From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Aug 15 20:00:57 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C466916A41F for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 20:00:57 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) Received: from hood.oook.cz (hood.oook.cz [212.27.205.50]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D234B43D45 for ; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 20:00:56 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) Received: from ikaros.oook.cz (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by hood.oook.cz (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id j7FK0s7I060819 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Mon, 15 Aug 2005 22:00:54 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from pav@localhost) by ikaros.oook.cz (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id j7FK0snc060818; Mon, 15 Aug 2005 22:00:54 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) X-Authentication-Warning: ikaros.oook.cz: pav set sender to pav@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Pav Lucistnik To: Martin Cracauer In-Reply-To: <20050815155810.A95917@cons.org> References: <20050815154552.A95576@cons.org> <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz> <20050815155810.A95917@cons.org> Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="=-PB7fJe9TTaYrwk+1HHS3" Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 22:00:54 +0200 Message-Id: <1124136054.37769.18.camel@ikaros.oook.cz> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.2.3 FreeBSD GNOME Team Port Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update for www/amd64/motherboards.sgml - please review X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: pav@FreeBSD.org List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 20:00:57 -0000 --=-PB7fJe9TTaYrwk+1HHS3 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-2 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Martin Cracauer p=ED=B9e v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:58 -0400: > Pav Lucistnik wrote on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM +0200:=20 > > Martin Cracauer p=EDse v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:45 -0400: > > > Can somebody who has the SGML system running and is a native speaker > > > of English please review the appended diff? > > >=20 > > > It contains entries for the 4 mainboards that I tried with > > > FreeBSD/AMD64 recently. > >=20 > > I'm the lord of motherboard page... > >=20 > > Could you please make the Notes fields a little less verbose, and drop > > all strictly non-technical stuff? Check=20 > > http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/amd64/motherboards.html > > for inspiration. No prices, no reviews, no feelings, just terse notes > > about what works with FreeBSD and what not. >=20 > I don't think that would be too useful. Things are a little more > complicated than just "works" or not. >=20 > I'll drop some of the pure impression stuff, lets see how we are doing > then.=20 Sure, that's what I had in mind. > > Also please wrap the lines at 72. Or I can fix the style once we're > > happy with the content. >=20 > OK, I was just following the style of the other entries. They should probably be fixed too. As I said, style can be fixed later. > > More notes: > > - Dual-core Opteron =3D=3D Opteron rev. E. >=20 > No, different things. All dual-cores are E steppings, but there are > single-core E stepping processors, too. Ah. No patch attached, BTW. --=20 Pav Lucistnik And now something completely different. --=-PB7fJe9TTaYrwk+1HHS3 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: This is a digitally signed message part -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQBDAPR2ntdYP8FOsoIRArAQAKC92+in3HS04zqCBdmw0nOy1mBsEgCfeG+4 SIjiDz+PZZ10AW88bdZQBGE= =7OgS -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-PB7fJe9TTaYrwk+1HHS3--