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From: Tom Hukins <tom@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: Please review: NTP section for Handbook
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Thanks for the comments - the feedback I received has been really
helpful.

I've updated the document at
http://people.FreeBSD.org/~tom/tmp/ntp.sgml to incorporate all the
suggestions I received.

If there are no complaints, I'll commit this soon.

The only thing I'm unsure of is exactly where in the "Advanced
Networking" chapter this belongs.  I guess between "DNS" and "Network
Address Translation" is as good as anywhere.

Thanks,
Tom

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