From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jul 30 12:44:21 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3A3221065672 for ; Thu, 30 Jul 2009 12:44:21 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kuuse@redantigua.com) Received: from hapkido.dreamhost.com (hapkido.dreamhost.com [66.33.216.122]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1EF398FC1A for ; Thu, 30 Jul 2009 12:44:21 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kuuse@redantigua.com) Received: from homiemail-a1.g.dreamhost.com (caiajhbdcagg.dreamhost.com [208.97.132.66]) by hapkido.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 67C51179705 for ; Thu, 30 Jul 2009 05:15:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [192.168.1.128] (165.Red-83-45-105.dynamicIP.rima-tde.net [83.45.105.165]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by homiemail-a1.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2EE35119E10 for ; Thu, 30 Jul 2009 05:15:00 -0700 (PDT) From: Johan Kuuse To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: <20090730120024.AA78B10656F9@hub.freebsd.org> References: <20090730120024.AA78B10656F9@hub.freebsd.org> Content-Type: text/plain Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 14:14:49 +0200 Message-Id: <1248956089.1316.68.camel@m20.> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.26.0 FreeBSD GNOME Team Port Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Subject: Re: freebsd-doc Digest, Vol 331, Issue 4 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 12:44:21 -0000 > Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT > From: Glen Barber > Subject: docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook > Section 24.2.2 > To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org > Message-ID: <200907291601.n6TG1ptk082497@www.freebsd.org> > > > >Number: 137243 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Glen Barber > >Release: 8.0-BETA2 > >Organization: > >Environment: > FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009 root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION i386 > >Description: > Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors. The handbook states the following: > "This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." > > This should either be: > > a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run. > > or > > b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run. > > > [1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html > >How-To-Repeat: > > >Fix: > The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR > > > > > Patch attached with submission follows: > > --- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400 > +++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400 > @@ -281,8 +281,8 @@ > > @daily root freebsd-update cron > > - This entry states that once every day, the > - freebsd-update will be ran. In this way, > + This entry states that once every day, > + freebsd-update will run. In this way, > using the argument, > freebsd-update will only check if updates > exist. If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded > > > >Release-Note: > >Audit-Trail: > >Unformatted: The crontab examples itself has an incorrect syntax: BAD (current example): @daily root freebsd-update cron Working example: @daily /usr/sbin/freebsd-update cron Regards, Johan