From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri May 16 12:39:05 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6B0D337B401; Fri, 16 May 2003 12:39:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: from perrin.int.nxad.com (internal.ext.nxad.com [69.1.70.251]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A2C1C43F93; Fri, 16 May 2003 12:39:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from hmp@perrin.int.nxad.com) Received: by perrin.int.nxad.com (Postfix, from userid 1072) id 5E5C52105F; Fri, 16 May 2003 12:39:02 -0700 (PDT) Date: Fri, 16 May 2003 12:39:02 -0700 From: Hiten Pandya To: "Bruce A. Mah" Message-ID: <20030516193902.GA32275@perrin.int.nxad.com> References: <200305161127.h4GBR0QJ013946@freefall.freebsd.org> <20030516114541.26131d4f.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030516175320.GA91137@intruder.bmah.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20030516175320.GA91137@intruder.bmah.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4i X-Operating-System: FreeBSD FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE cc: Tom Rhodes cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/39214: No my(4) man page X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 16 May 2003 19:39:05 -0000 --+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Fri, May 16, 2003 at 10:53:20AM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote: [Tom wrote:] > > Need more review? Note, mii(4) does not exist, its miibus(4), which > > I wrote and added to the tree a couple of months ago. >=20 > I'll jump in with a few nitpicks. :-p >=20 > The correspondence between "DEC Tulip NIC chipset" and the dc(4) > driver in the cross-references is not clear. >=20 > The supported models are not sentences, and therefore should not end > with full-stops. >=20 > In the HISTORY section, you should say that the my driver *first* > appeared in FreeBSD 4.6. >=20 > The AUTHORS section could probably be better worded as "The my driver > was written by Myson Technologies." If you (hmp) want to give > yourself credit for the manpage, that's acceptable here. >=20 > I'd also try to turn the BUGS section into a complete sentence. >=20 > Bruce. >=20 > PS. Yes, I always sign my name in email as though it were a sentence. > So sue me. :-) Thanks guys! I have updated the manual page accordingly. I was thinking about the NetBSD mii(4) for a second there, but now I am back to the real world. 8-) Once I get a go ahead from re@ and my mentor (des), I will commit it. I have already got approval from Julian, who imported the driver in the first place. Cheers! -- Hiten (hmp@FreeBSD.ORG) --+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iD8DBQE+xT5VVBcFDV2wzvIRAkfpAKCFUL4JTfbYgSzXSqAOeQQ6N5TsfQCgjVkk xp0Gg8YCs0pIFzwb2LXJapY= =bO+r -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI--