Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2008 08:51:52 +0100 (CET) From: "Remko Lodder" <remko@elvandar.org> To: "Murray Stokely" <murray@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: www/en index.xsl Message-ID: <a9c80e0402782bf3aae6fa5a3736fb9e.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org> In-Reply-To: <200812310400.mBV40Tgh020523@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200812310400.mBV40Tgh020523@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Wed, December 31, 2008 5:00 am, Murray Stokely wrote: > murray 2008-12-31 04:00:29 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en index.xsl > Log: > Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org. > > We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why > FreeBSD is relevant and interesting. Spending half of the paragraph > listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is > not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD > (to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms). > > Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to > entice users to click through to more of the second level pages: > FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer > platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some > of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over > 30 years of continuous development, etc.. > > Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of > the Handbook. > > Reviewed by: marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn) > Hey Murray! Thanks!! This does sound very cool! -- /"\ Best regards, | remko@FreeBSD.org \ / Remko Lodder | remko@EFnet X http://www.evilcoder.org/ | / \ ASCII Ribbon Campaign | Against HTML Mail and News
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