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On 2005.01.28 11:41:23 +0300, Denis Peplin wrote:
> Hello!
>=20
> Denis Peplin wrote:
> >den         2005-01-28 08:36:55 UTC
> >
> >  FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> >  Modified files:
> >    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml=20
> >  Log:
> ...
>=20
> some comments:
> >  - explain "can be considered short" in comment (can be useful later)
> <screen> above can be converted to something else
>=20
> >  - restart -> reload for re-reading syslog.conf
> command below:
> <command>killall -HUP <replaceable>syslogd</replaceable></command>
>=20
> is <replaceable></replaceable> really needed?

If (I haven't chekked the text) it is just a command which tell the
user how to restart syslog I don't think <replaceable> should be
there.  For 5.X the best example would probably be "/etc/rc.d/syslogd
reload", should anyone want to improve it more...

--=20
Simon L. Nielsen

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