From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jan 17 05:51:37 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CADEB106564A for ; Sat, 17 Jan 2009 05:51:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pali.gabor@googlemail.com) Received: from mail-bw0-f20.google.com (mail-bw0-f20.google.com [209.85.218.20]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2925E8FC25 for ; Sat, 17 Jan 2009 05:51:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pali.gabor@googlemail.com) Received: by bwz13 with SMTP id 13so6661742bwz.19 for ; Fri, 16 Jan 2009 21:51:36 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlemail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:sender :to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding :content-disposition:x-google-sender-auth; bh=pcMrdNpHlwaq9jyuihGFUgGezcfxBpFOBj4Mj0olP2g=; b=x0qfS4VuyK/C9FNt33nZVQYP2m+kMIdWBUNq7fL6oEQVMKvxVC1uE7oa+JPgFSRR08 S2ULcLhAT0pCQpPkMvkl5nwRzMROkdUXccHYq9wvM6c9YMxLUjwfzRGju0BpF+rCe8tC 9hp4w0Si6eLejxn28NnuWtcYWiUcwHMtXrFb0= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlemail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:sender:to:subject:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:x-google-sender-auth; b=ngz4A9BHsa4hMHIuMBpjbVIDI59At1lGQTlTS6eXk4Eoxif5H1tvXHnS36YSmzgmyO j/QFIVnYVCp6U8M7WZkQzbKXEsIwQ10bezyX9DExdRs1fXVpOWeWi96kZpmLDxx3ul5g EOLRnuSd8Ig2urCD+4snpUf48pu7QYbUzmIEs= Received: by 10.223.108.15 with SMTP id d15mr2885393fap.62.1232171495690; Fri, 16 Jan 2009 21:51:35 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.223.111.209 with HTTP; Fri, 16 Jan 2009 21:51:35 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <685a6ef80901162151n36faf048tdad36c7a85c05731@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sat, 17 Jan 2009 06:51:35 +0100 From: "Gabor PALI" Sender: pali.gabor@googlemail.com To: doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline X-Google-Sender-Auth: 744c2bf1489dc4f5 Cc: Subject: Patches to the FDP Primer (from Last Year) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 17 Jan 2009 05:51:38 -0000 Folks, I created some patches for you to review during the translation of the mighty FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer. Well, it has been a while ago, but I think some things still should be fixed up. Here are the significant ones (others could be found in the same directory, they usually fix typos, markup and capitalization as well as the highlighted patches partially): http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.doc-build.patch.diff - Remove description of (documentation) package target as it is not supported and it will be changed. Of course, the target in question still lives in the Makefiles, but I would not mention it any more (only when resurrected in some form). http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.psgml-mode.patch.diff - Mark up Emacs functions with rather than - Add port reference for editors/psgml http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.see-also.patch.diff - Fix broken links http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.structure.patch.diff - Rewrite the sentences about the Handbook images to provide more up-to-date information instead of mentioning the possibility of including images in a book - Add some note on the localization of those images http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.the-website.patch.diff - Add a description about WEB_LANG Note that I plan to bump the copyright year after the commits as there are some content changes hiding in my proposed changes. Thank you in advance. Cheers, :g PS: I want to touch the "Translations" chapter too, but I still have not got time to compose a usable patch for that.