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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org>
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On 2007-11-26 00:36, Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org> wrote:
> danger      2007-11-26 00:36:40 UTC
>
>   FreeBSD src repository (doc committer)
>
>   Modified files:
>     sbin/ipfw            ipfw.8
>   Log:
>   Polish this manual page a bit:

We should "varnish" it a bit next, me thinks :-)

>   - refer to the dummynet(4) man page only once, later use rather
>     the .Nm macro.
>   - use .Va macro when refering to the sysctl variables
>   - grammar and markup fixes
>
>   Reviewed by:    keramida, trhodes, ru (roughly)
>   MFC-after:      1 week

Daniel, thanks for doing all the hard work parts of the changes, and
being patient enough with my reviews :)