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Subject: svn commit: r42531 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng
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Author: gjb
Date: Sun Aug 11 16:06:46 2013
New Revision: 42531
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42531

Log:
  Minor wordsmithing.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Aug 11 16:03:16 2013	(r42530)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.xml	Sun Aug 11 16:06:46 2013	(r42531)
@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@
 
     <para>Sixty days before the anticipated release, the source
       repository enters a <quote>code freeze</quote>.  During this
-      time, all commits to the -STABLE branch must be approved by the
-      &a.re;, the approval process is technically enforced by the
+      time, all commits to the -STABLE branch must be approved by
+      &a.re;.  The approval process is technically enforced by a
       pre-commit hook.  The kinds of changes that are allowed during
       this period include:</para>