From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 19 22:06:55 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5A6B4E5E for ; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:06:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-pb0-f54.google.com (mail-pb0-f54.google.com [209.85.160.54]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 34059A93 for ; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:06:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-pb0-f54.google.com with SMTP id rr4so2460126pbb.13 for ; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:06:49 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=VU/m4X++GufJCNzVfbpCAP72cnTczxvaQWTCqQfPESM=; b=PcTeRP59ZcIoppSLjELM74SZ9+2zDbEryHj8TRpCaHaRGU8fYdVOXxCoAuyuyc66v9 AAY0rTHHSmFtFidqdoEviZJ8HqDmNuMjE77ih3WdkFQDBr/q1CIraXeK2Ji2E2i1YrpY 6Is9wj6gRV15DMu3Glxb9dyiO1WV8I6+hmKTo= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type :x-gm-message-state; bh=VU/m4X++GufJCNzVfbpCAP72cnTczxvaQWTCqQfPESM=; b=n74m9KTE6X0PRP+ValCBB1KPHmDzq/AtOuDXN96eU38EcEgfoxx8DAz9QfiDeqBYy1 Lt4RmxDJNGxMkJBEvyt8CACHW3MJOIfqLcWgBlj00oNwR08k9wKElR6gb0dgTzCI3PVf Q9FHy4+JTLayRBZ9OD4eToOxtv5V0SBkBVApaUvcH57hrhelc7eBCC18w3ciYBMCdkrq VPDgMfKC04iTyzadJGbUunubdc57yllpMsU2vCPT9nBooA2IBs1Ffn7IdUoBvrD38dbP +Qibp4eRjczDIeVtJXRq+Ib0+PPs21AK+SsZd881ZNzWXTN7uY854g7AG6PFAltYtMRm aIWw== X-Received: by 10.68.134.3 with SMTP id pg3mr44296731pbb.51.1361311609632; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:06:49 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.66.158.169 with HTTP; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:06:18 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <20130219220417.GC1514@glenbarber.us> References: <201302161543.r1GFh9Ek038848@svn.freebsd.org> <20130219215627.GB92116@felucia.tataz.chchile.org> <20130219220417.GC1514@glenbarber.us> From: Eitan Adler Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 17:06:18 -0500 X-Google-Sender-Auth: RzAftdV7cfMcZCT_v7alG74NNQU Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing To: Glen Barber Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQkDe7B8lN9cxdy/C12PCuk47R1rti3R7zQ10INd7Kl2C7YkC3hLrxEnZGNFzU1HoWXbSqFV Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:06:55 -0000 On 19 February 2013 17:04, Glen Barber wrote: > On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 10:56:27PM +0100, Jeremie Le Hen wrote: >> Hi Eitan, >> >> On Sat, Feb 16, 2013 at 03:43:09PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: >> > Author: eadler >> > Date: Sat Feb 16 15:43:08 2013 >> > New Revision: 40980 >> > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40980 >> > >> > Log: >> > Twiddle with the poorly worded sentence. >> >> I am not a native English speaker, so correct me if I'm wrong. The >> commit log sounds slightly derogatory toward the original author. Given >> we have many committers who are not native speakers, maybe we should >> avoid such comments so may dishearten them. >> >> Again, excuse me if I am misunderstanding your statement. >> > > I agree, unintentional or otherwise, the log for this commit was a bit > much, and certainly can be misinterpreted negatively. I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize. Perhaps any of the following? "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence." "Make this sentence more clear" or "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence." -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams