From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Aug 27 16:20:21 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 95A6A16A41F for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:21 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AADA443D53 for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:16 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.3) with ESMTP id j7RGKGqA086347 for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:16 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.3/8.13.1/Submit) id j7RGKGes086346; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:16 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:16 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200508271620.j7RGKGes086346@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Julien Gabel Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C299416A41F for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:12:03 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from jgabel@thilelli.net) Received: from smtp.thilelli.net (smtp.thilelli.net [213.41.129.161]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2014943D45 for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:12:02 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from jgabel@thilelli.net) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by bento.thilelli.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 95FC15C7D for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:12:01 +0200 (CEST) Received: from bento.thilelli.net ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (bento.thilelli.net [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 85079-05-2 for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:11:57 +0200 (CEST) Received: from titeuf.thilelli.net (titeuf.thilelli.net [192.168.1.20]) by bento.thilelli.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 225345C7C for ; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:11:57 +0200 (CEST) Received: by titeuf.thilelli.net (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 0DA1D73027; Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:11:57 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <20050827161157.0DA1D73027@titeuf.thilelli.net> Date: Sat, 27 Aug 2005 18:11:57 +0200 (CEST) From: Julien Gabel To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/85353: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook. X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Julien Gabel List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 27 Aug 2005 16:20:21 -0000 >Number: 85353 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook. >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Aug 27 16:20:16 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Julien Gabel >Release: FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD titeuf.thilelli.net 5.4-STABLE FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE #0: Sun Aug 21 14:49:33 CEST 2005 root@titeuf.thilelli.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/TITEUF i386 >Description: When command(s) follow a sentence, i think the sentence may end with a ':', as found in other part of the book (geom-mirror for example). An other point is when a kernel module is loaded, the .ko extension may be forgotten. We can see this in other documentation and the kldload(8) manual page. >How-To-Repeat: Compare with the corresponding chapter: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom-striping.html >Fix: Here is a little patch: --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml Sat Aug 13 03:11:37 2005 +++ /tmp/chapter.sgml Sat Aug 27 17:53:32 2005 @@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ Load the geom_stripe module: - &prompt.root; kldload geom_stripe.ko + &prompt.root; kldload geom_stripe Ensure that a suitable mount point exists. If this volume will become a root partition, then temporarily use another mount point such as /mnt. + role="directory">/mnt: &prompt.root; mkdir /mnt @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ the following command could be used to stripe two unused, unpartitioned ATA disks: /dev/ad2 and - /dev/ad3. + /dev/ad3: &prompt.root; gstripe label -v st0 /dev/ad2 /dev/ad3 @@ -201,12 +201,12 @@ Many numbers will glide across the screen, and after a few seconds, the process will be complete. The volume has been - created and is ready to be mounted: + created and is ready to be mounted. The following command can be used to manually mount a newly - created disk stripe. + created disk stripe: &prompt.root; mount /dev/stripe/st0a /mnt @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ The geom module must also be automatically loaded during system initialization, by adding a line to - /boot/loader.conf. + /boot/loader.conf: &prompt.root; echo 'geom_stripe_load="YES"' >> /boot/loader.conf @@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ system to a &man.loader.8; prompt. Load the kernel module manually: - OK? load geom_mirror.ko + OK? load geom_mirror OK? boot If this works then for whatever reason the module was not --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: