From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 1 19:48:13 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9D50E106564A for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 19:48:13 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from cpetservice@gmail.com) Received: from mail-qa0-f47.google.com (mail-qa0-f47.google.com [209.85.216.47]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4DB1D8FC12 for ; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 19:48:13 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-qa0-f47.google.com with SMTP id i29so2164885qaf.13 for ; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 12:48:12 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=WeuICm1pwMGJpEBIRUG9ScUvjvKL3JflsrsPDzzF+P0=; b=BLOIDWi/vW5k06gqv+O3VilSEciQz+w50f5jqvN632WHR3JEq/TC6ohjpH3g7c//nr 3nfDxcOylMxleBsuiHVyy9EczA0bmAWq1hd7UlrrOGE8VMLm5wDKK16h9Ps9+GTKXj1J PWOZmAPLwEMbog0rRqYsrm79k3hXsCpZyiRm2rbWZ9eN1o83r+l97CBF90/D71cf9Atm kc/Jjz31hMOHZ5m2LAp+p8eM/7NKpQTL8zqegB2iOi66pTrZlrFDc7nBJTyOPwyrAu9A wglT88REI8as8Ito7gFfpBoIY1R2xl9aO/ZoSs3LncvoguTjHY1ItF13ZllF5N21CbCH jIww== MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.49.63.104 with SMTP id f8mr739231qes.29.1349120892437; Mon, 01 Oct 2012 12:48:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.49.132.6 with HTTP; Mon, 1 Oct 2012 12:48:12 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 14:48:12 -0500 Message-ID: From: Cpet Services To: Eitan Adler Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.5 Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Oct 2012 19:48:13 -0000 Thank you for the tips. On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services wrote: > > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at > > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html > > General comments: > > This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but > are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or > giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing > document, not a technical one. > > Specific comments: > ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than > 10 years now ;) > "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a > feature? > Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge > of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? > Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make > this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* > the headers were links to handbook pages. > > I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. > > > And tell me what you think of it. > > Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on > the website! I hope that your work makes it in. > > Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? > > -- > Eitan Adler > -- -------------------------------------------------------- Chris Petrik FreeBSD Contributor Reincarnated cpet on irc