From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 17 17:58:51 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 25CC0106566B; Mon, 17 Oct 2011 17:58:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@freebsd.org) Received: from cyrus.watson.org (cyrus.watson.org [65.122.17.42]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DF46C8FC08; Mon, 17 Oct 2011 17:58:50 +0000 (UTC) Received: from bigwig.baldwin.cx (66.111.2.69.static.nyinternet.net [66.111.2.69]) by cyrus.watson.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 9308546B23; Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:58:50 -0400 (EDT) Received: from jhbbsd.localnet (unknown [209.249.190.124]) by bigwig.baldwin.cx (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 282178A02E; Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:58:50 -0400 (EDT) From: John Baldwin To: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:29:00 -0400 User-Agent: KMail/1.13.5 (FreeBSD/8.2-CBSD-20110617; KDE/4.5.5; amd64; ; ) References: <201110161430.p9GEUTFj066335@svn.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <201110161430.p9GEUTFj066335@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-Id: <201110171329.00859.jhb@freebsd.org> X-Greylist: Sender succeeded SMTP AUTH, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.2.6 (bigwig.baldwin.cx); Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:58:50 -0400 (EDT) Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r226436 - in head: . gnu/usr.bin/binutils/objcopy gnu/usr.bin/binutils/strip lib/libc/gen lib/libelf lib/libipsec lib/libpmc lib/msun/man libexec/rtld-elf/amd64 libexec/rtld-elf/i386 sb... X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 17 Oct 2011 17:58:51 -0000 On Sunday, October 16, 2011 10:30:29 am Eitan Adler wrote: > Author: eadler (ports committer) > Date: Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 > New Revision: 226436 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/226436 > > Log: > - change "is is" to "is" or "it is" > - change "the the" to "the" > > Approved by: lstewart > Approved by: sahil (mentor) > MFC after: 3 days Hmm, at least some of these are indicative of other errors and the new sentences are still broken. Also, for changes to 3rd party code, you probably want to see about sending those upstream. You should probably send the e1000 change to jfv@ so it isn't lost in the next Intel driver import as well. > Modified: head/secure/usr.bin/openssl/man/ca.1 > ============================================================================== > --- head/secure/usr.bin/openssl/man/ca.1 Sun Oct 16 14:16:46 2011 (r226435) > +++ head/secure/usr.bin/openssl/man/ca.1 Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 (r226436) > @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ section for information on the required > .IP "\fB\-infiles\fR" 4 > .IX Item "-infiles" > if present this should be the last option, all subsequent arguments > -are assumed to the the names of files containing certificate requests. > +are assumed to the names of files containing certificate requests. Here the removed 'the' should be replaced with 'be'. > .IP "\fB\-out filename\fR" 4 > .IX Item "-out filename" > the output file to output certificates to. The default is standard > > Modified: head/sys/dev/isp/DriverManual.txt > ============================================================================== > --- head/sys/dev/isp/DriverManual.txt Sun Oct 16 14:16:46 2011 (r226435) > +++ head/sys/dev/isp/DriverManual.txt Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 (r226436) > @@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ here in clarifying some of this. > > A succesful execution of isp_init will lead to the driver 'registering' > itself with this platform's SCSI subsystem. One assumed action for this > -is the registry of a function the the SCSI subsystem for this platform > +is the registry of a function the SCSI subsystem for this platform > will call when it has a SCSI command to run. The removed 'the' should be replaced with 'that'. > > The platform specific module function that receives this will do whatever > > Modified: head/sys/netinet/ipfw/dummynet.txt > ============================================================================== > --- head/sys/netinet/ipfw/dummynet.txt Sun Oct 16 14:16:46 2011 (r226435) > +++ head/sys/netinet/ipfw/dummynet.txt Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 (r226436) > @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ we do the following: > > dummynet_task() > =============== > -The dummynet_task() is the the main dummynet processing function and is > +The dummynet_task() is the main dummynet processing function and is Unrelated, this should probably say "The dummnet_task() function" (or routine, etc.). > called every tick. This function first calculate the new current time, then > it checks if it is the time to wake up object from the system_heap comparing > the current time and the key of the heap. Two types of object (really the > > Modified: head/usr.bin/compress/doc/NOTES > ============================================================================== > --- head/usr.bin/compress/doc/NOTES Sun Oct 16 14:16:46 2011 (r226435) > +++ head/usr.bin/compress/doc/NOTES Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 (r226436) > @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ comprehensive survey of an area which wi > > Until the dust clears, how you approach ideas which are patented depends > on how paranoid you are of a legal onslaught. Arbitrary? Yes. But > -the patent bar the the CCPA (Court of Customs and Patent Appeals) > +the patent bar the CCPA (Court of Customs and Patent Appeals) > thanks you for any uncertainty as they, at least, stand to gain > from any trouble. I think the first 'the' here should be 'of'. > Modified: head/usr.sbin/pkg_install/lib/version.c > ============================================================================== > --- head/usr.sbin/pkg_install/lib/version.c Sun Oct 16 14:16:46 2011 (r226435) > +++ head/usr.sbin/pkg_install/lib/version.c Sun Oct 16 14:30:28 2011 (r226436) > @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ split_version(const char *pkgname, const > if (pkgname == NULL) > errx(2, "%s: Passed NULL pkgname.", __func__); > > - /* Look for the last '-' the the pkgname */ > + /* Look for the last '-' the pkgname */ The first 'the' should be 'in'. > ch = strrchr(pkgname, '-'); > /* Cheat if we are just passed a version, not a valid package name */ > versionstr = ch ? ch + 1 : pkgname; > -- John Baldwin