From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 22 14:40:23 2005 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E522D16A4CE for ; Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AD16A43D41 for ; Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j1MEeMxk094363 for ; Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j1MEeMns094362; Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 GMT Message-Id: <200502221440.j1MEeMns094362@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: "Jesus R. Camou" Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: "Jesus R. Camou" List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:23 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/77926; it has been noted by GNATS. From: "Jesus R. Camou" To: Marc Fonvieille Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 07:33:44 -0700 --so9zsI5B81VjUb/o Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 03:15:41PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 06:53:18AM -0700, Jesus R. Camou wrote: > > > > >Number: 77926 > > >Category: docs > > >Synopsis: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list > > >Confidential: no > > >Severity: non-critical > > >Priority: medium > > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > > >State: open > > >Quarter: > > >Keywords: > > >Date-Required: > > >Class: update > > >Submitter-Id: current-users > > >Arrival-Date: Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005 > > >Closed-Date: > > >Last-Modified: > > >Originator: Jesus R. Camou > > >Release: FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386 > > >Organization: > > >Environment: > > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386 > > > > >Description: > > > > Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the > > capitalization of the Ports Collection. > > > > >How-To-Repeat: > > >Fix: > > > > --- writingstyle.diff begins here --- > > Index: chapter.sgml > > =================================================================== > > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v > > retrieving revision 1.43 > > diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml > > --- chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000 1.43 > > +++ chapter.sgml 22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000 > > @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ > > > > > > > > - ports collection > > + Ports Pollection > > > > > > This seems to be redundant with the "FreeBSD Ports Collection" entry, > ealier in the document. And I wonder about the revision 1.16 of this > list where both "FreeBSD Ports Collection" and ""ports collection" have > been added, maybe Murray and/or Chern may say something on that. > This is another example of docproj history, I mean, as with CDROM which > came from Walnut Creeks CDROM boxes (have a look to freebsdmall CD sets > too), this is not a typo but a choice. I requested this change to have an order of how words should be spelled. Both ways are used throughout the doc/ tree, it would look better if there were only one way of writing it from now on. Some replacements has been made lately for the capitalization way. Plus, oh my, there's a typo on my patch. I'll attach a corrected patch just in case it is decided to be committed. -- Jesus R. Camou jcamou@es.FreeBSD.org --so9zsI5B81VjUb/o Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="writingstyle2.diff" Index: writing-style/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.43 diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml --- writing-style/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000 1.43 +++ writing-style/chapter.sgml 22 Feb 2005 14:29:20 -0000 @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ - ports collection + Ports Collection --so9zsI5B81VjUb/o--