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>Number:         35387
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Just fixing two minor typos
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 27 15:00:06 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Bob Van Valzah
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	

>Description:

	Typos: I meant to type "stripe" and "strip" came out.
	I meant to type "mount_msdos" and just "mount" came out.

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:
	
cd /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vinum
*** article.sgml.orig	Wed Feb 27 16:31:32 2002
--- article.sgml	Wed Feb 27 16:32:10 2002
***************
*** 173,179 ****
  	Both organizations are useful for spreading I/O requests across
  	spindles since plexes reside on distinct spindles.
  	A striped plex will switch spindles each time a multiple of the
! 	strip size is reached.
  	A concatenated plex will switch spindles only when the end of
  	a subdisk is reached.</para>
  
--- 173,179 ----
  	Both organizations are useful for spreading I/O requests across
  	spindles since plexes reside on distinct spindles.
  	A striped plex will switch spindles each time a multiple of the
! 	stripe size is reached.
  	A concatenated plex will switch spindles only when the end of
  	a subdisk is reached.</para>
  
***************
*** 1023,1029 ****
  
  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdformat -f 1440 /dev/fd0</userinput>
  &prompt.root; <userinput>newfs_msdos -f 1440 /dev/fd0</userinput>
! &prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/fd0 /mnt</userinput>
  &prompt.root; <userinput>cp /usr/share/examples/vinum/bootvinum /mnt</userinput></screen>
  
  	  <para>XXX Someday, I would like this script to live in
--- 1023,1029 ----
  
  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdformat -f 1440 /dev/fd0</userinput>
  &prompt.root; <userinput>newfs_msdos -f 1440 /dev/fd0</userinput>
! &prompt.root; <userinput>mount_msdos /dev/fd0 /mnt</userinput>
  &prompt.root; <userinput>cp /usr/share/examples/vinum/bootvinum /mnt</userinput></screen>
  
  	  <para>XXX Someday, I would like this script to live in
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
 Bob Van Valzah

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