From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Feb 23 10:40:26 2005 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 33AD416A4CE for ; Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:26 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CDFF043D5E for ; Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:25 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j1NAePs1086031 for ; Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:25 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j1NAePna086029; Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:25 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:25 GMT Message-Id: <200502231040.j1NAePna086029@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Joel Dahl Subject: Re: docs/72462: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: Joel Dahl List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2005 10:40:26 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/72462; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Joel Dahl To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/72462: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2005 11:30:26 +0100 --=-RTmaB6MsP8YcDDb77LtS Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Uhh, I've totally forgot about this PR. Better patch attached. --=-RTmaB6MsP8YcDDb77LtS Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=hubs.diff Content-Type: text/x-patch; name=hubs.diff; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Index: article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.52 diff -u -r1.52 article.sgml --- article.sgml 30 Sep 2004 09:41:45 -0000 1.52 +++ article.sgml 23 Feb 2005 10:27:35 -0000 @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ Generally there are two ways to access a CVS repository remotely: via pserver or via ssh - (we don't consider rsh). + (we do not consider rsh). For anonymous access, pserver is very well suited, but some still offer ssh access as well. There is a custom crafted @@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ anonymous user's home-directory. This may not be possible for all sites. If you just offer pserver this restriction does not apply, but you may run with - more security risks. You don't need to install any special + more security risks. You do not need to install any special software, since &man.cvs.1; comes with FreeBSD. You need to enable access via inetd, so add an entry into your /etc/inetd.conf @@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ textproc/docproj port must be installed. - If you don't have a local repository, you can use + If you do not have a local repository, you can use CVSup to maintain an up to date copy of the www pages. A sample supfile can be found in /usr/share/examples/cvsup/www-supfile and @@ -666,18 +666,18 @@ environment variables, like SGML_CATALOG_FILES. Also have a look at your /etc/make.conf - (copy /etc/defaults/make.conf if + (copy /usr/share/examples/etc/make.conf if you do not have one), and look at the DOC_LANG variable. Now you are probably ready to run make - in you doc directory (/usr/share/doc + in your doc directory (/usr/share/doc by default) and build the documentation. Again you need to make it accessible for your web server and make sure the links point to the right location. The building of the documentation, as well as lots - of side issues, is documented itself in: + of side issues, is documented itself in the fdp-primer. Please read this piece of documentation, especially if you have problems building the documentation. @@ -845,7 +845,7 @@ - I'm an official mirror, what is the right site for me? + I am an official mirror, what is the right site for me? In general the description in still applies. Of course you may want to put some @@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ It is also important that hub administrators try to keep their mirrors as up-to-date as - possible (again, even more crucial for Tier-1 mirrors). If Mirror1 doesn't update for a + possible (again, even more crucial for Tier-1 mirrors). If Mirror1 does not update for a while, lower tier mirrors will begin to mirror old data from Mirror1 and thus begins a downward spiral... Keep your mirrors up to date! --=-RTmaB6MsP8YcDDb77LtS--