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Date:      Mon, 6 May 2013 11:53:22 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject:   svn commit: r41554 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install
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Author: dru
Date: Mon May  6 11:53:22 2013
New Revision: 41554
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41554

Log:
  First pass to cleanup this chapter:
  
  - &os; and "you"
  
  - dir tags and some (not all) acronyms
  
  - fixes broken URLs, grammos, typos, outdated info
  
  - removes 3.13.5 which assumes a boot floppy
  
  - removes references to deprecated utilities partition magic,
   xcopy, fdimage, doublespace
  
  - removes unrecommended tip in Q&A
  
  - removes 3.13.3 as floppies were covered earlier for pc98
  
  Approved by:  bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml

Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml	Mon May  6 11:34:28 2013	(r41553)
+++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml	Mon May  6 11:53:22 2013	(r41554)
@@ -27,39 +27,40 @@
     <!-- January 2000 -->
   </chapterinfo>
 
-  <title>Installing &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable> and Earlier</title>
+  <title>Installing &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable></title>
 
   <sect1 id="install-synopsis">
     <title>Synopsis</title>
 
     <indexterm><primary>installation</primary></indexterm>
 
-    <para>FreeBSD is provided with a text-based, easy to use installation
+    <para>&os; provides a text-based, easy to use installation
       program.  &os; 9.0-RELEASE and later use the installation program
-      known as <application>bsdinstall</application>, with releases prior
-      to 9.0-RELEASE using <application>sysinstall</application> for
-      installation.  This chapter describes the use of <application>sysinstall</application>
-      to install &os;.  The use of <application>bsdinstall</application>
+      known as &man.bsdinstall.8;
+      while &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable> uses
+      &man.sysinstall.8;.  This chapter describes
+      how to use &man.sysinstall.8;.
+      The use of &man.bsdinstall.8;
       is covered in <xref linkend="bsdinstall"/>.</para>
 
     <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to create the FreeBSD installation disks.</para>
+	<para>How to create the &os; installation media.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How FreeBSD refers to, and subdivides, your hard disks.</para>
+	<para>How &os; refers to and subdivides hard disks.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to start <application>sysinstall</application>.</para>
+	<para>How to start &man.sysinstall.8;.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>The questions <application>sysinstall</application> will ask
-	  you, what they mean, and how to answer them.</para>
+	<para>The questions &man.sysinstall.8; asks,
+	  what they mean, and how to answer them.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -68,19 +69,18 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Read the supported hardware list that shipped with the version
-	  of FreeBSD you are installing, and verify that your hardware is
+	  of &os; to install, and verify that the system's hardware is
 	  supported.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <note>
       <para>In general, these installation instructions are written
-	for &i386; (<quote>PC compatible</quote>) architecture
-	computers.  Where applicable, instructions specific to other
-	platforms will be listed.  Although this
-	guide is kept as up to date as possible, you may find minor
-	differences between the installer and what is shown here.  It is
-	suggested that you use this chapter as a general guide rather
+	for the &i386; and &os;/&arch.amd64; architectures.
+	Where applicable, instructions specific to other
+	platforms will be listed.  There may be minor
+	differences between the installer and what is shown here.
+	This chapter should be used as a general guide rather
 	than a literal installation manual.</para>
     </note>
 
@@ -96,23 +96,24 @@
 	&os; version and the hardware architecture.</para>
 
       <para>A summary of this information is given in the following sections.
-	Depending on the method you choose to install &os;, you may
-	also need a floppy drive, a supported CDROM drive, and in some
-	case a network adapter.  This will be covered by the <xref
-	linkend="install-boot-media"/>.</para>
+	Depending on the method chosen to install &os;,
+	a floppy drive, CDROM drive, or
+	network adapter may be needed.  Instructions on how to
+	prepare the installation media can be found in
+	<xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>.</para>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>&os;/&arch.i386; and &os;/&arch.pc98;</title>
 
 	<para>Both &os;/&arch.i386; and &os;/&arch.pc98; require a 486 or
-	  better processor and at least 24&nbsp;MB of RAM.  You will
-	  need at least 150&nbsp;MB of free hard drive space for the
+	  better processor, at least 24&nbsp;MB of RAM, and at
+	  least 150&nbsp;MB of free hard drive space for the
 	  most minimal installation.</para>
 
 	<note>
-	  <para>In case of old configurations, most of time, getting
-	    more RAM and more hard drive space is more important than
-	    getting a faster processor.</para>
+	  <para>In the case of older hardware, installing more RAM and
+	    more hard drive space is often more important than
+	    a faster processor.</para>
 	</note>
       </sect3>
 
@@ -122,33 +123,32 @@
 	<para>There are two classes of processors capable of running
 	  &os;/&arch.amd64;.  The first are AMD64 processors,
 	  including the &amd.athlon;64,
-	  &amd.athlon;64-FX, &amd.opteron; or better
+	  &amd.athlon;64-FX, and &amd.opteron; or better
 	  processors.</para>
 
-	<para>The second class of processors that can use
-	  &os;/&arch.amd64; includes those using the &intel; EM64T
+	<para>The second class of processors
+	  includes those using the &intel; EM64T
 	  architecture.  Examples of these processors include the
 	  &intel;&nbsp;&core;&nbsp;2 Duo, Quad, Extreme processor
 	  families, and the &intel;&nbsp;&xeon; 3000, 5000, and 7000
 	  sequences of processors.</para>
 
-	<para>If you have a machine based on an nVidia nForce3
-	  Pro-150, you <emphasis>must</emphasis> use the BIOS setup to
-	  disable the IO APIC.  If you do not have an option to do
-	  this, you will likely have to disable ACPI instead.  There
-	  are bugs in the Pro-150 chipset that we have not found a
-	  workaround for yet.</para>
+	<para>If the machine is based on an nVidia nForce3
+	  Pro-150, the BIOS setup <emphasis>must</emphasis> be used to
+	  disable the IO APIC.  If this option does not exist,
+	  disable ACPI instead as there
+	  are bugs in the Pro-150 chipset.</para>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>&os;/&arch.sparc64;</title>
 
-	<para>To install &os;/&arch.sparc64;, you will need a supported
+	<para>To install &os;/&arch.sparc64;, use a supported
 	  platform (see <xref
 	  linkend="install-hardware-supported"/>).</para>
 
-	<para>You will need a dedicated disk for &os;/&arch.sparc64;.  It
-	  is not possible to share a disk with another operating
+	<para>A dedicated disk is needed for &os;/&arch.sparc64; as
+	  it is not possible to share a disk with another operating
 	  system at this time.</para>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>
@@ -159,14 +159,14 @@
       <para>A list of supported hardware is provided with each &os;
 	release in the &os; Hardware Notes.  This document can usually
 	be found in a file named <filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>, in
-	the top-level directory of a CDROM or FTP distribution or in
-	<application>sysinstall</application>'s documentation menu.
-	It lists, for a given architecture, what hardware devices are
+	the top-level directory of a CDROM or FTP distribution, or in
+	&man.sysinstall.8;'s documentation menu.
+	It lists, for a given architecture, which hardware devices are
 	known to be supported by each release of &os;.  Copies of the
 	supported hardware list for various releases and architectures
 	can also be found on the <ulink
 	url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release
-	Information</ulink> page of the &os; Web site.</para>
+	Information</ulink> page of the &os; website.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -174,28 +174,35 @@
     <title>Pre-installation Tasks</title>
 
     <sect2 id="install-inventory">
-      <title>Inventory Your Computer</title>
+      <title>Inventory the Computer</title>
 
-      <para>Before installing &os; you should attempt to inventory the
-	components in your computer.  The &os; installation routines will
-	show you the components (hard disks, network cards, CDROM drives, and
-	so forth) with their model number and manufacturer.  &os; will also
+      <para>Before installing &os; it is recommended to inventory the
+	components in the computer.  The &os; installation routines
+	will show components such as hard disks, network cards,
+	and CDROM drives with their model number and manufacturer.
+	&os; will also
 	attempt to determine the correct configuration for these devices,
-	which includes information about IRQ and IO port usage.  Due to the
-	vagaries of PC hardware this process is not always completely
-	successful, and you may need to correct &os;'s determination of
-	your configuration.</para>
-
-      <para>If you already have another operating system installed, such as
-	&windows; or Linux, it is a good idea to use the facilities provided
-	by those operating systems to see how your hardware is already
-	configured.  If you are not sure what settings an expansion
-	card is using, you may find it printed on the card itself.  Popular IRQ
-	numbers are 3, 5, and 7, and IO port addresses are normally written as
-	hexadecimal numbers, such as 0x330.</para>
+	including information about IRQ and I/O port usage.  Due
+	to the
+	vagaries of computer hardware, this process is not always
+	completely
+	successful, and &os; may need some manual
+	configuration.</para>
 
-      <para>We recommend you print or write down this information before
-	installing &os;.  It may help to use a table, like this:</para>
+      <para>If another operating system is already installed,
+	use the facilities provided
+	by that operating systems to view the hardware configuration.
+	If the settings of an expansion
+	card are not obvious, check if they are printed on the
+	card itself.  Popular IRQ
+	numbers are 3, 5, and 7, and I/O port addresses are normally
+	written as
+	hexadecimal numbers, such as <literal>0x330</literal>.</para>
+
+      <para>It is recommended to print or write down this information
+	before
+	installing &os;.  It may help to use a table, as seen in this
+	example:</para>
 
       <table pgwide="1" frame="none">
 	<title>Sample Device Inventory</title>
@@ -211,7 +218,7 @@
 
 	      <entry>IRQ</entry>
 
-	      <entry>IO port(s)</entry>
+	      <entry>I/O port(s)</entry>
 
 	      <entry>Notes</entry>
 	    </row>
@@ -285,43 +292,44 @@
 	</tgroup>
       </table>
 
-      <para>Once the inventory of the components in your computer is
-	done, you have to check if they match the hardware
-	requirements of the &os; release you want to install.</para>
+      <para>Once the inventory of the components in the computer is
+	complete, check if it matches the hardware
+	requirements of the &os; release to install.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Backup Your Data</title>
+      <title>Make a Backup</title>
 
-      <para>If the computer you will be installing &os; on contains
-	valuable data, then ensure you have it backed up, and that you have
-	tested the backups before installing &os;.  The &os;
-	installation routine will prompt you before writing any
-	data to your disk, but once that process has started it cannot be
+      <para>If the computer contains
+	valuable data, ensure it is backed up, and that the backup
+	has been
+	tested before installing &os;.  The &os;
+	installer will prompt before writing any
+	data to disk, but once that process has started, it cannot be
 	undone.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="install-where">
       <title>Decide Where to Install &os;</title>
 
-      <para>If you want &os; to use your entire hard disk, then there is nothing
-	more to concern yourself with at this point &mdash; you can skip this
+      <para>If &os; is to be installed on the entire hard disk,
+	skip this
 	section.</para>
 
-      <para>However, if you need &os; to co-exist with other operating
-	systems then you need to have a rough understanding of how data is
-	laid out on the disk, and how this affects you.</para>
+      <para>However, if &os; will co-exist with other operating
+	systems, a rough understanding of how data is
+	laid out on the disk is useful.</para>
 
       <sect3 id="install-where-i386">
 	<title>Disk Layouts for &os;/&arch.i386;</title>
 
-      <para>A PC disk can be divided into discrete chunks.  These chunks are
-	called <firstterm>partitions</firstterm>. Since
-	&os; internally also has partitions, the naming
-	can become confusing very quickly, therefore these
-	disk chunks are referred to as disk slices or simply slices
-	in &os; itself.  For example, the &os; utility
-	<command>fdisk</command> which operates on the PC disk partitions,
+      <para>A PC disk can be divided into discrete chunks known as
+	<firstterm>partitions</firstterm>. Since
+	&os; also has partitions, naming
+	can quickly become confusing.  Therefore, these
+	disk chunks are referred to as slices
+	in &os;.  For example, the &os; version of
+	&man.fdisk.8;
 	refers to slices instead of partitions.  By design, the PC only
 	supports four partitions per disk.  These partitions are called
 	<firstterm>primary partitions</firstterm>.  To work around this
@@ -335,74 +343,71 @@
 	a number used to identify the type of data on the partition.  &os;
 	partitions have the partition ID of <literal>165</literal>.</para>
 
-      <para>In general, each operating system that you use will identify
-	partitions in a particular way.  For example, &ms-dos;, and its
-	descendants, like &windows;, assign each primary and logical partition a
+      <para>In general, each operating system will identify
+	partitions in a particular way.  For example,
+	&windows;, assigns each primary and logical partition a
 	<firstterm>drive letter</firstterm>, starting with
 	<devicename>C:</devicename>.</para>
 
-      <para>&os; must be installed into a primary partition.  &os; can
-	keep all its data, including any files that you create, on this one
-	partition.  However, if you have multiple disks, then you can create a
-	&os; partition on all, or some, of them.  When you install &os;,
-	you must have one partition available.  This might be a blank
-	partition that you have prepared, or it might be an existing partition
-	that contains data that you no longer care about.</para>
-
-      <para>If you are already using all the partitions on all your disks, then
-	you will have to free one of them for &os; using the tools
-	provided by the other operating systems you use (e.g.,
-	<command>fdisk</command> on &ms-dos; or &windows;).</para>
-
-      <para>If you have a spare partition then you can use that.  However, you
-	may need to shrink one or more of your existing partitions
-	first.</para>
+      <para>&os; must be installed into a primary partition.  If
+	there are multiple disks, a &os;
+	partition can be created
+	on all, or some, of them.  When &os; is installed, at least
+	one partition must be available.  This might be a blank
+	partition or it might be an existing partition whose
+	data can be overwritten.</para>
+
+      <para>If all the partitions on all the disks are in use,
+	free one of them for &os; using the tools
+	provided by an existing operating system, such as &windows;
+	<command>fdisk</command>.</para>
+
+      <para>If there is a spare partition, use that.  If it is too
+	small,
+	shrink one or more existing partitions to create more
+	available space.</para>
 
       <para>A minimal installation of &os; takes as little as 100&nbsp;MB
 	of disk
 	space.  However, that is a <emphasis>very</emphasis> minimal install,
-	leaving almost no space for your own files.  A more realistic minimum
+	leaving almost no space for files.  A more realistic minimum
 	is 250&nbsp;MB without a graphical environment, and 350&nbsp;MB or
-	more if you
-	want a graphical user interface.  If you intend to install a lot of
-	third-party software as well, then you will need more space.</para>
-
-      <para>You can use a commercial tool such as <application>&partitionmagic;</application>,
-	or a free tool such as <application>GParted</application>,
-	to resize your partitions and make space for
-	&os;.  Both
-	<application>&partitionmagic;</application> and
-	<application>GParted</application> are known to work on
-	<acronym>NTFS</acronym>.  <application>GParted</application>
-	is available on a number of Live CD Linux distributions, such as
-	<ulink url="http://www.sysresccd.org/">SystemRescueCD</ulink>.</para>;
-
-      <para>Problems have been reported resizing &microsoft; Vista
-	partitions.  Having a Vista installation CDROM handy when
-	attempting such an operation is recommended.  As with all
-	such disk maintenance tasks, a current set of backups is
-	also strongly advised.</para>
+	more for
+	a graphical user interface.  If other
+	third-party software will be installed,
+	even more space is needed.</para>
+
+      <para>Use a tool such as <ulink
+	  url="http://gparted.sourceforge.net/">GParted</ulink>;
+	to resize the partitions and make space for
+	&os;.  When resizing &microsoft; partitions, having a
+	&windows; installation disc handy is recommended.  As with all
+	disk maintenance tasks, a current set of backups is also
+	strongly advised.</para>
 
       <warning>
-	<para>Incorrect use of these tools can delete the data on your disk.
-	  Be sure that you have recent, working backups before using
-	  them.</para>
+	<para>Incorrect use of a shrinking tool can delete the data
+	  on the disk.
+	  Always have a recent, working backup before using this
+	  type of tool.</para>
       </warning>
 
       <example>
 	<title>Using an Existing Partition Unchanged</title>
 
-	<para>Suppose that you have a computer with a single 4&nbsp;GB disk
+	<para>Consider a computer with a single 4&nbsp;GB disk
 	  that
-	  already has a version of &windows; installed, and you have split the
-	  disk into two drive letters, <devicename>C:</devicename> and
+	  already has a version of &windows; installed, where the
+	  disk has been split into two drive letters,
+	  <devicename>C:</devicename> and
 	  <devicename>D:</devicename>, each of which is 2&nbsp;GB in size.
-	  You have 1&nbsp;GB of data on <devicename>C:</devicename>, and
+	  There is 1&nbsp;GB of data on <devicename>C:</devicename>,
+	  and
 	  0.5&nbsp;GB of data on
 	  <devicename>D:</devicename>.</para>
 
-	<para>This means that your disk has two partitions on it, one per
-	  drive letter.  You can copy all your existing data from
+	<para>This disk has two partitions, one per
+	  drive letter.  Copy all existing data from
 	  <devicename>D:</devicename> to <devicename>C:</devicename>, which
 	  will free up the second partition, ready for &os;.</para>
       </example>
@@ -410,25 +415,28 @@
       <example>
 	<title>Shrinking an Existing Partition</title>
 
-	<para>Suppose that you have a computer with a single 4&nbsp;GB disk
-	  that already has a version of &windows; installed.  When you installed
-	  &windows; you created one large partition, giving you a
-	  <devicename>C:</devicename> drive that is 4&nbsp;GB in size.  You are
-	  currently using 1.5&nbsp;GB of space, and want &os; to have 2&nbsp;GB
+	<para>Consider a computer with a single 4&nbsp;GB disk
+	  that already has a version of &windows; installed.  When
+	  &windows; was installed, it created one large partition,
+	  a
+	  <devicename>C:</devicename> drive that is 4&nbsp;GB in size.
+	  Currently, 1.5&nbsp;GB of space is used, and &os; should
+	  have 2&nbsp;GB
 	  of space.</para>
 
-	<para>In order to install &os; you will need to either:</para>
+	<para>In order to install &os;, either:</para>
 
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Backup your &windows; data, and then reinstall &windows;,
+	    <para>Backup the &windows; data and then reinstall
+	      &windows;,
 	      asking for a 2&nbsp;GB partition at install time.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Use one of the tools such as <application>&partitionmagic;</application>,
-	      described above, to shrink your &windows;
-		partition.</para>
+	    <para>Use a tool
+	      to shrink the &windows;
+	      partition.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</orderedlist>
       </example>
@@ -437,21 +445,24 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Collect Your Network Configuration Details</title>
+      <title>Collect the Network Configuration Details</title>
 
-      <para>If you intend to connect to a network as part of your &os;
-	installation (for example, if you will be installing from an FTP
+      <para>Before
+	installing from an FTP
 	site or an
-	NFS server), then you need to know your network configuration.  You
-	will be prompted for this information during the installation so that
-	&os; can connect to the network to complete the install.</para>
+	<acronym>NFS</acronym> server, make note of the network
+	configuration.  The
+	installer
+	will prompt for this information so that
+	it can connect to the network to complete the
+	installation.</para>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Connecting to an Ethernet Network or Cable/DSL Modem</title>
 
-	<para>If you connect to an Ethernet network, or you have an Internet
-	  connection using an Ethernet adapter via cable or DSL, then you will
-	  need the following information:</para>
+	<para>If using an Ethernet network or an Internet
+	  connection using an Ethernet adapter via cable or DSL, the
+	  following information is needed:</para>
 
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
@@ -475,32 +486,35 @@
 	  </listitem>
 	</orderedlist>
 
-	<para>If you do not know this information, then ask your system
-	  administrator or service provider.  They may say that this
-	  information is assigned automatically, using
-	  <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm>.  If so, make a note of this.</para>
+	<para>If this information is unknown, ask the system
+	  administrator or service provider.  Make note if this
+	  information is assigned automatically using
+	  <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm>.</para>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Connecting Using a Modem</title>
 
-	<para>If you dial up to an ISP using a regular modem then you can
-	  still install &os; over the Internet, it will just take a very
+	<para>If using a dialup modem,
+	  &os; can still be installed over the Internet, it will just
+	  take a very
 	  long time.</para>
 
 	<para>You will need to know:</para>
 
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>The phone number to dial for your ISP</para>
+	    <para>The phone number to dial the Internet Service
+	      Provider (<acronym>ISP</acronym>)</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>The COM: port your modem is connected to</para>
+	    <para>The COM: port the modem is connected to</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>The username and password for your ISP account</para>
+	    <para>The username and password for the
+	      <acronym>ISP</acronym> account</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</orderedlist>
       </sect3>
@@ -508,28 +522,30 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Check for &os; Errata</title>
 
-      <para>Although the &os; project strives to ensure that each release
+      <para>Although the &os; Project strives to ensure that each
+	release
 	of &os; is as stable as possible, bugs do occasionally creep into
-	the process.  On very rare occasions those bugs affect the
+	the process.  On rare occasions those bugs affect the
 	installation process.  As these problems are discovered and fixed, they
 	are noted in the <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html">&os; Errata</ulink>,
-	which is found on the &os; web site.  You
-	should check the errata before installing to make sure that there are
-	no late-breaking problems which you should be aware of.</para>
+	which is found on the &os; website.
+	Check the errata before installing to make sure that there are
+	no late-breaking problems to be aware of.</para>
 
-      <para>Information about all the releases, including the errata for each
+      <para>Information about all releases, including the errata for
+	each
 	release, can be found on the
 	<ulink
 	url="&url.base;/releases/index.html">release
 	information</ulink> section of the
 	<ulink
-	  url="&url.base;/index.html">&os; web site</ulink>.</para>
+	  url="&url.base;/index.html">&os; website</ulink>.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Obtain the &os; Installation Files</title>
 
-      <para>The &os; installation process can install &os; from files
+      <para>The &os; installer can install &os; from files
 	located in any of the following places:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
@@ -548,11 +564,7 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A SCSI or QIC tape</para>
-	</listitem>
-
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>Floppy disks</para>
+	  <para>Floppy disks (&os;/&arch.pc98; only)</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -560,8 +572,8 @@
 	<title>Network</title>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>An FTP site, going through a firewall, or using an HTTP proxy,
-	    as necessary</para>
+	  <para>An FTP site through a firewall or using an HTTP
+	    proxy</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
@@ -573,14 +585,14 @@
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>If you have purchased &os; on CD or DVD then you already have
-	everything you need, and should proceed to the next section
-	(<xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>).</para>
+      <para>If installing from a purchased &os; CD/DVD,
+	skip ahead to
+	<xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>.</para>
 
-      <para>If you have not obtained the &os; installation files you should
+      <para>To obtain the &os; installation files,
 	skip ahead to <xref linkend="install-diff-media"/> which explains how
-	to prepare to install &os; from any of the above.  After reading
-	that section, you should come back here, and read on to
+	to prepare the installation media.  After reading
+	that section, come back here and read on to
 	<xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>.</para>
     </sect2>
 
@@ -588,18 +600,19 @@
       <title>Prepare the Boot Media</title>
 
       <para>The &os; installation process is started by booting the
-	computer into the &os; installer&mdash;it is not a program you run
+	computer into the &os; installer.  It is not a program that
+	can be run
 	within another operating system.  The computer normally boots
 	using the operating system installed on the hard disk, but it
 	can also be configured to boot from a CDROM or from a USB
 	disk.</para>
 
       <tip>
-	<para>If you have &os; on CDROM or DVD (either one you purchased
-	  or you prepared yourself), and your computer allows you to boot from
-	  the CDROM or DVD (typically a BIOS option called <quote>Boot
-	    Order</quote> or similar), then you can skip this section.  The
-	  &os; CDROM and DVD images are bootable and can be used to install
+	<para>If installing from a CD/DVD to a
+	  computer whose BIOS supports booting from
+	  the CD/DVD, skip this section.  The
+	  &os; CD/DVD images are bootable and can be used to
+	  install
 	  &os; without any other special preparation.</para>
       </tip>
 
@@ -611,36 +624,38 @@
 	  <title>Acquire the Memory Stick Image</title>
 
 	  <para>Memory stick images for
-	    &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable> and earlier can be downloaded from
+	    &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>X</replaceable> can be downloaded
+	    from
 	    the <filename class="directory">ISO-IMAGES/</filename>
 	    directory at
 	    <literal>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/ISO-IMAGES/<replaceable>version</replaceable>/&os;-<replaceable>version</replaceable>-RELEASE-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-memstick.img</literal>.
 	    Replace <replaceable>arch</replaceable> and
 	    <replaceable>version</replaceable> with the
-	    architecture and the version number which you want to
-	    install, respectively.  For example, the memory stick
+	    architecture and the version number to
+	    install.  For example, the memory stick
 	    images for &os;/&arch.i386;&nbsp;&rel2.current;-RELEASE are
 	    available from <ulink
 	      url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/&arch.i386;/ISO-IMAGES/&rel2.current;/&os;-&rel2.current;-RELEASE-&arch.i386;-memstick.img"></ulink>.</para>;
 
 	  <tip>
 	    <para>A different directory path is used for
-	      &os;&nbsp;9.0-RELEASE and later versions.  Details of
-	      download and installation of &os;&nbsp;9.0-RELEASE and
-	      later is covered in <xref linkend="bsdinstall"/>.</para>
+	      &os;&nbsp;9.0-RELEASE and later versions.  How to
+	      download and install
+	      &os;&nbsp;9.<replaceable>X</replaceable>
+	      is covered in <xref linkend="bsdinstall"/>.</para>
 	  </tip>
 
 	  <para>The memory stick image has a <filename>.img</filename>
 	    extension.  The <filename
 	    class="directory">ISO-IMAGES/</filename> directory
-	    contains a number of different images, and the one you
-	    will need to use will depend on the version of &os; you
-	    are installing, and in some cases, the hardware you are
-	    installing to.</para>
+	    contains a number of different images and the one to
+	    use depends on the version of &os; and the
+	    type of media supported by the hardware being installed
+	    to.</para>
 
 	  <important>
 	    <para>Before proceeding, <emphasis>back up</emphasis> the
-	      data you currently have on your USB stick, as this
+	      data on the USB stick, as this
 	      procedure will <emphasis>erase</emphasis> it.</para>
 	  </important>
 	</step>
@@ -653,29 +668,32 @@
 
 	    <warning>
 	      <para>The example below
-		lists <filename class="devicefile">/dev/da0</filename> as the
-		target device where the image will be written. Be very careful
-		that you have the correct device as the output target, or you
-		may destroy your existing data.</para>
+		uses <filename class="devicefile">/dev/da0</filename>
+		as the
+		target device where the image will be written.  Be
+		<emphasis>very</emphasis> careful
+		to use the correct device as the output target, as
+		the data on that device will be destroyed.</para>
 	    </warning>
 
 	    <step>
 	      <title>Writing the Image with &man.dd.1;</title>
 
 	      <para>The <filename>.img</filename> file
-		is <emphasis>not</emphasis> a regular file you copy to the
+		is <emphasis>not</emphasis> a regular file that can
+		just be copied to the
 		memory stick.  It is an image of the complete contents of the
-		disk.  This means that you <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> simply
-		copy files from one disk to another.  Instead, you must use
-		&man.dd.1; to write the image directly to the disk:</para>
+		disk.  This means that
+		&man.dd.1; must be used to write the image directly to
+		the disk:</para>
 
 	      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dd if=&os;-&rel2.current;-RELEASE-&arch.i386;-memstick.img of=/dev/<replaceable>da0</replaceable> bs=64k</userinput></screen>
 
 	      <para>If an
 		<computeroutput>Operation not permitted</computeroutput>
 		error is displayed, make certain that the target device
-		is not in use, mounted, or being automounted by some
-		well-intentioned utility program.  Then try
+		is not in use, mounted, or being automounted by
+		another program.  Then try
 		again.</para>
 	    </step>
 	  </procedure>
@@ -684,8 +702,10 @@
 	    <title>Using &windows; To Write the Image</title>
 
 	    <warning>
-	      <para>Make sure you use the correct drive letter as the output
-		target, or you may overwrite and destroy existing data.</para>
+	      <para>Make sure to use the correct drive letter as the
+		output
+		target, as this command will overwrite and destroy
+		any existing data on the specified device.</para>
 	    </warning>
 
 	    <step>
@@ -740,29 +760,32 @@
 	    <literal>kern*</literal>.</para>
 
 	  <important>
-	    <para>Your FTP program must use <emphasis>binary mode</emphasis>
-	      to download these disk images.  Some web browsers have been
-	      known to use <emphasis>text</emphasis> (or
-	      <emphasis>ASCII</emphasis>) mode, which will be apparent if you
-	      cannot boot from the disks.</para>
+	    <para>The FTP program must use <emphasis>binary
+		mode</emphasis>
+	      to download these disk images.  Some web browsers
+	      use <emphasis>text</emphasis> or
+	      <emphasis>ASCII</emphasis> mode, which will be apparent
+	      if
+	      the disks are not bootable.</para>
 	  </important>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
 	  <title>Prepare the Floppy Disks</title>
 
-	  <para>Prepare one floppy disk per image file you had to
-	    download.  It is imperative that these disks are free from
-	    defects.  The easiest way to test this is to format the disks
-	    for yourself.  Do not trust pre-formatted floppies.  The format
+	  <para>Prepare one floppy disk per downloaded image file.
+	    It is imperative that these disks are free from
+	    defects.  The easiest way to test this is to reformat the
+	    disks.
+	    Do not trust pre-formatted floppies.  The format
 	    utility in &windows; will not tell about the presence of
 	    bad blocks, it simply marks them as <quote>bad</quote>
-	    and ignores them.  It is advised that you use brand new
-	    floppies if choosing this installation route.</para>
+	    and ignores them.  It is advised to use brand new
+	    floppies.</para>
 
 	  <important>
-	    <para>If you try to install &os; and the installation
-	      program crashes, freezes, or otherwise misbehaves, one of
+	    <para>If the installer
+	      crashes, freezes, or otherwise misbehaves, one of
 	      the first things to suspect is the floppies.  Write
 	      the floppy image files to new disks and try
 	      again.</para>
@@ -773,47 +796,44 @@
 	  <title>Write the Image Files to the Floppy Disks</title>
 
 	  <para>The <filename>.flp</filename> files are
-	    <emphasis>not</emphasis> regular files you copy to the disk.
+	    <emphasis>not</emphasis> regular files that can be copied
+	    to the disk.
 	    They are images of the complete contents of the
-	    disk.  This means that you <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> simply
-	    copy files from one disk to another.
-	    Instead, you must use specific tools to write the
+	    disk.
+	    Specific tools must be used to write the
 	    images directly to the disk.</para>
 
 	  <indexterm><primary>DOS</primary></indexterm>
-	  <para>If you are creating the floppies on a computer running
-	    &ms-dos; / &windows;, then we provide a tool to do
-	    this called <command>fdimage</command>.</para>
-
-	  <para>If you are using the floppies from the CDROM, and your
-	    CDROM is the <devicename>E:</devicename> drive, then you would
-	    run this:</para>
+	  <para>&os; provides a tool called
+	    <command>rawrite</command> for creating the floppies on a
+	    computer running
+	    &windows;.  This tool can be downloaded from
+	    <literal>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/pc98/<replaceable>;
+	      version</replaceable>-RELEASE/tools/</literal>
+	    on the &os; FTP site.  Download this tool, insert a
+	    floppy, then specify the filename to write to the floppy
+	    drive:</para>
 
-	  <screen><prompt>E:\&gt;</prompt> <userinput>tools\fdimage floppies\boot.flp A:</userinput></screen>
+	  <screen><prompt>C:\&gt;</prompt> <userinput>rawrite boot.flp A:</userinput></screen>
 
 	  <para>Repeat this command for each <filename>.flp</filename>
 	    file, replacing the floppy disk each time, being sure to label
-	    the disks with the name of the file that you copied to them.
-	    Adjust the command line as necessary, depending on where you have
-	    placed the <filename>.flp</filename> files.  If you do not have
-	    the CDROM, then <command>fdimage</command> can be downloaded from
-	    the <ulink
-	    url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/tools/"><filename class="directory">tools</filename>
-	    directory</ulink> on the &os; FTP site.</para>
-
-	  <para>If you are writing the floppies on a &unix; system (such as
-	    another &os; system) you can use the &man.dd.1; command to
-	    write the image files directly to disk.  On &os;, you would
+	    the disks with the name of the file.
+	    Adjust the command line as necessary, depending on where
+	    the <filename>.flp</filename> files are located.</para>
+
+	  <para>When writing the floppies on a &unix;-like system,
+	    such as
+	    another &os; system, use &man.dd.1; to
+	    write the image files directly to disk.  On &os;,
 	    run:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dd if=boot.flp of=/dev/fd0</userinput></screen>
 
 	  <para>On &os;, <filename>/dev/fd0</filename> refers to the
-	    first floppy disk (the <devicename>A:</devicename> drive).
-	    <filename>/dev/fd1</filename> would be the
-	    <devicename>B:</devicename> drive, and so on.  Other &unix;
+	    first floppy disk.  Other &unix;
 	    variants might have different names for the floppy disk
-	    devices, and you will need to check the documentation for the
+	    device, so check the documentation for the
 	    system as necessary.</para>
 	</step>
       </procedure>
@@ -826,8 +846,9 @@
     <title>Starting the Installation</title>
 
     <important>
-      <para>By default, the installation will not make any changes to your
-	disk(s) until you see the following message:</para>
+      <para>By default, the installer will not make any changes to
+	the
+	disk(s) until after the following message:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced">Last Chance: Are you SURE you want continue the installation?
 
@@ -836,10 +857,12 @@ STRONGLY ENCOURAGE YOU TO MAKE PROPER BA
 
 We can take no responsibility for lost disk contents!</literallayout>
 
-      <para>The install can be exited at any time prior to the final
-	warning without changing the contents of the hard drive.  If you are
-	concerned that you have configured something incorrectly you can just
-	turn the computer off before this point, and no damage will be
+      <para>The install can be exited at any time prior to this final
+	warning without changing the contents of the hard drive.  If
+	there is a
+	concern that something is configured incorrectly,
+	turn the computer off before this point, and no damage
+	will be
 	done.</para>
     </important>
 
@@ -851,10 +874,6 @@ We can take no responsibility for lost d
 
       <procedure>
 	<step>
-	  <para>Start with your computer turned off.</para>
-	</step>
-
-	<step>
 	  <para>Turn on the computer.  As it starts it should display an
 	    option to enter the system set up menu, or BIOS, commonly reached
 	    by keys like <keycap>F2</keycap>, <keycap>F10</keycap>,
@@ -863,9 +882,10 @@ We can take no responsibility for lost d
 	      <keycap>Alt</keycap>
 	      <keycap>S</keycap>
 	    </keycombo>.  Use whichever keystroke is indicated on screen.  In
-	    some cases your computer may display a graphic while it starts.
+	    some cases the computer may display a graphic while it
+	    starts.
 	    Typically, pressing <keycap>Esc</keycap> will dismiss the graphic
-	    and allow you to see the necessary messages.</para>
+	    and display the boot messages.</para>
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
@@ -875,11 +895,10 @@ We can take no responsibility for lost d
 	    <literal>Floppy</literal>, <literal>CDROM</literal>,
 	    <literal>First Hard Disk</literal>, and so on.</para>
 
-	  <para>If you are booting from the CDROM then make sure that
-	    the CDROM is selected.  If you are booting from a USB disk or
-	    a floppy disk then
-	    make sure that is selected instead.  In case of doubt, you
-	    should consult the manual that came with your computer, and/or its
+	  <para>If booting from the CD/DVD, make sure that
+	    the CDROM drive is selected.  If booting from a USB disk,
+	    make sure that it is selected instead.  When in doubt,
+	    consult the manual that came with the computer or its
 	    motherboard.</para>
 
 	  <para>Make the change, then save and exit.  The computer should now
@@ -887,12 +906,13 @@ We can take no responsibility for lost d
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>If you prepared a <quote>bootable</quote> USB stick, as described in
-	    <xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>, then plug in your USB
+	  <para>If using a prepared a <quote>bootable</quote> USB
+	    stick, as described in
+	    <xref linkend="install-boot-media"/>, plug in the USB
 	    stick before turning on the computer.</para>
 
-	  <para>If you are booting from CDROM, then you will need to turn on
-	    the computer, and insert the CDROM at the first
+	  <para>If booting from CD/DVD, turn on
+	    the computer, and insert the CD/DVD at the first
 	    opportunity.</para>
 
 	  <note>
@@ -904,32 +924,33 @@ We can take no responsibility for lost d
 	      installer.</para>
 	  </note>
 
-	  <para>If your computer starts up as normal and loads your existing
+	  <para>If the computer starts up as normal and loads the
+	    existing
 	    operating system, then either:</para>
 
 	  <orderedlist>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>The disks were not inserted early enough in the boot
-		process.  Leave them in, and try restarting your
+		process.  Leave them in, and try restarting the
 		computer.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>The BIOS changes earlier did not work correctly.  You
-		should redo that step until you get the right option.</para>
+	      <para>The BIOS changes did not work correctly.
+		Redo that step until the right option is
+		selected.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>Your particular BIOS does not support booting from
+	      <para>That particular BIOS does not support booting from
 		the desired media.</para>
 	    </listitem>
 	</orderedlist>
 	</step>
 

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