From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jan 6 04:48:17 2005 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6EFAD16A4D3; Thu, 6 Jan 2005 04:48:17 +0000 (GMT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1345343D2D; Thu, 6 Jan 2005 04:48:17 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j064mGR3076694; Thu, 6 Jan 2005 04:48:16 GMT (envelope-from keramida@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from keramida@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j064mG7x076693; Thu, 6 Jan 2005 04:48:16 GMT (envelope-from keramida) Message-Id: <200501060448.j064mG7x076693@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Giorgos Keramidas Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2005 04:48:16 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 06 Jan 2005 04:48:17 -0000 keramida 2005-01-06 04:48:16 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml Log: English wording tweak: Avoid using "for instance" where an 'instance' of a general concept is not described. Revision Changes Path 1.677 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml