From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 19 22:17:00 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0E1F11C7; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:17:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gkeramidas@gmail.com) Received: from mail-ee0-f50.google.com (mail-ee0-f50.google.com [74.125.83.50]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF9C6AFF; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:16:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-ee0-f50.google.com with SMTP id e51so3746703eek.23 for ; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:16:57 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:sender:date:from:to:cc:subject:message-id:references :mime-version:content-type:content-disposition:in-reply-to; bh=+lVQhHEC9Dck2S/h1jwR9rMg6znNpVgan0gEt5b5W70=; b=p4E8HgAo8lSv+acu6VRwQs1+SPYJbwR0Rh05G13ONYN66anfjELbYnlEJS+Nhz22MQ h88efqnP527MvrlBmx6+mF2bwYUX3rvcV8sxgYbXBamz46SpSS6x5dqVhCyzmI2sFbrk E95WHQD5q3K0TaqyqFgvi/8ygRtET+2s3X6JmDVKp1qtmddQ37sA4cwrfwxdQYjEKLHn 6dIiQdWHR9J1iXQLFN+9TL1fquydhmGqYYU+3vOSfpZREBNNe3i5r0CqhEnZNSms4FK8 2oGl8snfwGIP11nzUDNYEQrFd46/LpSeONF9tnfb44H3RgaWe8ro3UwQFcCelof8+yW3 kAbQ== X-Received: by 10.14.213.199 with SMTP id a47mr61682750eep.31.1361312217762; Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:16:57 -0800 (PST) Received: from saturn (217-162-217-29.dynamic.hispeed.ch. [217.162.217.29]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 46sm36863193eea.3.2013.02.19.14.16.55 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=RC4-SHA bits=128/128); Tue, 19 Feb 2013 14:16:56 -0800 (PST) Sender: Giorgos Keramidas Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 23:16:52 +0100 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Benjamin Kaduk Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors Message-ID: <20130219221651.GB15736@saturn> References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 22:17:00 -0000 On 2013-02-18 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Mon, 18 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > >Author: eadler > >Date: Mon Feb 18 19:54:21 2013 > >New Revision: 41010 > >URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41010 > > > >Log: > > While cvsup is deprecated, as long as it is documented and working, > > don't document bogus, ancient, or useless parts. > > > > Approved by: bcr (mentor) > > > >Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml > > > >Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml > >- With this very useful feature, those users who are on > >+ With this very feature, those users who are on > > Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a > useful feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly > consistent with our style.) 'With this very feature' can be understood also as 'with this specific feature' or 'with precisely this feature', so it's syntactically correct. It _is_ a bit confusing though as a diff/change, so I'd probably prefer the simpler 'With this feature' too.