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hello documentation team,


i have a point about the command sequence at the beginning of the above 
mentioned chapter. i think it would be clearer to write something like 
"on bsd systems older than 6.0 please use cd /etc before make 
distribution" or something like that. i was confused about note [1] 
because the first time i've read this i thought that the whole make 
distribution step should/could be ommitted.

anyway thanks for your time and the very good handbook!


cheers,
fabian