From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 19 22:12:00 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0B678F18; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:12:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from onyx.glenbarber.us (onyx.glenbarber.us [IPv6:2607:fc50:1000:c200::face]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D467AAB8; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:11:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: from glenbarber.us (unknown [IPv6:2001:470:8:1205:2:2:ff:29]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) (Authenticated sender: gjb) by onyx.glenbarber.us (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 8D48023F669; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 17:11:58 -0500 (EST) DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.7.4 onyx.glenbarber.us 8D48023F669 Authentication-Results: onyx.glenbarber.us; dkim=none reason="no signature"; dkim-adsp=none (insecure policy) Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 17:11:56 -0500 From: Glen Barber To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing Message-ID: <20130219221156.GD1514@glenbarber.us> References: <201302161543.r1GFh9Ek038848@svn.freebsd.org> <20130219215627.GB92116@felucia.tataz.chchile.org> <20130219220417.GC1514@glenbarber.us> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 10.0-CURRENT amd64 User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:12:00 -0000 --J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 05:06:18PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 19 February 2013 17:04, Glen Barber wrote: > > On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 10:56:27PM +0100, Jeremie Le Hen wrote: > >> Hi Eitan, > >> > >> On Sat, Feb 16, 2013 at 03:43:09PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> > Author: eadler > >> > Date: Sat Feb 16 15:43:08 2013 > >> > New Revision: 40980 > >> > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40980 > >> > > >> > Log: > >> > Twiddle with the poorly worded sentence. > >> > >> I am not a native English speaker, so correct me if I'm wrong. The > >> commit log sounds slightly derogatory toward the original author. Giv= en > >> we have many committers who are not native speakers, maybe we should > >> avoid such comments so may dishearten them. > >> > >> Again, excuse me if I am misunderstanding your statement. > >> > > > > I agree, unintentional or otherwise, the log for this commit was a bit > > much, and certainly can be misinterpreted negatively. >=20 > I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize. >=20 > Perhaps any of the following? >=20 > "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence." > "Make this sentence more clear" > or > "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence." >=20 Either 2 or 3. Glen --J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.19 (FreeBSD) iQEcBAEBCAAGBQJRI/isAAoJEFJPDDeguUajRBEIALbjrGF/CIqsMcN/5iKAuTc8 xNyi2GpB+OycTpp3BjmE9+81vUmH/ORpY88zu69lTB2/QfaKvu/QCYF1CI1SL5ol brqOsYAN1EXTwcEGEN+s8vy2Ij3Oij5W63INsGX8mRSXpWoKVnn/SchTKKEIf1CW 6ad05HcJtvqarACzWFJ9hxt4ZBffL96+z9HmEzFnx+4Ge0r/5TYikV39F72aOKFY +ZqzbIuH5f3a6lc/rlPx8VxvARslfbpQhN+czO9/YoACnBe/XHaV/UEUPWdQXJDX K7kAQlXkOzSYR8kOy26xiWWlXd89ZPQkGRqITGm5M1Q+hF4AFC5rPI0iaMKMZ0c= =NW6Z -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --J5MfuwkIyy7RmF4Q--