From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu May 23 10:43:18 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D9A4A8AB; Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:17 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BAF873E0; Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:17 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.6) with ESMTP id r4NAhHb2057314; Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:17 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.5/Submit) id r4NAhHWi057313; Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:17 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201305231043.r4NAhHWi057313@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:17 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41718 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 23 May 2013 10:43:18 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Thu May 23 10:43:17 2013 New Revision: 41718 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41718 Log: Make some wording in the ports/packages section more clear and consistent. PR: docs/178763 Submitted by: Drahos Cagan Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Thu May 23 10:29:53 2013 (r41717) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Thu May 23 10:43:17 2013 (r41718) @@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ Info: Lists information about open fil make quicksearch key=string, where string is some text to search - for. The text can be comments, descriptions or dependencies + for. The text can be in comments, descriptions, or dependencies in order to find ports which relate to a particular subject when the name of the program is unknown. @@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56 FTP_PASSIVE_MODE, FTP_PROXY, and FTP_PASSWORD. You may need to set one or more of these if you are behind a firewall, or need to use an - FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list. + FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list of variables. Note that in the example above lsof is used instead of lsof-4.56.4. When the remote fetching feature is used, the version number of the package @@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56 available from , or the /packages directory of the &os; - DVD distribution. The layout of the packages is similar to + DVD distribution. The layout of the packages directory is similar to that of the /usr/ports tree. Each category has its own directory, and every package can be found within the All directory. @@ -507,22 +507,22 @@ docbook = = The version of the installed package matches the - one found in the local ports tree. + one in the local ports tree. < - The installed version is older than the one - available in the local ports tree. + The version of the installed package is older + than the one in the local ports tree. - >The installed version is newer - than the one found in the local ports tree, meaning + > + The version of the installed package is newer + than the one in the local ports tree, meaning that the local ports tree is probably out of date. - ? The installed package cannot be found in the