From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Aug 29 05:28:04 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0FC5116A4E9 for ; Tue, 29 Aug 2006 05:28:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Received: from igloo.linux.gr (igloo.linux.gr [62.1.205.36]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7486343D49 for ; Tue, 29 Aug 2006 05:27:56 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Received: from gothmog.pc (host5.bedc.ondsl.gr [62.103.39.229]) (authenticated bits=128) by igloo.linux.gr (8.13.7/8.13.7/Debian-2) with ESMTP id k7T5Rih0001677 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 29 Aug 2006 08:27:45 +0300 Received: from gothmog.pc (gothmog [127.0.0.1]) by gothmog.pc (8.13.7/8.13.7) with ESMTP id k7T5RvwB013794; Tue, 29 Aug 2006 08:27:58 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Received: (from giorgos@localhost) by gothmog.pc (8.13.7/8.13.7/Submit) id k7T5RvHr013793; Tue, 29 Aug 2006 08:27:57 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from keramida@ceid.upatras.gr) Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2006 08:27:57 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Daniel Gerzo Message-ID: <20060829052757.GB11469@gothmog.pc> References: <200602211640.k1LGe9UD002587@freefall.freebsd.org> <20060828054323.GC1411@gothmog.pc> <1893310735.20060828110758@rulez.sk> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1893310735.20060828110758@rulez.sk> X-Hellug-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-Hellug-MailScanner-SpamCheck: not spam, SpamAssassin (score=-2.844, required 5, autolearn=not spam, AWL -0.25, BAYES_00 -2.60, UNPARSEABLE_RELAY 0.00) X-Hellug-MailScanner-From: keramida@ceid.upatras.gr X-Spam-Status: No Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/93522: [patch] use rc.d script in example describing how to restart mountd in nework-servers chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2006 05:28:04 -0000 On 2006-08-28 11:07, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > Hello Giorgos, > > Monday, August 28, 2006, 7:43:23 AM, you wrote: > > > I think it is better to use either "mountd must be ..." or "The mountd > > daemon must be...", but not what starts the newly added stuff above. > > > The order of the first sentence is slightly untasteful (the result > > (having to restart mountd) precedes its cause (a change in the > > /etc/exports file)). > > > The use of "it" is also a bit confusing. Does "it" refer to mountd or > > to the file? > > HEY, isn't this PR already closed? ;-)) Yes. I mailed out the comments when offline, and then found out (after I had network access again) that they were obsolete anyway. Sorry about that :)