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From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@freebsd.org>
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On Fri, Mar 11, 2005 at 12:44:05PM +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> On 2005-03-11 10:37, Pav Lucistnik <pav@freebsd.org> wrote:
> > What would you say to the attached patch, which
> > -) removes <application> tags around X
> > -) adds <application> tags around xfree and xorg entities
> > -) fixes a typo verions -> versions
> > -) rewords different X system -> different X11 implementation
> > ?
> 
> > -          <para>&os; versions prior 5.3 will use the default &xfree86;
> > -            4.X, while latter verions will default to &xorg;.
> > -            If you want to run different <application>X</application>
> > -            system than the default one, add the following line to
> > +          <para>&os; versions prior 5.3 will use the default
> > +            <application>&xfree86;&nbsp;4.X</application>,
> > +            while latter versions will default to
> > +            <application>&xorg;</application>.
> > +            If you want to run different X11 implementation
> > +            than the default one, add the following line to
> >              <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>, (if you
> >              do not have this file, create it):</para>
> 
> "If you want to run _a_ different..."
> 
> Otherwise, this seems fine, IMHO.
> 

Same here.

Marc