From owner-cvs-all Thu Dec 6 18: 0:27 2001 Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from white.imgsrc.co.jp (ns.imgsrc.co.jp [210.226.20.2]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9004E37B419; Thu, 6 Dec 2001 18:00:24 -0800 (PST) Received: from black.imgsrc.co.jp (black.imgsrc.co.jp [2001:218:422:2:290:27ff:fe98:c0b7]) by white.imgsrc.co.jp (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8DA9D24D1C; Fri, 7 Dec 2001 11:00:23 +0900 (JST) Received: from waterblue.imgsrc.co.jp (waterblue.imgsrc.co.jp [2001:218:422:2:230:48ff:fe41:161b]) by black.imgsrc.co.jp (Postfix) with ESMTP id E6F4FD1401; Fri, 7 Dec 2001 11:00:22 +0900 (JST) Date: Fri, 07 Dec 2001 11:00:11 +0900 Message-ID: <7mwuzzg578.wl@waterblue.imgsrc.co.jp> From: Jun Kuriyama To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/share/man/man7 tuning.7 In-Reply-To: <20011206154216.A94670@colnta.acns.ab.ca> References: <200112061950.fB6JoZS71169@freefall.freebsd.org> <20011206121009.B74685@iguana.aciri.org> <20011206154216.A94670@colnta.acns.ab.ca> User-Agent: Wanderlust/2.6.0 (Twist And Shout) SEMI/1.14.3 (Ushinoya) FLIM/1.14.3 (=?ISO-8859-4?Q?Unebigory=F2mae?=) APEL/10.3 Emacs/21.1 (i386--freebsd) MULE/5.0 (=?ISO-2022-JP?B?GyRCOC1MWhsoQg==?=) MIME-Version: 1.0 (generated by SEMI 1.14.3 - "Ushinoya") Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Sender: owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.ORG At Thu, 6 Dec 2001 15:42:16 -0700, Chad David wrote: > How is something like this? It isn't quite as broken out as it could be, > mostly because I tried to use as much of the original text as possible. > I have fixed a few spelling mistakes etc. but it still needs work. I > did add a litte text around the keepalive section. Yes, please use original text as much as you can. If you mix content change and structure change, translators (man-jp) must proofread through all text. -- Jun Kuriyama // IMG SRC, Inc. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe cvs-all" in the body of the message