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Author: eadler
Date: Wed May 22 20:41:12 2013
New Revision: 41709
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41709

Log:
  Improve speeling, fix formatting, and other nits.
  
  Reported by:	hrs, N.J. Mann <njm@njm.me.uk>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Wed May 22 20:39:46 2013	(r41708)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Wed May 22 20:41:12 2013	(r41709)
@@ -1680,13 +1680,13 @@
 	  </question>
 
 	  <answer>
-	    <para>&os; supports Symmetric multi-processor (SMP) on all
-	      non-embedded platforms (e.g, i386, amd64/x86-64,
-	      ia64, sparc64, powerpc, powerpc64).  SMP is also
+	    <para>&os; supports symmetric multi-processor (SMP) on all
+	      non-embedded platforms (e.g, &arch.i386;, &arch.amd64;,
+	      etc.).  SMP is also
 	      supported in arm and MIPS kernels, although some CPUs
 	      may not support this.  &os;'s SMP implementation uses
 	      fine-grained locking, and performance scales nearly
-	      liniarly with number of CPUs.</para>
+	      linearly with number of CPUs.</para>
 
 	    <para>&man.smp.4; has more details.</para>
 	  </answer>