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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)
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The following reply was made to PR docs/93014; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)
Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 17:23:52 +0200

 On 2006-02-08 03:56, Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> wrote:
 > In the project model book, I found a few minor nits whilst perusing
 > its contents.
 >
 > One nit is the use of "to" instead of "too" on line 2209 of the source.
 
 > >Fix:
 > --- book.sgml   Wed Feb  8 02:38:24 2006
 > +++ book.sgml.orig      Wed Feb  8 02:38:08 2006
 > @@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@
 >                      stability cannot be sacrificed by self-imposed deadlines and
 >                      target release dates.
 >
 > -                    For slips of time not to become too long with regards to security
 > +                    For slips of time not to become to long with regards to security
 >                      and stability issues,
 >                      extra discipline is required when committing changes to -STABLE.
 
 Hmmm, not really.  The original text is ok.  "too long" refers to the
 length of a time period.  I'm not sure what "to long" would mean here.