From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Feb 10 16:16:40 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8CD3516A42B for ; Fri, 10 Feb 2006 16:16:40 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from wproxy.gmail.com (wproxy.gmail.com [64.233.184.206]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 446D743D48 for ; Fri, 10 Feb 2006 16:16:38 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by wproxy.gmail.com with SMTP id 69so377331wra for ; Fri, 10 Feb 2006 08:16:38 -0800 (PST) DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=beta; d=gmail.com; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:references; b=FZot4Il1P46BjqQHtnOcOkzOKC6/bg6sqJ0S76EmJALQwckKq9gy7514NL3WaFiRWj8nv3zPdNyOxCyoGPhTWAwSYMccruVAe7NIniUXcRW+GRzetqJOd7rCpYQKRGrtN3I5e/phzFZ8gneqn3TvSuK0D7/3Qo0lr7wsNnGK2Xw= Received: by 10.65.157.17 with SMTP id j17mr606573qbo; Fri, 10 Feb 2006 08:16:38 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.65.211.5 with HTTP; Fri, 10 Feb 2006 08:16:37 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <47d0403c0602100816y6f15451coeb1f0e375339d883@mail.gmail.com> Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 10:16:37 -0600 From: Ben Kaduk To: Daniel Gerzo In-Reply-To: <1942942743.20060210164259@rulez.sk> MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <200602101530.k1AFUEtr095055@freefall.freebsd.org> <1942942743.20060210164259@rulez.sk> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Disposition: inline X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.5 Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, Giorgos Keramidas Subject: Re: Re[2]: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 16:16:40 -0000 On 2/10/06, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > Halo Giorgos, > > Friday, February 10, 2006, 4:30:14 PM, si tukal: > > > The following reply was made to PR docs/93014; it has been noted by > GNATS. > > > From: Giorgos Keramidas > > To: Ben Kaduk > > Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org > > Subject: Re: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book > (dev-model) > > Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 17:23:52 +0200 > > > On 2006-02-08 03:56, Ben Kaduk wrote: > >> In the project model book, I found a few minor nits whilst perusing > >> its contents. > >> > >> One nit is the use of "to" instead of "too" on line 2209 of the source= . > > > >> >Fix: > >> --- book.sgml Wed Feb 8 02:38:24 2006 > >> +++ book.sgml.orig Wed Feb 8 02:38:08 2006 > >> @@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@ > >> stability cannot be sacrificed by self-imposed > deadlines and > >> target release dates. > >> > >> - For slips of time not to become too long with > regards to security > >> + For slips of time not to become to long with > regards to security > >> and stability issues, > >> extra discipline is required when committing > changes to -STABLE. > > > > Hmmm, not really. The original text is ok. "too long" refers to the > > length of a time period. I'm not sure what "to long" would mean here. > > > > looks okay to me too. I guess I should apologize -- I made this diff hastily, and put the arguments in the wrong order -- the original text has "to long," I am proposing to change it to "too long". Unless I'm misunderstanding you= , here. Ben Kaduk -- > Cheers, > Daniel Gerzo > > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >