From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Feb 15 21:34:49 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D6835106564A for ; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 21:34:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from perrin@apotheon.com) Received: from oproxy4-pub.bluehost.com (oproxy4.bluehost.com [IPv6:2605:dc00:100:2::a4]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 73D738FC08 for ; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 21:34:49 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 10937 invoked by uid 0); 15 Feb 2012 21:34:49 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO box543.bluehost.com) (74.220.219.143) by cpoproxy1.bluehost.com with SMTP; 15 Feb 2012 21:34:49 -0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=apotheon.com; s=default; h=In-Reply-To:Content-Type:MIME-Version:References:Message-ID:Subject:To:From:Date; bh=GT8pFiO4wtkFOrISy74lSljYsv5j9al9oHWIn2KoqbU=; b=QsJN3vinzjQWpJTu5oVhHrX2kkdBr/cAzEgRagCAe0OP0Jmuu6sww2Xc0Nb6lYFvfmaa/S27IAVu16cyS70Suk8QoCFnvLXy+gx9g6vgY3NV+Hb5bH1ChzUUtTO4t0W4; Received: from c-24-8-180-234.hsd1.co.comcast.net ([24.8.180.234] helo=localhost) by box543.bluehost.com with esmtpsa (TLSv1:AES128-SHA:128) (Exim 4.76) (envelope-from ) id 1RxmUy-0005B6-HP for freebsd-doc@freebsd.org; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 14:34:48 -0700 Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2012 14:34:48 -0700 From: Chad Perrin To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Message-ID: <20120215213448.GA29817@hemlock.hydra> References: <20120215040311.GB1862@glenbarber.us> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20120215040311.GB1862@glenbarber.us> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) X-Identified-User: {2737:box543.bluehost.com:apotheon:apotheon.com} {sentby:smtp auth 24.8.180.234 authed with perrin@apotheon.com} Subject: Re: CfR: config chapter changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2012 21:34:49 -0000 On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 11:03:11PM -0500, Glen Barber wrote: > On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 10:36:19PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote: > > > > + Because of the system crontab, there is usually no need to > > + create a user crontab for root. > > "Because of the system crontab" is something I'm not fond of. I'd > prefer "Since the system crontab effectively invokes the specified > commands as root..." or something. Not a nit directly about your patch; > I wasn't fond of the original version. I'm not crazy about using a time-ordering term ("since") as a synonym for a term indicating causality ("because"). How about "Because the system crontab effectively invokes . . ." ? -- Chad Perrin [ original content licensed OWL: http://owl.apotheon.org ]