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Date:      Wed, 10 Sep 2003 11:08:24 -0400
From:      Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
Cc:        FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: Pre-commit review requested
Message-ID:  <20030910110824.6caa54e4.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <20030908223058.GD19937@unixpages.org>
References:  <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030908223058.GD19937@unixpages.org>

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On Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:30:59 +0200
Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org> wrote:

> On Mon, Sep 08, 2003 at 02:22:54PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > Any -doc committer want to review the following patch.  It is by no
> > way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one
> > step further toward my goal of a good security chapter.
> > 
> > This diff:
> > 
> > o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required.
> > o Uses the &os; entity.
> > o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what
> >   version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release.
> > o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerberos5.
> > 
> > I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rather
> > not bounce this around for the next three days.  Thanks!
> > 
> 
> [patch]
> 
> Looks good to me.
> 

Yes, it looks good.  But there is a problem, it breaks.  Notice the
unclosed tags which I neglected, but my make lint pre-commit test
actually caught that.  :)

-- 
Tom Rhodes



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