From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Aug 15 19:58:12 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 83E4216A41F; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 19:58:12 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from cracauer@schlepper.zs64.net) Received: from schlepper.zs64.net (schlepper.zs64.net [212.12.50.230]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D93D543D45; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 19:58:11 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from cracauer@schlepper.zs64.net) Received: from schlepper.zs64.net (schlepper [212.12.50.230]) by schlepper.zs64.net (8.13.1/8.12.9) with ESMTP id j7FJwAH4095979; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:58:10 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from cracauer@schlepper.zs64.net) Received: (from cracauer@localhost) by schlepper.zs64.net (8.13.1/8.12.9/Submit) id j7FJwAO6095978; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 15:58:10 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from cracauer) Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 15:58:10 -0400 From: Martin Cracauer To: Pav Lucistnik Message-ID: <20050815155810.A95917@cons.org> References: <20050815154552.A95576@cons.org> <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i In-Reply-To: <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz>; from pav@FreeBSD.org on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM +0200 Cc: Martin Cracauer , freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update for www/amd64/motherboards.sgml - please review X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 19:58:12 -0000 Pav Lucistnik wrote on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM +0200: > Martin Cracauer píse v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:45 -0400: > > Can somebody who has the SGML system running and is a native speaker > > of English please review the appended diff? > > > > It contains entries for the 4 mainboards that I tried with > > FreeBSD/AMD64 recently. > > I'm the lord of motherboard page... > > Could you please make the Notes fields a little less verbose, and drop > all strictly non-technical stuff? Check > http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/amd64/motherboards.html > for inspiration. No prices, no reviews, no feelings, just terse notes > about what works with FreeBSD and what not. I don't think that would be too useful. Things are a little more complicated than just "works" or not. I'll drop some of the pure impression stuff, lets see how we are doing then. > Also please wrap the lines at 72. Or I can fix the style once we're > happy with the content. OK, I was just following the style of the other entries. > More notes: > - Dual-core Opteron == Opteron rev. E. No, different things. All dual-cores are E steppings, but there are single-core E stepping processors, too. > - please use formal talk, Windoze -> Windows ... Ohhhhhhh :-) Martin -- %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% Martin Cracauer http://www.cons.org/cracauer/ No warranty. This email is probably produced by one of my cats stepping on the keys. No, I don't have an infinite number of cats.