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Hello!

Denis Peplin wrote:
> den         2005-02-10 12:04:02 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD doc repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Improve "Building the Rule Script" section by adding description of
>   converting script to rule list (the example already contain this way,
>   but it was not described).
It seems that it is better to rename "Building the Rule Script"
to something like "Building the Rule Script with Symbolic Substitution",
or simply "Symbolic Substitution",
because:

"The rules are not important in this example; how the Symbolic 
substitution field are populated and used are."

What do you think?