From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Sep 4 12:07:46 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1CFDF16A4BF; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 12:07:46 -0700 (PDT) Received: from Kain.sumuk.de (Kain.sumuk.de [213.221.86.114]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2050D43FE3; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 12:07:44 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from vincent@sumuk.de) Received: from Moses.earth.sol (Moses.earth.sol [192.168.1.1]) by Kain.sumuk.de (8.12.9/8.12.8) with ESMTP id h84J7cZ6005709; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:38 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from vincent@sumuk.de) Received: from Moses.earth.sol (localhost.earth.sol [127.0.0.1]) by Moses.earth.sol (8.12.5/8.12.5) with ESMTP id h84J7bPg001505; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:37 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from vincent@Moses.earth.sol) Received: (from vincent@localhost) by Moses.earth.sol (8.12.5/8.12.5/Submit) id h84J7aQW001504; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:36 +0200 (CEST) Date: Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:35 +0200 From: Martin Heinen To: Tom Rhodes Message-ID: <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de> References: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i In-Reply-To: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>; from trhodes@freebsd.org on Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400 cc: FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org cc: Robert Watson Subject: Re: [Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 04 Sep 2003 19:07:46 -0000 On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's" > now. Here are my final markup nits, otherwise I'm fine: > --- chapter.sgml Thu Sep 4 13:12:30 2003 > +++ chapter.new Thu Sep 4 13:19:05 2003 > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ > servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk > to them. As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become > today's desktops, and as computers become networked and > - internetworked, security becomes an even bigger issue. > + inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue. This (still) should be a separate commit. > + &prompt.user;k5init tillman > + tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG's Password: > + > + &prompt.user;k5list > + Credentials cache: FILE:/tmp/krb5cc_500 > + Principal: tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG > + > + Issued Expires Principal > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > + > + v4-ticket file: /tmp/tkt500 > + k5list: No ticket file (tf_util) Why use multiple screen elements here? All output is produced by the k5list command. Therefore one screen element is sufficient. > + &prompt.root;kadmin Missing space and userinput: &prompt.root; kadmin > + kadmin> add --random-key host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > + Max ticket life [unlimited]: > + Max renewable life [unlimited]: > + Attributes []: > + kadmin> ext host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > + kadmin> exit [ ... ] > + &prompt.root;kadmin > + kadmin> ext --keytab=/tmp/example.keytab host/myserver.smithclan.prv > + kadmin> exit The commands should be inside . -- Marxpitn