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From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@FreeBSD.org>
To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>, Xin LI <delphij@FreeBSD.org>,
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/audit
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On Sat, Aug 13, 2005 at 11:30:01AM +0100, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Sat, Aug 13, 2005 at 10:26:04AM +0000, Xin LI wrote:
> > delphij     2005-08-13 10:26:04 UTC
> > 
> >   FreeBSD doc repository
> > 
> >   Modified files:
> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/audit chapter.sgml 
> >   Log:
> >    - cron(8) would read the /etc/crontab once it was changed, so mention
> >      this.
> 
> > | @@ -523,8 +523,8 @@ audit:fc:no</programlisting>
> > |  
> > |        <programlisting>*     */12       *       *       *       root    /usr/sbin/audit -n</programlisting>
> > |  
> > | -      <para>Remember to reinstall the <filename>crontab</filename>
> > | -        file.  Otherwise the rotation will never occur.</para>
> > | +      <para>The change will take effect once you have saved the
> > | +	<filename>/etc/crontab</filename>.</para>
> 
> I would prefer either of
> 
>   "The change will take effect once you have saved the
>    new /etc/crontab"
> 
>   "The change will take effect one you have saved
>    /etc/crontab"

I agree.  That way is more accurate.


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