From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jan 22 09:40:30 2005 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5F98716A4CE for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:30 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D930C43D67 for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:28 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j0M9eJeA097753 for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:19 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j0M9eJrp097748; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:19 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:19 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200501220940.j0M9eJrp097748@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, "Jesus R. Camou" Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D72EE16A4CE for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:33:45 +0000 (GMT) Received: from fed1rmmtao10.cox.net (fed1rmmtao10.cox.net [68.230.241.29]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4EA1043D46 for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:33:45 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx) Received: from opensea.malexa.org.mx ([68.0.141.123]) by fed1rmmtao10.cox.net (InterMail vM.6.01.04.00 201-2131-117-20041022) with ESMTP <20050122093344.DTF7026.fed1rmmtao10.cox.net@opensea.malexa.org.mx> for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 04:33:44 -0500 Received: from opensea.malexa.org.mx (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by opensea.malexa.org.mx (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j0M9Zq7i009953 for ; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 02:35:52 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx) Received: (from jcamou@localhost) by opensea.malexa.org.mx (8.13.1/8.12.11/Submit) id j0M9ZqoW009952; Sat, 22 Jan 2005 02:35:52 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from jcamou) Message-Id: <200501220935.j0M9ZqoW009952@opensea.malexa.org.mx> Date: Sat, 22 Jan 2005 02:35:52 -0700 (MST) From: "Jesus R. Camou" To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/76563: [PATCH] Remove contractions and fix typo on article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: "Jesus R. Camou" List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 22 Jan 2005 09:40:30 -0000 >Number: 76563 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] Remove contractions and fix typo on article >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: change-request >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jan 22 09:40:19 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Jesus R. Camou >Release: FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD opensea.malexa.org.mx 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #2: Mon Nov 22 16:49:52 MST 2004 jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OPENSEA i386 >Description: o Remove contractions (wasn't, don't) o s/5.x/5.X This will probably be the last patch this article will need. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- 5-roadmap.diff begins here --- Index: article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.25 diff -u -r1.25 article.sgml --- article.sgml 23 Oct 2004 23:20:55 -0000 1.25 +++ article.sgml 22 Jan 2005 09:26:27 -0000 @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ 3.X series. Work on 3-CURRENT trudged along seemingly forever, and finally a cry was made to just ship it and clean up later. This decision resulted in the 3.0 and 3.1 releases - being very unsatisfying for most, and it wasn't until 3.2 that the + being very unsatisfying for most, and it was not until 3.2 that the series was considered stable. To make matters worse, the &t.releng.3; branch was created along with the 3.0 release, and the &t.releng.head; branch was allowed to advance immediately towards 4-CURRENT. This resulted in a @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ &t.releng.3; branch very difficult. &os; 2.2.8 was left for quite a while as the last production-quality version of &os;. - Our intent is to avoid repeating that scenario with &os; 5.x. + Our intent is to avoid repeating that scenario with &os; 5.X. Delaying the &t.releng.5; branch until it is stable and production quality will ensure that it stays maintainable and provides a compelling reason to upgrade from 4.X. To do this, we must @@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ busdma interface and drivers: architectures like PAE/&i386; and - sparc64 which don't have a direct mapping between host memory + sparc64 which do not have a direct mapping between host memory address space and expansion bus address space require the elimination for vtophys() and friends. The busdma interface was created to handle exactly this problem, but many drivers do not use --- 5-roadmap.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: