From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Feb 22 00:42:00 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E5CFD30E for ; Fri, 22 Feb 2013 00:42:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from smtp.knology.net (smtp-fo.knology.synacor.com [64.8.71.118]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AB142982 for ; Fri, 22 Feb 2013 00:42:00 +0000 (UTC) X_CMAE_Category: 0,0 Undefined,Undefined X-CNFS-Analysis: v=2.0 cv=e4qEuNV/ c=1 sm=0 a=38Y8UczQxcwRmfYDsgMJww==:17 a=ZxN8qah7hV8A:10 a=3-jqWEckgiQA:10 a=G3Lp4l_EmE8A:10 a=wPDyFdB5xvgA:10 a=kj9zAlcOel0A:10 a=s1O25tkdAAAA:8 a=H37zuCLrrnQA:10 a=jfZAcYpafgiSMLC4auAA:9 a=CjuIK1q_8ugA:10 a=38Y8UczQxcwRmfYDsgMJww==:117 X-CM-Score: 0 X-Scanned-by: Cloudmark Authority Engine Authentication-Results: smtp01.knology.synacor.com header.from=wblock@wonkity.com; sender-id=neutral Authentication-Results: smtp01.knology.synacor.com smtp.mail=wblock@wonkity.com; spf=neutral; sender-id=neutral Authentication-Results: smtp01.knology.synacor.com smtp.user=wblock@rushmore.com; auth=pass (LOGIN) Received-SPF: neutral (smtp01.knology.synacor.com: 67.158.26.137 is neither permitted nor denied by domain of wonkity.com) Received: from [67.158.26.137] ([67.158.26.137:10580] helo=wonkity.com) by smtp.knlogy.net (envelope-from ) (ecelerity 2.2.3.47 r(39787)) with ESMTPA id E7/70-13976-6DEB6215; Thu, 21 Feb 2013 19:41:58 -0500 Received: from wonkity.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by wonkity.com (8.14.6/8.14.6) with ESMTP id r1M0fv3o091851; Thu, 21 Feb 2013 17:41:57 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from localhost (wblock@localhost) by wonkity.com (8.14.6/8.14.6/Submit) with ESMTP id r1M0fuuE091848; Thu, 21 Feb 2013 17:41:57 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2013 17:41:56 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block To: Benjamin Kaduk Subject: Re: svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users In-Reply-To: Message-ID: References: <201302211406.r1LE66bl041470@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (BSF 1167 2008-08-23) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.2.7 (wonkity.com [127.0.0.1]); Thu, 21 Feb 2013 17:41:57 -0700 (MST) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, Dru Lavigne , svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 22 Feb 2013 00:42:01 -0000 On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > >> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done >> quotas >> >> disk quotas >> - Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and >> - they >> - provide a way to quickly check that usage without >> - calculating it every time. Quotas are discussed in > - linkend="quotas"/>. >> + Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to >> + quickly check that usage without calculating it every time. > > This sentence is still not quite there. > Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the > disk usage of users"? "Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users" >> + Quotas are discussed in . Is that the right way to do that? should be around some text to make a hyperlink. generates the text, like Chapter 21. (I think.)