From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 23 19:21:10 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3A4E62E2; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 28D642077; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:10 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6NJLAWf031911; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:10 GMT (envelope-from gabor@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from gabor@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r6NJL8RJ031898; Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:08 GMT (envelope-from gabor@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201307231921.r6NJL8RJ031898@svn.freebsd.org> From: Gabor Kovesdan Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:08 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42403 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1: articles/contributing books/arch-handbook/scsi books/arch-handbook/sound books/developers-handbook/policies books/handbook/boot books/handbook/cutting-... X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:10 -0000 Author: gabor Date: Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 New Revision: 42403 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42403 Log: - Whitespac changes; translators may ignore Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -412,7 +412,8 @@ - The BSD copyrightBSD copyright. This copyright is most preferred + The BSD copyrightBSD copyright + . This copyright is most preferred due to its no strings attached nature and general attractiveness to commercial enterprises. Far from discouraging such commercial use, the FreeBSD Project Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -155,8 +155,9 @@ free the devq also because we can do nothing else with it and we want to conserve memory. - If a SCSI card has multiple SCSI busesSCSIbus on it then each bus - requires its own cam_sim + If a SCSI card has multiple SCSI buses + SCSIbus + on it then each bus requires its own cam_sim structure. An interesting question is what to do if a SCSI card has @@ -227,7 +228,8 @@ Finally we register the SCSI buses associated with our SCSI - adapterSCSIadapter: + adapterSCSIadapter + : if(xpt_bus_register(sim, bus_number) != CAM_SUCCESS) { cam_sim_free(sim, /*free_devq*/ TRUE); @@ -605,9 +607,10 @@ } Then allocate whatever data structures (such as - card-dependent hardware control blockhardware control block) we need to process this - request. If we can not then freeze the SIM queue and remember - that we have a pending operation, return the CCB back and ask + card-dependent hardware control block + hardware control block) we need + to process this request. If we can not then freeze the SIM queue and + remember that we have a pending operation, return the CCB back and ask CAM to re-queue it. Later when the resources become available the SIM queue must be unfrozen by returning a ccb with the CAM_SIMQ_RELEASE bit set in its status. Otherwise, if all went @@ -1258,9 +1261,10 @@ of the union ccb: If the returned geometry differs much enough from what the - SCSI controller BIOSSCSIBIOS thinks and a disk on this SCSI controller - is used as bootable the system may not be able to boot. The - typical calculation example taken from the aic7xxx driver + SCSI controller BIOSSCSI + BIOS thinks and a disk + on this SCSI controller is used as bootable the system may not be able + to boot. The typical calculation example taken from the aic7xxx driver is: struct ccb_calc_geometry *ccg; Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/sound/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -122,7 +122,8 @@ DRIVER_MODULE(snd_xxxpci, pci, xxx_driver, pcm_devclass, 0, 0); MODULE_DEPEND(snd_xxxpci, snd_pcm, PCM_MINVER, PCM_PREFVER,PCM_MAXVER); - Most sound driversdevice driverssound need to store additional private + Most sound driversdevice drivers + sound need to store additional private information about their device. A private data structure is usually allocated in the attach routine. Its address is passed to pcm by the calls to Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/policies/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -454,12 +454,14 @@ - The Core teamcore team decides if + The Core team + core team decides if the code should be part of make world. - The Release Engineeringrelease engineering + The Release Engineering + release engineering decides if it goes into the release. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -519,9 +519,10 @@ boot: Use kernel.GENERIC to refer to the default kernel that comes with an installation, or - kernel.oldkernel.old to refer to the - previously installed kernel before a system upgrade or - before configuring a custom kernel. + kernel.old + kernel.old + to refer to the previously installed kernel before a system + upgrade or before configuring a custom kernel. Use the following to load the usual modules with Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -1334,7 +1334,10 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Use svnSubversion-CURRENTSyncing with Subversion to check out + Use svnSubversion + -CURRENT + Syncing with Subversion + to check out the desired development or release branch. This is the recommended method, providing access to &os; development as it occurs. Checkout the -CURRENT @@ -1347,7 +1350,9 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. Use the CTM-CURRENTSyncing with CTM facility. + linkend="ctm">CTM + -CURRENTSyncing with CTM + facility. If you have bad connectivity such as high price connections or only email access, CTM is an option, but it @@ -1369,7 +1374,8 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. compile just a subset is almost guaranteed to cause problems. - Before compiling &os.current;-CURRENTcompiling, read + Before compiling &os.current;-CURRENT + compiling, read /usr/src/Makefile very carefully. Install a new kernel and rebuild the world the first time through as part @@ -1497,14 +1503,17 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Use svnSubversion to check out + Use svn + Subversion to check out the desired development or release branch. This is the recommended method, providing access to &os; development as it occurs. Branch names include head for the current development head, and branches identified in the release engineering - page, such as stable/9-STABLEsyncing with Subversion + page, such as stable/9 + -STABLE + syncing with Subversion or releng/9.0. URL prefixes for Subversion checkout of the base system are shown in Consider using CTM-STABLEsyncing with CTM if you do + linkend="ctm">CTM + -STABLEsyncing with CTM + if you do not have a fast connection to the Internet. - Before compiling &os.stable;-STABLEcompiling, read + Before compiling &os.stable;-STABLE + compiling, read /usr/src/Makefile carefully. Install a new kernel and rebuild the world the first time through as part of the Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -2293,8 +2293,9 @@ Mounting root from ufs:/dev/md0c This option instructs &man.sysinstall.8; - to use passive modeFTPpassive mode for all FTP - operations. + to use passive mode + FTPpassive mode + for all FTP operations. This allows the user to pass through firewalls that do not allow incoming connections on random TCP ports. @@ -2313,7 +2314,8 @@ Mounting root from ufs:/dev/md0c the requests and send them to the FTP server. This allows the user to pass through firewalls that do not allow FTP, but offer a HTTP - proxyFTPvia a HTTP proxy. + proxyFTP + via a HTTP proxy. In this case, specify the proxy in addition to the FTP server. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -78,14 +78,16 @@ - Preemptive multitaskingpreemptive multitasking with + Preemptive multitasking + preemptive multitasking with dynamic priority adjustment to ensure smooth and fair sharing of the computer between applications and users, even under the heaviest of loads. - Multi-user facilitiesmulti-user facilities which allow + Multi-user facilities + multi-user facilities which allow many people to use a &os; system simultaneously for a variety of things. This means, for example, that system peripherals such as printers and tape drives are properly @@ -95,7 +97,8 @@ over-use. - Strong TCP/IP networkingTCP/IP networking with + Strong TCP/IP networking + TCP/IP networking with support for industry standards such as SCTP, DHCP, NFS, NIS, PPP, SLIP, IPsec, and IPv6. This means that your &os; machine can interoperate easily with other systems as @@ -106,7 +109,8 @@ - Memory protectionmemory protection ensures that + Memory protection + memory protection ensures that applications (or users) cannot interfere with each other. One application crashing will not affect others in any way. @@ -114,7 +118,9 @@ The industry standard X Window - SystemX Window System (X11R7) provides a graphical user + System + X Window System + (X11R7) provides a graphical user interface (GUI) for the cost of a common VGA card and monitor and comes with full sources. @@ -163,7 +169,8 @@ compile. - Demand paged virtual memoryvirtual memory and + Demand paged virtual memory + virtual memory and merged VM/buffer cache design efficiently satisfies applications with large appetites for memory while still maintaining interactive response to other @@ -171,8 +178,9 @@ - SMPSymmetric Multi-Processing (SMP) support for machines with - multiple CPUs. + SMP + Symmetric Multi-Processing (SMP) + support for machines with multiple CPUs. @@ -194,7 +202,8 @@ - Source codesource code for the entire system + Source code + source code for the entire system means you have the greatest degree of control over your environment. Why be locked into a proprietary solution at the mercy of your vendor when you can have a truly open @@ -211,8 +220,11 @@ - &os; is based on the 4.4BSD-Lite4.4BSD-Lite release from Computer - Systems Research Group (CSRG)Computer Systems Research Group (CSRG) at the University of California + &os; is based on the 4.4BSD-Lite + 4.4BSD-Lite release from Computer + Systems Research Group (CSRG) + Computer Systems Research Group (CSRG) + at the University of California at Berkeley, and carries on the distinguished tradition of BSD systems development. In addition to the fine work provided by CSRG, the &os; Project has put in many thousands of hours @@ -251,11 +263,13 @@ - FTP serversFTP servers + FTP servers + FTP servers - World Wide Web serversweb servers (standard or secure + World Wide Web servers + web servers (standard or secure [SSL]) @@ -264,8 +278,9 @@ - Firewallsfirewall and NATNAT (IP masquerading) - gateways + Firewallsfirewall + and NATNAT + (IP masquerading) gateways @@ -281,7 +296,8 @@ - USENETUSENET News or Bulletin Board Systems + USENETUSENET + News or Bulletin Board Systems @@ -319,8 +335,11 @@ - Networking: Need a new router?router - A name server (DNS)?DNS Server A firewall to keep people out of your + Networking: Need a new router? + router + A name server (DNS)? + DNS Server A firewall to + keep people out of your internal network? &os; can easily turn that unused 386 or 486 PC sitting in the corner into an advanced router with sophisticated packet-filtering capabilities. @@ -348,8 +367,9 @@ Software Development: The basic &os; system comes with a full complement of development - tools including the renowned GNU C/C++GNU Compiler Collection compiler and - debugger. + tools including the renowned GNU + C/C++GNU Compiler Collection + compiler and debugger. @@ -373,12 +393,14 @@ AppleApple + url="http://www.apple.com/">Apple + Apple CiscoCisco + url="http://www.cisco.com/">Cisco + Cisco @@ -388,7 +410,8 @@ NetAppNetApp + url="http://www.netapp.com/">NetApp + NetApp @@ -398,61 +421,73 @@ Yahoo!Yahoo! + url="http://www.yahoo.com/">Yahoo! + Yahoo! YandexYandex + url="http://www.yandex.ru/">Yandex + Yandex ApacheApache + url="http://www.apache.org/">Apache + Apache RamblerRambler + url="http://www.rambler.ru/">Rambler + Rambler - SinaSina + Sina + Sina Pair NetworksPair Networks + url="http://www.pair.com/">Pair Networks + Pair Networks Sony JapanSony Japan + url="http://www.sony.co.jp/">Sony Japan + Sony Japan NetcraftNetcraft + url="http://www.netcraft.com/">Netcraft + Netcraft NetEaseNetEase + url="http://www.163.com/">NetEase + NetEase WeathernewsWeathernews + url="http://www.weathernews.com/">Weathernews + Weathernews TELEHOUSE - AmericaTELEHOUSE America + AmericaTELEHOUSE America + Experts - ExchangeExperts Exchange + ExchangeExperts Exchange + @@ -724,7 +759,8 @@ id="development-committers"/> - The committerscommitters + The committers + committers are the people who have write access to the Subversion tree, and are authorized to make modifications to the &os; source (the term @@ -743,7 +779,8 @@ id="development-core"/> - The &os; core teamcore team + The &os; core team + core team would be equivalent to the board of directors if the &os; Project were a company. The primary task of the core team is to make sure the project, as a whole, @@ -792,7 +829,8 @@ The - &os; Contributors Listcontributors is a long + &os; Contributors List + contributors is a long and growing one, so why not join it by contributing something back to &os; today? Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -254,7 +254,8 @@ - LANG for &posix;POSIX &man.setlocale.3; + LANG for &posix; + POSIX &man.setlocale.3; family functions Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 18:55:22 2013 (r42402) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Tue Jul 23 19:21:07 2013 (r42403) @@ -1333,7 +1333,8 @@ Exports list on foobar: - A NIS master serverNISmaster server. This + A NIS master server + NISmaster server. This server, analogous to a &windowsnt; primary domain controller, maintains the files used by all of the NIS clients. The passwd, @@ -1348,8 +1349,9 @@ Exports list on foobar: - NIS slave serversNISslave server. Similar to - the &windowsnt; backup domain controllers, NIS slave + NIS slave servers + NISslave server. + Similar to the &windowsnt; backup domain controllers, NIS slave servers maintain copies of the NIS master's data files. NIS slave servers provide the redundancy, which is needed in important environments. They also help to @@ -1359,7 +1361,9 @@ Exports list on foobar: - NIS clientsNISclient. NIS clients, like + NIS clients + NISclient. + NIS clients, like most &windowsnt; workstations, authenticate against the NIS server (or the &windowsnt; domain controller in the &windowsnt; workstations case) to log on.