From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 30 01:36:38 2007 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 84BFA16A417 for ; Thu, 30 Aug 2007 01:36:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from knorr@gbks.net) Received: from derserver.internetserviceteam.com (89-149-194-29.internetserviceteam.com [89.149.194.29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 492FC13C45E for ; Thu, 30 Aug 2007 01:36:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from knorr@gbks.net) Received: from [127.0.0.1] (localhost.internetserviceteam.com [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by derserver.internetserviceteam.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 383621CC3D for ; Thu, 30 Aug 2007 03:17:49 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <46D61B6D.80509@gbks.net> Date: Thu, 30 Aug 2007 03:20:45 +0200 From: Dennis Knorr User-Agent: Thunderbird 1.5.0.13 (X11/20070824) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Enigmail-Version: 0.94.3.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-15 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: Subject: noticed something in the developer handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 30 Aug 2007 01:36:38 -0000 in Chapter 3, exactly 3.3.1 there is an entry: [XXX figure here!] i assume there should be an image or a table. second, the first sentence in 3.3.2 seems to me a little bit crude. i have to admit, i'm no native speaker, but it seems to me, the author mixed two sentences in his mind, writing one down. i would appreciate it, if you could have a little bit of time caring for this issues :) Dennis