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Date:      Tue, 7 Nov 2006 14:32:44 -0500
From:      Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
Cc:        danger@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: cvs commit: www/en about.sgml
Message-ID:  <20061107143244.3cea8fc0.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net>
References:  <200611071654.kA7GsWbj097708@repoman.freebsd.org> <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net>

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On Tue, 7 Nov 2006 18:55:52 +0000
Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote:

> On Tue, Nov 07, 2006 at 04:54:31PM +0000, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> > danger      2006-11-07 16:54:31 UTC
> > 
> >   FreeBSD doc repository
> > 
> >   Modified files:
> >     en                   about.sgml 
> >   Log:
> >   - improve grammar
> 
> 
> > | @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
> > |  			including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape,
> > |  			an MS-DOS&reg; partition, or if you have a network
> > |  			connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over
> > | -			anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is
> > | +			anonymous FTP or NFS.  All you need are
> > |  			<a
> > |  			  href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these
> > |  			directions</a>.</p>
> 
> This change isn't correct - "these directions" is the object of this
> sentence and the verb "is" should agree with the subject "all you need",
> which is singular.
> 
> See sections 5.23 and 5.24 of the CMS.

You're right, I didn't think well enough here.

-- 
Tom Rhodes



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