Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2015 19:43:49 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-releng@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r286295 - releng/10.2/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes Message-ID: <201508041943.t74JhnH5069674@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Tue Aug 4 19:43:48 2015 New Revision: 286295 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/286295 Log: Cleanup pass through the relnotes file: - Reword a few entries for consistency throughout the document. - Remove the 'role="arm"' from the arm-specific section, as it is redundant. - s/&man.geom.4;/GEOM/ in a title, because it looks ridiculous. Approved by: re (implicit) Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: releng/10.2/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: releng/10.2/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- releng/10.2/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Tue Aug 4 19:04:02 2015 (r286294) +++ releng/10.2/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Tue Aug 4 19:43:48 2015 (r286295) @@ -194,9 +194,9 @@ has been fixed.</para> <para revision="281161" contrib="sponsor" - sponsor="&limelight;">A new flag, <literal>-R</literal>, has - been added to the &man.netstat.8; utility, which is used to - dump <acronym>RSS</acronym>/flow information.</para> + sponsor="&limelight;">The &man.netstat.8; utility has been + updated to include a new flag, <literal>-R</literal>, which is + used to dump <acronym>RSS</acronym>/flow information.</para> <para revision="281936" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The &man.ar.1; utility has been updated to set @@ -230,9 +230,10 @@ compatibility with the <acronym>GNU</acronym> &man.date.1; utility behavior.</para> - <para revision="284523">A new flag, <literal>-c</literal>, has - been added to the &man.mkimg.1; utility, which allows - specifying the capacity of the target disk image.</para> + <para revision="284523">The &man.mkimg.1; utility has been + updated to include a new flag, <literal>-c</literal>, which + allows specifying the capacity of the target disk + image.</para> <para revision="285092">The &man.pw.8; utility has been updated with a new flag, <literal>-R</literal>, that sets the root @@ -613,16 +614,15 @@ <sect2 xml:id="hardware-arm"> <title>ARM Support</title> - <para revision="278079" arch="arm">Support to turn off the - BeagleBone Black system with the &man.shutdown.8; - <literal>-p</literal> flag or by invoking &man.poweroff.8; has - been added.</para> + <para revision="278079">Support to turn off the BeagleBone Black + system with the &man.shutdown.8; <literal>-p</literal> flag or + by invoking &man.poweroff.8; has been added.</para> - <para revision="278599" arch="arm">Support for the Exynos 5420 - Octa system has been added.</para> + <para revision="278599">Support for the Exynos 5420 Octa system + has been added.</para> - <para revision="278599" arch="arm">The <acronym>SMP</acronym> - option has been enabled for all Exynos 5 systems supported by + <para revision="278599">The <acronym>SMP</acronym> option has + been enabled for all Exynos 5 systems supported by &os;.</para> <para revision="278608">The <literal>bcm2835_cpufreq</literal> @@ -630,11 +630,11 @@ frequency and voltage control on the Raspberry Pi <acronym>SOC</acronym>.</para> - <para revision="283500" arch="arm">Support for the Toradex - Apalis i.MX6 development board has been added.</para> + <para revision="283500">Support for the Toradex Apalis i.MX6 + development board has been added.</para> - <para revision="283500" arch="arm">Audio transmission drivers - have been added for Digital Audio Multiplexer + <para revision="283500">Audio transmission drivers have been + added for Digital Audio Multiplexer (<acronym>AUDMUXM</acronym>), Smart Direct Memory Access Controller (<acronym>SDMA</acronym>), and Syncronous Serial Interface (<acronym>SSI</acronym>).</para> @@ -684,10 +684,11 @@ targets and portals without requiring active discovery.</para> - <para revision="275249" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">Support + <para revision="275249" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The + &man.mount.nfs.8; utility has been updated to include support for the <literal>timeo</literal>, <literal>actimeo</literal>, - <literal>noac</literal>, and <literal>proto</literal> options - have been added to &man.mount.nfs.8;.</para> + <literal>noac</literal>, and <literal>proto</literal> + options.</para> </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="storage-zfs"> @@ -707,7 +708,7 @@ </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="storage-geom"> - <title>&man.geom.4;</title> + <title>GEOM</title> <para revision="275891" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The &man.ctl.4; subsystem has been updated, increasing the ports @@ -715,10 +716,11 @@ and <acronym>LUN</acronym> limit from <literal>256</literal> to <literal>1024</literal>.</para> - <para revision="282861">Support for the + <para revision="282861">The &man.gpart.8; utility has been + updated to include support for the <literal>apple-boot</literal>, <literal>apple-hfs</literal>, and <literal>apple-ufs</literal> <acronym>MBR</acronym> - partitioning schemes have been added to &man.gpart.8;.</para> + partitioning schemes.</para> </sect2> </sect1>
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