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Subject: Re: cvs commit: www/ru/copyright freebsd-license.sgml
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On Mon, 16 Nov 2009, Rene Ladan wrote:

RL> >  FreeBSD doc repository
RL> >
RL> >  Modified files:
RL> >    ru/copyright         freebsd-license.sgml
RL> >  Log:
RL> >  Use less mechanical translation [1]
RL> >
RL> >  1: http://cylib.iit.nau.edu.ua/Mirrors/ask.km.ru/unics/bsd.html
RL> >
RL> >  PR:     www/132091
RL> >
RL> >  Revision  Changes    Path
RL> >  1.9       +16 -14    www/ru/copyright/freebsd-license.sgml
RL> >
RL> 
RL> I was wondering if the license always applies in each country if
RL> translated literally.
RL> I can imagine that some conditions in the disclaimer (the capital text
RL> part) conflict or are null and void in some countries.

Well, correctness (and especially legal one) is another story; I just switched 
from near-to-unusable wordings to next-to-readable ;-)

-- 
Sincerely,
D.Marck                                        [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN]
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