From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat May 12 11:25:42 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 107DB16A405; Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D9A8013C4BB; Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pav@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (pav@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l4CBPfnd011644; Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:41 GMT (envelope-from pav@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from pav@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l4CBPffN011640; Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:41 GMT (envelope-from pav) Date: Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:41 GMT From: Pav Lucistnik Message-Id: <200705121125.l4CBPffN011640@freefall.freebsd.org> To: fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us, pav@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/66483: [patch] share/man/man4/csa.4 grammar nits X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 12 May 2007 11:25:42 -0000 Synopsis: [patch] share/man/man4/csa.4 grammar nits State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: pav State-Changed-When: Sat May 12 11:25:21 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: The new text is not much of an improvement - firstly, the original text is perfectly fine. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66483