From owner-freebsd-doc Wed Mar 25 08:07:42 1998 Return-Path: Received: (from majordom@localhost) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) id IAA00643 for freebsd-doc-outgoing; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 08:07:42 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG) Received: from tyree.iii.co.uk (tyree.iii.co.uk [195.89.149.230]) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) with ESMTP id IAA00636 for ; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 08:07:40 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from nik@iii.co.uk) From: nik@iii.co.uk Received: from carrig.strand.iii.co.uk (carrig.strand.iii.co.uk [192.168.7.25]) by tyree.iii.co.uk (8.8.8/8.8.8) with ESMTP id QAA00965; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 16:07:40 GMT Received: (from nik@localhost) by carrig.strand.iii.co.uk (8.8.8/8.8.7) id QAA01631; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 16:07:36 GMT Message-ID: <19980325160735.58464@iii.co.uk> Date: Wed, 25 Mar 1998 16:07:35 +0000 To: Sean Kelly Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: [REVIEW] Changes to the DocProj web pages References: <19980325110053.21549@iii.co.uk> <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-Mailer: Mutt 0.85e In-Reply-To: <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com>; from Sean Kelly on Wed, Mar 25, 1998 at 09:02:57AM -0700 Organization: interactive investor Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On Wed, Mar 25, 1998 at 09:02:57AM -0700, Sean Kelly wrote: > The only nits I have to pick are comprised of punctuation errors and > typos: On the `docproj' page, the second paragraph uses "it's" when it > should be "its". (The paragraph after that one gets it right.) > > On the `current' page, the third paragraph should read "whose" instead > of "who's". Noted. I'll fix them this evening. > On the `sgml' page, why is the emphasis for `not' in the fourth > paragpraph rendered as ``*not*'' instead of using italics or bold? Sorry 'bout that. The content of those files was originally one long e-mail that I sent out to someone a day or so ago. I thought I'd caught all of those. > On the `submitting' page, change "how" in the third paragraph (``You > should probably...'') to "who". Damn. Thought I'd got those ones as well. All noted. Thanks for the feedback so far folks. N -- Work: nik@iii.co.uk | FreeBSD + Perl + Apache Rest: nik@nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk | Remind me again why we need Play: nik@freebsd.org | Microsoft? To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message