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Yar Tikhiy wrote:
> I'm afraid that excessive use of parentheses makes
> comprehending the text more difficult.  Personally,
> I prefer simpler style when writing documentation.

Me, too :-) Your original changes had some ambiguous parts, my 
enhancement had too many parentheses, the resulted fusion is very good :-)

> I think that a bit of reiteration won't hurt when speaking of the
> license stuff.  At the same time, IMHO, your note at the beginning
> can be removed safely as soon as the main paragraphs change.

Yes, with your latest patch it may be removed.

-- 
Alex Dupre