTP id u5so1627585tia.3 for ; Mon, 23 Mar 2009 03:17:08 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:date:from:to:subject :message-id:mail-followup-to:mime-version:content-type :content-disposition:user-agent; bh=5GQKA62WDIi049tfYM5feOYURVKFvBKFAPBhIEg4BfI=; b=k9xLF1q1wia67njckiwZ5Jz/+31hpla+WNt3PPr+GOVdgezyR3YosUbhNNGM97qUxn 2AkSMi80CpcTf9EOQYQiCamwxvbS97ZrXitcFyuweMy571jO9A0Nl9cJjRmkvELYNz3Z S5zDtRior19WlFc4JykUGMq4ELcgEHM+ucd+I= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=date:from:to:subject:message-id:mail-followup-to:mime-version :content-type:content-disposition:user-agent; b=rZNlxnF01dhFoLaro8u/wgCLBa58Xd5FCRsKLrGnWwH4NP9pmlc4c5ABOtkrbab+RN sSbUaEvMjLhOsZpjFxPJQ7fceYirbKvR78XoXDmHj1AsbCvtut+c/ulkfxH6gupI8agA fgT/7Jymz3fXCZfU1+3a9B+iC/fo+KbWXmidM= Received: by 10.110.7.5 with SMTP id 5mr9645521tig.4.1237801793382; Mon, 23 Mar 2009 02:49:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost ([219.243.32.29]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id y5sm112942tia.37.2009.03.23.02.49.51 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Mon, 23 Mar 2009 02:49:52 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2009 17:45:04 +0800 From: Li To: freebsd-doc Message-ID: <20090323094504.GA1350@PC-686.Workstation> Mail-Followup-To: freebsd-doc Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.3i Subject: Erratra report for X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2009 10:17:10 -0000 Hi all: As a freebsd user and big fan, I always try to do something to improve or help our system. Recently, I printed this doc: pdf_version, I read it several times , and I found something maybe not correct totally, so I wrote them below, I think someone will correct them. Note: the page number is according to the pdf version. Report format: page number | wrong | right vi | .1 | 1. (this is for notes) vi | Marleen Devos's email is ? | ? 1 | the communications overhead | the communication's overhead 3 | estimated 5500 contributors on the project, but in figure 3-1 and 3-2 the number is -3000 | ? 4 | 12600 ports.1 | 12600 ports1. (this is for notes) 6 | 4.4BSD.3 | 4.4BSD3. (this is for notes) 7 | updates.5 | updates5. (this is for notes) 10 5.1.2 | should be made | should be made. 10 5.1.4 | This involves involves | This involves 11 | box betten "Core Secretary" and "GNATS Administrator" is blank | ? 13 5.2.6| The resposibilities of the Release Engineering Team are | add ":" in the end, and following sentences need "." too. 21 | The code is than committed and the deployed | The code is than committed and deployed Others: all figures in this doc is not well, fonts always small, seems well if you see the html version. -- Just be yourself. -----------------