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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers
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jkois       2010-07-23 12:48:37 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  PR:     docs/147812
  
  Improve wording in section "29.4.4.2.3 Setting up a NIS Slave Server" and make the paragraph about "automatic NIS map update on slave
  server" easier to read/understand.
  
  Original patch provided by:     Simon Wright (diver06 att gmx dott net)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.124     +8 -7      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml